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SaJan-SaJan Goldie
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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 8:03am | IP Logged
nice update...
was dat 4 real??? neil coming at their house n doing all dat stuff...
plz cont soon...
thnx 4 d pm..

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GulaabiAakhein.

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Joined: 04 April 2010
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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Very Nice Update MANJARi.Everything is here....morning Tea, Lunch, Dinner, Ice-Cream Winkand NEIL's scary entryConfused.Neil's entry is just like dream seq.,I hope aisa hi hoWink. I am very exited. Ok,No more boring Reply...Direct come to the Point.

My Rating- Star Star Star Star Star/5 Thumbs Up


-S O H A M.



Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 15 February 2011 at 8:06am

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:24am | IP Logged
the whole update was superb....
just loved it....but the end part was damn scary....neil was holding gunjan by her hair....he is a big jerk to hurt gunjan like this....samrat must be feeling very bad....he is really a very sweet guy.....
can't wait to know what is the next part u have stored in.....
please continue this ff whenever u get time.....all the best for your exams!!

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GulaabiAakhein.

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
gr8888 update

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
y u r afraid dear???
have told u na experiments make a person perfect
u were rockingggggggg
 
ok
firstlyyyyy
u dedicated it to me
m i dreaming???
ok thnxxxxxxxxxx
now will give u ideas daily ROFL
*hugggggggggggg* lov u for this
 
ok
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee
amazinggggggggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
extra rockinggggggggggg
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
mind blowingggggggggg
rockinggggggggggggggg
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
and so on
 
ok
u know what this ss or ff whatever it is
is really innocent n simple yet classy
really tht was the story i wanna read ever =)
have read many but yet ur writting style made it different
 
ok coming towards the update
loving the way u r writting the character sketches
really the feelings of them for each other
truly justified =)
u r handling the story really really well
great job
*thmbs uppppp*
 
all the scenes u have written were extra cuteee
sajan were rockingggggggggg
the ice cream scene awwwww
really outstandingggggggg
 
or kya bolon???
ok coming to the last scenes
yeah in the whole update
was wondering where the horror is???
n there is no sign of it too
i guess she will finish at that point
ok the situations u have tried to explain was no doubt a bit scary
well doneeeeeeeeee
n one more thing
have not read the comments of others
but in my view
if u do write something different it will defo work
but again i dont know the mentality of ur readers
whether thy can digest anything except romance or not
but i literally can
n for me u wite it more cutely thn romance =)
me loved it completelyyyyyyyyyyy
but its not fair to end it here
atleast u should tell was tht a dream
it should i know
but still wanna hear this from u Lolz
 
do update soooooooooooooooon
wanna read more
as its really bad point to end it =(
n u will update sfter exams
best of luck for exams

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Hey manjari luv d updt.
it ws awsm,superb.
excellent job dear.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
all d best for ur xamz.
luv u
vritika

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Really fab update manjari...
tried horror first time and passed with distinction...
must say gr8 job...

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