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itzMYattitude IF-Dazzler
itzMYattitude
itzMYattitude

Joined: 11 September 2009
Posts: 4613

Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
y u r afraid dear???
have told u na experiments make a person perfect
u were rockingggggggg
 
ok
firstlyyyyy
u dedicated it to me
m i dreaming???
ok thnxxxxxxxxxx
now will give u ideas daily ROFL
*hugggggggggggg* lov u for this
 
ok
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee
amazinggggggggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
extra rockinggggggggggg
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
mind blowingggggggggg
rockinggggggggggggggg
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
and so on
 
ok
u know what this ss or ff whatever it is
is really innocent n simple yet classy
really tht was the story i wanna read ever =)
have read many but yet ur writting style made it different
 
ok coming towards the update
loving the way u r writting the character sketches
really the feelings of them for each other
truly justified =)
u r handling the story really really well
great job
*thmbs uppppp*
 
all the scenes u have written were extra cuteee
sajan were rockingggggggggg
the ice cream scene awwwww
really outstandingggggggg
 
or kya bolon???
ok coming to the last scenes
yeah in the whole update
was wondering where the horror is???
n there is no sign of it too
i guess she will finish at that point
ok the situations u have tried to explain was no doubt a bit scary
well doneeeeeeeeee
n one more thing
have not read the comments of others
but in my view
if u do write something different it will defo work
but again i dont know the mentality of ur readers
whether thy can digest anything except romance or not
but i literally can
n for me u wite it more cutely thn romance =)
me loved it completelyyyyyyyyyyy
but its not fair to end it here
atleast u should tell was tht a dream
it should i know
but still wanna hear this from u Lolz
 
do update soooooooooooooooon
wanna read more
as its really bad point to end it =(
n u will update sfter exams
best of luck for exams

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karantakiar Goldie
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Joined: 23 June 2010
Posts: 2303

Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Hey manjari luv d updt.
it ws awsm,superb.
excellent job dear.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
all d best for ur xamz.
luv u
vritika

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Kritianya IF-Dazzler
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Joined: 14 October 2010
Posts: 3967

Posted: 15 February 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Really fab update manjari...
tried horror first time and passed with distinction...
must say gr8 job...

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saniya.x IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
OMG, i thought Neil was nice sweet and calm but boy you completely surprised me with this update! It was really good written Manji well done for that, your first attempt at writing horror right? It was really good!
 
Continue soon(:

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
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preety88 IF-Rockerz
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Posts: 6276

Posted: 15 February 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
wonderful update...samrat is sooo sweet....neils behavior is soo scary....cont soon

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Posts: 16204

Posted: 15 February 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Hey Guys!
Thanks for all the lovely comments! Im jus overwhelmed by your encouragement... Because I hv read my update.. and it suckedd !! but no one told me so.. LOL.. thanks alot..
And the common question..
Was This A Dream OR Reality...!!??
I will answer in My Next Update!
( And that will be before my exams ... Most probably!)
 
Love you!
 

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Hey Manjiri Awesome Update.....Very well written..........U described the Scary part really well........Neil Pulling Gunjan by her hairShocked............But I feel n think this Scary part is JUST a Dream of Gunjan Wink..I Think Gunjan must have gone 2 sleep in the car when sam was driving and must be dreaming all this .........Do Update soon dear after ur exams .......as really Curious to know Whether Am I right or notWink.....................

Thanks 4 pmHug and Good Update...

Love GunjanSmileSmile........................

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