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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

OUTSTANDING Clap
FABULOUS Clap
AMAZING Clap
SUPERB  Clap

ROCKING update MANJARiClap Thumbs Up All scenes was Mind Blowing. Perfect description of every scenes. Flight scene and First night scene was Extra Ordinary. Now,I M speechless. OK.....


My RATING 4 this UPDATE -  Star
/ 5  ((1 Star Cut kiye hain and always karoonga B'coz , I don't want see GUNJAN in 'GREY' shed CharacterOuchLOL))

-S O H A M.

 
Hii Soham! thanks Alot! I was very nervous for this update.. didnt know how it would turn out! Im glad u liked it!
And aww.. gunjan isnt in grey shade.. dont worry! She's just sad.. thats all!

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox11

Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

OUTSTANDING Clap
FABULOUS Clap
AMAZING Clap
SUPERB  Clap

ROCKING update MANJARiClap Thumbs Up All scenes was Mind Blowing. Perfect description of every scenes. Flight scene and First night scene was Extra Ordinary. Now,I M speechless. OK.....


My RATING 4 this UPDATE -  StarStarStarStar
/ 5  ((1 Star Cut kiye hain and always karoonga B'coz , I don't want see GUNJAN in 'GREY' shed CharacterOuchLOL))

-S O H A M.

 
Hii Soham! thanks Alot! I was very nervous for this update.. didnt know how it would turn out! Im glad u liked it!
And aww.. gunjan isnt in grey shade.. dont worry! She's just sad.. thats all!


Its really a Fabulous Part MANJARi. No any chance of CRITICISM. And here,I M talking about Yours Characters Introduction Part , Remember that "Cheat" thing ??Confused And,Frankly speaking I M not OK for that.

-S O H A M.



Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 06 February 2011 at 4:28am

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Originally posted by SajanRox11

Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

OUTSTANDING Clap
FABULOUS Clap
AMAZING Clap
SUPERB  Clap

ROCKING update MANJARiClap Thumbs Up All scenes was Mind Blowing. Perfect description of every scenes. Flight scene and First night scene was Extra Ordinary. Now,I M speechless. OK.....


My RATING 4 this UPDATE -  StarStarStarStar
/ 5  ((1 Star Cut kiye hain and always karoonga B'coz , I don't want see GUNJAN in 'GREY' shed CharacterOuchLOL))

-S O H A M.

 
Hii Soham! thanks Alot! I was very nervous for this update.. didnt know how it would turn out! Im glad u liked it!
And aww.. gunjan isnt in grey shade.. dont worry! She's just sad.. thats all!


Its really a Fabulous Part MANJARi. No any chance of CRITICISM. And here,I M talking about Yours Characters Introduction Part , Remember that "Cheat" thing ??Confused And,Frankly speaking I M not OK for that.

-S O H A M.

 
Yeah I know.. I am planning to change that! And I totally understand... Even I dont think I wanna write that.. lets see.. Most probably will change it!

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox11

Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Originally posted by SajanRox11

Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

OUTSTANDING Clap
FABULOUS Clap
AMAZING Clap
SUPERB  Clap

ROCKING update MANJARiClap Thumbs Up All scenes was Mind Blowing. Perfect description of every scenes. Flight scene and First night scene was Extra Ordinary. Now,I M speechless. OK.....


My RATING 4 this UPDATE -  Star
/ 5  ((1 Star Cut kiye hain and always karoonga B'coz , I don't want see GUNJAN in 'GREY' shed CharacterOuchLOL))

-S O H A M.

 
Hii Soham! thanks Alot! I was very nervous for this update.. didnt know how it would turn out! Im glad u liked it!
And aww.. gunjan isnt in grey shade.. dont worry! She's just sad.. thats all!


Its really a Fabulous Part MANJARi. No any chance of CRITICISM. And here,I M talking about Yours Characters Introduction Part , Remember that "Cheat" thing ??Confused And,Frankly speaking I M not OK for that.

-S O H A M.

 
Yeah I know.. I am planning to change that! And I totally understand... Even I dont think I wanna write that.. lets see.. Most probably will change it!


Oh Thanx !!  Its better. And,I personally believe in this Story Plot U have some many strong scope of Character improvisation and some Extra Ordinary Sequences. So,Do It.   [[OMG!!Shocked V R SpammingLOL]]

-S O H A M.


Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 06 February 2011 at 4:37am

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged

such a nice update

good going
n keep writing

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME PARTT!! LOVEDD ALL THE SCENES...SPECIALLYY THE NIGHT SCENSS..

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Woah Manjari Shocked, i too wasn't expecting that but boy it was hot and i couldn't stop blushing Blushing! You've seriously sent me to lala land with this update Silly, goshh this was just the beginning man!
 
Sam, goshh i love him his soo innocent he loves her sooo muchh yet he can't say it to her! BTW, was Neil even invited to their wedding or he loves to go in and sit on random people's wedding LOL!
 
Anyways Manji, you're going really good continue soon (:

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
hey manjari it was very wonderful update seriously loved it Clap u put new married couple's emotions so well specially when its arrange marriage i loved sajan's pov their new starting of life now can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm Hug

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