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Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Nice part.Smile

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mayur_eternal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Nice update Bushra...Smile

Mayank is so cunning..LOLLOL..hw he acts all indifferent to Gunjan yet gets all info abt Nupur...waiting for Mayur meeting in cllg...

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MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Bushra.. very nice update... loved Mayank-Gunjan convo..
looking forward to the next update

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Alisha2887 Goldie

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update Bushra. Loved it a lot!!
Waiting for Mayur to meet in college Embarrassed
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
tht was soooooooooooooo cool part

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cutiepie12 Goldie

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
oh soo great.....

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mulan. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
aww. bushra!!!!!!! this was soooo cuteee!!!!!!
such a cute bro-sis relation u have portrayed!!!!Smile
i simply  love the dialogues!!!!! Clap
and Mayank is amazing!!! haye!!!!!! Day Dreaming

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged



It was nearly 11.30 pm and Mayank was still sitting online. He didn't realize so much time had passed. He had gone to book shop in the morning to get his books but they were lying on his study table still in the shopping bags. He saw the time and was startled to see it was so late. "I should be getting ready for bed, I have to wake up early in the morning and ye daikho, books bhi nai rakhi abhi tak maine."

He hastily put his laptop away, got up to put everything together that he would need for college the next day and then went to change into his night suit. Coming out of the bathroom, he headed towards the window to draw the curtains. He had just put his hand on the curtain when he saw her.

He had not realized that the window facing his, was of the house that she had moved in. "Nupur" he whispered and thought the name suited her well. He was again caught in the magic of her long hair. Moving around in her room, going in and out of his vision, she was looking even more beautiful in wet hair.


 Nupur was pretty anxious about going to college the next day. She always had difficulty in meeting new people. She wasn't  rude, or proud or reserved as you would call it but she was just not good at making new friends and this was one of the reasons she hated moving so frequently. She came out of the shower still thinking about the day ahead. She, although, was slightly satisfied that she would not be alone on the first day of college. Gunjan, her neighbour, had offered to go with her and she ahd gratefully accepted. 'Gunjan' she thought is a nice girl. Very bubbly, kinda cute__ she smiled and the thought, friendly and TALKATIVE! At this she frowned a little. Gunjan talked too much and this slightly irritated Nupur but her all other good qualities dominated this fact and so Nupur felt that maybe she had a found a good friend in her. At this she again smiled. Towel in hand and engrossed in her thoughts, she moved around her room gathering her stuff__ which was scattered everywhere__ and putting them in proper places. She put the towel on the chair and was about to get in bed when she saw the curtain open.

Nupur: Maa bhi na! pata bhi hai k I keep it closed, phir bhi…

She trailed off murmuring to herself and moved towards the window to draw the curtains. She had just put her hand on the curtain when she saw him.

AND their eyes MET……



He again felt that her eyes had captured him. They were enchanting. Her hair wet and entangled were lying on one shoulder. A gush of cold breeze ruffled her hair and she shivered slightly, and lowered her eyelids. Her hand automatically went in her hair to settle them. She again shivered and looked fragile. She looked up again and slowly closed the curtain.

He was still standing there staring at the closed window as if some force won't let him move. The door to his room opened and he turned. It was Gunjan again. She just put her head inside and said, "I am going with Nupur tomorrow to college so you go on by yourself."

Saying this she left and Mayank, heaving a sigh, got into bed.  


 Although she had set up her alarm clock for 6.30, Nupur woke up at 6:00 am. She had had a restless sleep. She had been waking up again and again throughout the night. Now, she thought, she should get out of bed as sleep was the last thing she expected to get right now due to her increasing anxiousness.

She got up and started getting ready. After about an hour she went into the kitchen to prepare breakfast. Gunjan had told her she'd come around 8:00 so she had ample of time. She had just put all the breakfast down on the table when Kalpana entered.

Kalpana: aaj itni jaldi uth gai Nupur?

Nupur: han Maa! Raat ko sai se neend nahi aayi.

Kalpana: kiun beta? Tabiet toh theek hai na?

Nupur: han Maa! Bas aise he, it was a restless night.

Kalpana: Nupur! Pata hai mujhe. Today you have to go to a new college, bas iss liye tumhe sari raat neend nahi ayi, haina?!

Nupur continued eating with her head down and didn't respond. Kalpana opened her mouth to say something but at that very moment the bell rang. To avoid any more such queries, Nupur got up to open the door. Thankfully, for her, it was Gunjan.

Gunjan: Hello Aunti, Kaisi hain aap?

Kalpana: Hello beta, main theek hun. All set for college, then?

Gunjan: Ofcourse Aunti! Main toh itni excited hun. New college, New atmosphere, New people… I love such things. Change toh hona chahiye thoda warna monotonous life se toh in saan tung ajata hai… main toh pakka ajati hun.

Kalpana: han beta. Thoda iss pagli ko bhi samjhao, k naye logon se milna naye college men jana… change is not all that bad.

Gunjan looked at Nupur and tried to say something but Nupur cut her and said:

"main upar se apna bag le kar aati hun phir humain chalna bhi hai, late horaha hai." And without waiting for a response ran upstairs to get her room and was back in 2 minutes.

Nupur: "chalain?"  she said looking at Gunjan and then turned to her  mom, "Acha Maa! Hum chalte hain. Main Gunjan k saath he laut aoungi, tum aram se kaam per jao.

Kalpana: "Acha theek hai. Best of Luck for your first day. Dehaan se jaana or mujhe phone zaroor kar daina k tum kis time tak lauto gi aur keys Mrs. Sharma se lai laina.

Nupur: theek hai.
She said as they both left the house.

Please do comment to let me know how am I doing. Embarrassed

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