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MN - Enchanted Love (Page 27)

.SA. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
loved it.

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prerna_agrawal Goldie

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
awesome update but very short!!... :(..... plzz do update soon and a longer part...... really excited to read ahead!!!....... :)

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valliyah Goldie

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
update soon please............!!!
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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged

Hey guys! here I am with my next part... hope you all like it... sorry if i disappoint you.

valiyah27 happy to know that you so eagerly wait for my updates and I am sorry to keep you waiting.

Part 10:

Nupur ran downstairs and opened the door.. fixing her dupatta, she started.."Gunjan main kab se.."    she looked up and stopped right there.


Mayank couldn't breathe. She was dressed in red with her hair open. He was just stearing at her when the car's horn was heard. He turned to look gunjan who was indicating for them to hurry up! Mayank turned around.


Nupur moved forward and mayank moved aside to let her pass offering his hand. Nupur looked up once met his eyes and put her hand in his without giving it a second thought.


Samrat was anxiously waiting for gunjan. As the car stopped, he sighed with relif and moved forward to meet them.


Mayank was standing with jay and other friends, but his thoughts and eyes were constantly following nupur. She looked like a princess, an angel.

Nupur was aware of his eyes following her and he was making her conscious. Her heartbeat was so fast, she could feel it thumping against her chest samrat and gunjan were dancing. Mayank's friends had also moved away with their partners.

They both were standing alone.


Dil ibadat kar raha hai

Dharkanain meri sun

Tujhko mein kar lun hasil

Lagi hai yehi dhun


Music started, nupur was avoiding eye contact with mayank so she was looking here and there when he offered his hand to her once again. She again looked up. He was smiling. She noticed his dimple, her heart skipped a beat.

He was asking her to dance and she once again placed her hand in his  without a second thought. It was as of happening naturally.


Dil ibadat kar raha hai

Dharkanain meri sun

Tujh ko mein kar lun hasil

Lagi hai yehi dhun


He pulled her closer. Placing his one hand on her waist, they started swaying together. She hesitated for a moment, then placed her hand on his shoulder.


Zindagi ki shakh se

Lun kuch haseen pal mein chun

Tujh ko mein kar lun hasil

Lagi hai yehi dhun


He twirled her once, twice, and pulled her closer again, this time with a force. She collided with his chest and the force of her hand was such that he wouldn't let her move away.


Jo bhi jitney pal jeon

Unhay teray sang jeoun

Jo bhi kal ho ab mera

Usay teray sang jeoun


She released her head on his shoulder, her arms encircling his neck now. He has now placed both his hands on her waist.


Jo bhi saansain main bharoun

Unhe teray sang chalun


She wasn't feeling awkward with him now. They were unaware of anyone else. She could feel his breath on her neck, which was making her feel shy now. She had started to blush, closing her eyes.


Dil ibadat kar raha hai

Dharkanain meri sun

Tujh ko mein kar lun hasil

Lagi hai yehi dhun


The song had ended and they had not realized it. The loud cheer of the crowd made them come back to reality. Mayank let her go and nupur took a few steps back. She could feel her cheeks turning red so she turned away.

"nupur" his voice stopped her. She didn't turned.

She felt him moving close to her and he whispered in her ear

" You are beautiful"


Saying this he took a few steps back and she walked away. He had touched the strings of her heart and it was playing a new tune. Unknown to her, one she had never heard it play before, and she was enjoying it and dancing along it..

Plz do comment to let me know your views. Embarrassed

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crazymayurian IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
and am dancing here lovedddddddddd it

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kirti123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
wow really so sweet romantic simple and beautiful
loved it 
please continue soon
thanks for the pmSmile

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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
oh wow! that was so dreamy Day Dreaming Day Dreaming..i love the song and the dance was very mesmerizing, beautiful, and the ending made my heart skip a beat, literally! *sigh* ..

lovely and cont. soon..

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Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
tht was sooooooo niceeeeeeee

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