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MN - Enchanted Love (Page 20)

ginny09 Goldie

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:10am | IP Logged
wow !!!!!!!!!!
nice part well written convo :D
love gunjan chac toooooooo 
thanks fr the pm :D

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--Ruchi-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
wowww bushi...nice partClap
loved the shayri....thanx for pmSmile

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.SA. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
loved the update BushraTongue.waiting for next part.thanx for the pm.

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love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Plz update n add me in ur pm list........

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o....o Senior Member

Joined: 03 December 2010
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged

hello friends!!!!!!!!!! HugHug

sorry for suddenly disappearing !!! i wrote this part ages ago but  i wasnt feeling well and thn exams caught me up  (pretty off guard too! Shocked ) so i couldnt update !!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

hope u all like this!! please do coment to let me ur views!!!!!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

                                           PART 8

There was a huge crowd in front of the main notice board. Gunjan and nupur stopped to look what was the subject of attention. When they got a chance to see, both of their eyes opened wide in surprise. The notice was about the upcoming dance on valentine's eve, the next day.


Samrat was sitting in the cafeteria. He was alone and deep in thoughts. There was this strange expression on his face and the twining and untwining of his fingers indicated his anxiousness. He was definitely planning something as his lips were moving. It seemed he was rehearsing for an act.


Gunjan stood there watching him very closely. Something serious was going on in his mind but what was it she couldn't figure out. She waved her hand in front his. Once, twice, thrice but each time he would just blink, still engrossed in his thoughts. So she…..


Samrat: ah!!!!

 He said after receiving a blow to his head.

Gunjan: pagal ho gaye ho kya? Ya nashe main ho??!!! Kab se yahan khari tmhari aankhon kay samne hath hila rai hun!!!!


Nupur just stood there laughing. He mood had, after many days lightened. Although, she hadn't realized it but it was due to her new born friendship with mayank a few days ago.


Samrat: oh…wo…main…actually…tumm….

Gunjan: kya bol rahay ho?? Pagal tou nahi ho gai ho!!


Samrat shook his head as if to gain consciousness..


Samrat: kuch nai!! Ao baitho. Aaj tum late kyun aye ho?


Gunjan: Samrat! Tumhey sach mein kuch ho gaya ha. I don't knw what lakin aj tum both weird act kr rai ho. Ghar pe sab theek ha na?

Samrat: han kyun? Is main kya weird ha, mein bas ye pucha ha k tum late kyun aye ho

Gunjan: main bilkul time pe aye hun, balke tum aj subah subah uth k mujh se pehle clg pohanchay huay ho!!


She said pointedly. Samrat looked at his watch and his eyes opened wide in astonishment. He opened his mouth to say sth thn closed again. He took a deep breath

\samrat: tum se kuch puchna ha. Naraz tou nai ho gi?

Gunjan was about to say something sarcastic but seeing samrat's mental stage, changed her mind. She really wantd to know what was up with him..


Gunjan: nahi hoti naraz, bolo?

Samrat: main ye puchna chaa raha tha…wo kya tum…mera matlab ha mein tumhay…I wantd to ask k tum ne notice board dekha??

Gunjan couldn't believe her ears and now at last she was sure of one thing and that was..


Gunjan: SAMRAT SHERGILL!!! You have lost it completyely!

She almost shouted. Everyone turned around and startd starring at them. Samrat looked around in embarrassment and gunjan glared.


Gunjan: ye puchna that um ne?

Samrat: nahi! Kya tum pls beth jao gi?

He pulled her down on the chair

Gunjan: phir kya?

Samrat heived a sigh. Collecting all his courage, he decided to ask her once and for all

Samrat: gunjan, would you like to go to the dance with me?

He said as quickly as possible. It took gunjan a while to comprehend this question. She couldn't believe her ears. She felt her hand warming. Then her ears turned red and heat reaching her cheeks.  She looked at nupur, who had an amazed look on her face, and a SMILE!!

Gunjan looked back at samrat who was anxiously waiting for her answer.

Gunjan: yes!

She said without realizing. Samrat jumped from the chair in excitement.

Nupur noticed a change in them from then on. They did not seem uncomfortable with the change in their relationship and nupur found it very cute and adorable.



As they walked home, gunjan talked about samrat only and the dance. Many boys in their class had asked nupur but she had turned them down, saying she wasn't coming.

Gunjan; tum kyun nahi jana chahti?

Nupur; muje ye sab pasand nai.

Gunjan: ye kya baat hui. Nahi! Tume jana paray ga!

Nupur: nahi gunjan! Pls. aur wese bhi ab tou mere paas koi partner bhi nahi hai.

Gunjan: koi baat nahi. Tum haray sath chalna.

Nupur: yeah rite! Samrat is going to kill me.

Gunjan: Kyun? Nahi, he wouldn't mind at all.

Nupur: tume kese pata?

Gunjan: pata ha na. acha. Wait

She pulled out her cell and dialed samrat's number.

Samrat: hey! Wats up sweetheart?

Gunjan: daikho na sam, nupur janay ko tayar nai dance pe.

Samrat: array! Kyun?

Gunjan: coz she turned down all her offers and now she doesn't have a partner.

Samrat: tou is main kya ha, hamaray sath chalay.

Gunjan: daikha!

She said to nupur who had been listening to the convo on loud speaker. Gunjan told samrat about what nupur had said. Samrat laughed and said

Samrat: nupur, my gunjan is never wrong about me.

Gunjan blushed at his show of possesiveness . she then said goodbye and put down the phone.
gunjan finally managed to convince nupur but there was another problem.

 " what are we going to wear??" I don't have anything to wear!!. They said together and laughed.

Gunjan: I have an idea. Lets go to shopping tmrw. Clg tou off ha wese bhi, what say??"


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mulan. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 30 November 2010
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
aww............ this was soooooo cute bushra!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed
samrat and gunjan's change in relationship!!!!!!!! sooo adorable!!!!Day Dreaming
and u expressed the feelings so nicely!!!!!!!!! specially the dialogues were amazinG!!!!!!! LOL i was smiling throughout!!!!!!!!! Big smile
now i m soo excited for the next part so hurry up grl!!!! LOL do write soon!!!!!!

Edited by mulan. - 07 March 2011 at 8:11am

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mayur4evr Groupbie

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:04am | IP Logged
atlast you updated!Smile
cute part...will nupur dance with mayank? eager to read the following part...
update soon...n dont delay the next part like you did for this one...Angry
i'll kill you otherwise....Angry LOL

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Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Nice part.Smile

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