MN - Enchanted Love

hey guys...😃😃

I am bushra, well like the majority of u all , i am an ardent fan of Mayank and nupur, and i really miss them all as hell..and like most of u all, i have also tried too write something about them, in my own way..my FF, Enchanted Love..using the eternal names of Mayank and Nupur..

hope u all like it..

Characters..

Jay: Mayank's Best friend.

INDEX:

Part 1 - Pg. 1

Part 2 - Pg. 3

Part 3 - Pg. 6

Part 4 - Pg. 8

Part 5 - Pg. 11

Part 6 - Pg. 14

Part 7 - Pg. 17

Part 8- Pg. 20

Part 9 - Pg. 24

Part 10 - Pg. 27

Part 11 - Pg. 30

Part 12 - Pg. 33

Part 13 - Pg. 36

Edited by -Bushra- - 13 years ago

PART 1:

Nupur entered her new house. A new beginning___ another new beginning would me more appropriate, and Nupur was not at all happy about it. Her mother entered right behind her, holding three cartons one on top of the other, loaded with their belongings.

 

Mom:  Nupur beta thoda raasta choro warna main gir jaoun gi!

 

Nupur: Maa! Aap bhi na!

(taking the top most carton from her and putting it on one side) Why have we hired all these people agar sara kaam aapne khud karna hai toh!

 

Mom: Beta kya hua hai? Itnay ghussay men kiun ho?

 

Nupur turned around without answering. Her mother knew the answer, so she heaved a sigh and said: Aur agar main bhi thoda samaan laanay main help kar dungi toh kya hojae ga?

 

Nupur: Maa! Phir yeh'..

 

Mom: Nupur! Baad men

 

Nupur knew it was no use arguing, and so went outside to stand in the lawn.

The lawn was in front of the house. It was a small well-kempt lawn, with a carpet of trimmed grass. A two-foot white painted fence surrounded it and a small wooden door opened in the street. She stood on one corner of the lawn, half leaning on the fence, facing the house. Although visible she was watching the movers working, she was lost in her own world.

 

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''.

 

Mayank was walking back home from college. He was about to start his third year of Bachelors and his college was opening in two days. He had gone to college to find out about his courses he would be studying in the next semester. Walking with ease, listening to music on his ipod, his attention was divided between the song he was listening to and the stone he was kicking around along his way. As he neared his house, he stopped walking as his attention was caught by the movers-van standing in front of the house next to his. And then he saw HER.

 

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''..

 

Nupur, got tired of standing facing the house and turned around to face the street. As soon as she turned around, she saw HIM.

 

AND their eyes MET.

Plz do share ur views..😳
Edited by -Bushra- - 13 years ago

ohhh..wow...seems interesting..plz cont soon 😳

Bushraaaaaa....OMG...😲😲..u finally posted ur story!..🤗🤗

THANK U SO MUCH!..finally my hard persuasions in the poetry classes paid off!..😳🤣

ok the story is interesting..new shifting..hmmm..and nupur's seems to be so irritated..just like u..😛🤣..and i loved mayu's description...😍😍

btw the first past is very short!..update soon..and remember..i update daily.😎., being my best friend u have to follow me!..khabradar mera naam kharab kiya toh!..😡🤣

love u sweet!..🤗..cont. soon..🤗
Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago

hey nice concept.......

yayyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bushraaaa u finallyyyyyyyyyyyy updated!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
welcome yar!!!!!! 🤗
as for the story ..HAYE!!!!!!!! 😍
Nupur and her mom's dialogues were really nice and thn thr is our alll timeeesssss favorite Mayank!!!!
beaautifully written yar!!!
please update soon yar!!!
i will be waiting eagerly!!!!!!
dnt act lazy now samajh aye? 🤓

and i agree with kinzu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nupur is soooooo like ...ahem...u !!
(ab mujhe mar pare ge! :p :p)
love u!!!! :)

Wonderful  Start Bushra
loved it

plz do cont it

and yah mehak ki naam roshan karna & daily update karna

ur first part was too short
so we want a longer part next time
keep updating

all the best

nice starting...........cont soon nd send me a pm when u update

nice start dear..pls continue soon............................

loved it....plzz pm  me too...da next part..😊