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MG FF Innocence...LOST note@145 n Link to thread 2 (Page 9)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Shreya  Hug.....Thank u for the update....it was great......waiting to know more of the past.........plz add me to your PM list.....love you.....TC  Smile

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
Just came across this one...Lovely start to the story. I'm very intrigued...please add me to your PM list.
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Recap-Oh God maan has knowingly and unknowingly trapped her.....closed all the doors of her exit.
 
And she knew there was no way of escaping.

        Chapter-4 And then i knew

                          PAST

The one and a half-day of the train journey can actually go down as one of the....no....THE best one and a half day of his life.

It all seemed like a different world altogether...in her company.

A world where he was talking without his famous attitude,smiling,laughing his heart out God knows after how many ages.

A world where he felt at ease,forgetting about his worries,anxieties,business tensions everything even if temporarily

He can safely say that these were the one and a half day where he has actually lived.....lived like a normal human being.

After the journey they both exchanged their numbers.....something which he has never done....giving away his number to a stranger like this.

But this time he didn't know why he didn't think twice this time before giving away his number to a stranger that too a girl!!

She said she was heading towards Hoshiarpur,her home town.So she might not be able to meet him again so they can keep in touch like this texting each other or calling.

She would send him beautiful messages and some incredibly stupid jokes which surprisingly made him laugh.

Sometimes he would get cracked seeing those amidst an important meeting.....shocking everyone.

                      * * * * * * * * 
To add to his miseries she joined his office that too as his secretary.

Maan didn't know her surname or may be he didn't remember that particular part.So he signed her application papers not seeing her name as it was under his thumb while signing only showing the surname ''Handa''.

                    * * * * * * * * *
She again came like a breath of fresh air,a refreshing and welcome change from the same old dresses,short-skirt wearing female crowd in the Khurana Constructions.

Hair tied in a scarf with some loose strands caressing her face and forehead,full-length jeans,loose shirt.....she looked a total misfit in a professional place and looked more like a college-going girl who have lost her way and came here.

Seeing her train-mate as her boss she was more than happy...although her colleagues had some words of advice for this new prey of maan singh khurana....she knew until she is right in her own work she don't have to worry.

                     * * * * * * * * 

And that was the arrival of his......he didn't know what to call it.....end or new begining.

                  In dino...dil mera 
                mujhse hain keh raha,
                tuuuuuuu khwab sajaa
                tuuuuuuu jile zaraaaa
      hain tujhe bhi ijaazat.....karle tu bhi mohabbat
      hain tujhe bhi ijaazat.....karle tu bhi mohabbat (2)

He didn't knew what was happening to him....a new alien feeling arising in him.
He kept calling her in his cabin for every silly reason,every stupid tasks sometimes even giving her jobs which were not meant for her.....just so that he can have his daily fill of his geet more than he can in the limited office hours....wait HIS geet? 

                 berang si hain bari zindagi kuch rang to bharu
                 main apne tanhaai ke vaaste ab kuch to karu
                    aaaah aaaaaaaaaaaaa
                berang si hain bari zindagi kuch rang to bharu
                main apni tanhaai ke vaaste ab kuch to karu
         
                     jab mile thori phursat
                     jab mile thori phursat
                 mujhse karle mohabbat

         hain tujhe bhi ijaazat.....karle tu bhi mohabbat

He still remember her telling in their conversation that her favorite colour is blue.
Out of nowhere he took dev with him to southex for shopping!!! He was giving one shock after another to his family.
''What have happened to him all of a sudden?'' thought a confused dev.
He has never seen his bro trusting someone else with what he will wear....forget trusting he have never cared about his style or clothing not this way.
He buyed himself shirts,t-shirts asking dev every now and then....all in shades of blue ranging from mauve to turquoise.

           usko chupaake main sabse kahin le chalooon kahin door
         aankhon ke pyaalon se pita rahoon uske chehre ka noor 
            aaaaaaahhh  aaaaaaaaaaa
        usko chupake main sabse kahin le chaloon kahin door 
       aankhon ke pyaalon se pita rahoon uske chahre ka noor

       is zamaane se chhupkar....is zamaane se chhupkar 
                      poori karloon main hasrat
              
           Hain tujhe bhi ijaazat karle tu bhi mohabbat.

Something which he has never experienced in all these years,he is feeling all that now-at the age of 27.
''Stop behaving like a love-struck teenager'' he kept telling himself but his heart was nowhere near listening.

And then he knew,he knew it was actually a new begining....a beautiful new begining.

Precap-She saw him

     Love shreya






 

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
awww....maan in love is so cute...especially buying shirts in all shades of blue LOL how adorable!!
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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakadafi

awww....maan in love is so cute...especially buying shirts in all shades of blue LOL how adorable!!
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 12:00am | IP Logged
wow... lovely update.....
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Loved it.... Awesome part...... Perfect song selection.
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
oh my god maan has bcome a love struck teenager but wht about geet

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