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MG FF Innocence...LOST note@145 n Link to thread 2 (Page 31)

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continue soon....................i just love this ff......................i can't get enough of it......................

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waiting for the update
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update soon...dear..
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Recap-She closely looked at his handsome features,his eyes,his firm jawline,his M-shaped lips......she blushed at that.

And he was all hers....only hers.

                      Chapter-11 Torn in between


She slowly hugged him in his sleep just to touch him,feel him once more.

Her hands snaked his back and she buried her face into his chest taking in his masculine smell.

She completely forgot all her tensions,she forgot the fact that she was going to head home two a day later,means tomorrow itself.......the only thing she knew was that she has given away herself to the man she was madly in love with.

A small smile crept up her lips as she remembered last night.

                  Raat ka nasha abhi,aankh se gaya nahin

She hugged him even tighter,kissing his chest this time and going above,kissing him very softly on his face.

                 Raat ka nasha abhi,aankh se gaya nahin
                Tera nashila badan,baahon ne choda nahin
                aankhein toh khole magar,sapna woh toda nahin
                     aa wahin,uhhh wahin
      saanson ne rakha hua tere hothon ka sapna abhi hain wahin

                Hooo raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin
                raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin

She slowly freed him of her hug and very slowly removed his hands from her waist.

She tried to get up twice but failed due to the pain between her legs and her exhaustion.......when finally she got up and covered herself with the spread,heading to the washroom.

                Tere bina bhi kabhi,tujhse machal leti hoon 
                karvat badalti hoon toh sapna badal leti hoon

She turned on the shower,standing beneath.

The water hitting on her skin did nothing to soothe her,rather she felt her skin burning with the contact of the water with her body especially the places where he have marked his claims.

               Tere bina bhi kabhi,tujhse machal leti hoon
               karvat badalti hoon to,sapna badal leti hoon

              tera khayaal aaye toh,balkhake pal jaata hain
              paani ke chaadar tale,tan mera jal jaata hain 

                     haan wahi,uuhhh wahin
    saanson ne rakha hua tere honthon ka sapna abhi hain wahin

             Hooo raat ka nasha abhi,aankh se gaya nahin
             raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin.

She was standing there for god knows how long when suddenly a pair of strong arms encircle her waist and turns her around.

           Tere gale milne ke mausam bare hote hain
           janmon ka vaada koi,yeh gham bare chhote hain

Her eyes widens seeing him smirking at her which instantly turns to embarrassment as they both stood there completely bare under the shower.

Maan sees the embarrassment on her face and wraps her with the towel.He then carries her out of the bathroom.

         Hooo tere gale milne ke mausam bare hote hain
         janmon ka vaada koi,yeh gham bare chhote hain

        lambi si ek raat ho,lamba sa ek din milein
        bas itna sa jeena ho,milan ki ghadi jab milein 

                    haan wahin,bas wahin
    saanson ne rakha hua tere honthon ka sapna abhi hain wahin

             Hooo raat ka nasha abhi,aankh se gaya nahin
             raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin.

He placed her on the bed,coming on top of her and softly kissed her lips this time to begin another passionate love-making session.

                      * * * * * * * * * * 

A faint sound of a ringtone could be heard,ringing somewhere.

Geet fluttered her eyes open.She felt really tired and exhausted to even get up.

After ringing for a long time it stops eventually.

Geet closed her eyes in relief only to be irritated by those rings again.

She somehow managed to get up covering herself with the spread to locate the source of the ringing.

''Home'' the screen of her cell flashed.

That was enough to bring her back to reality.

''Hello'' she nervously managed to say.

                             * * * * * * * * * 

She sat there motionless staring blankly at the cup of coffee.

Maan understood something is bothering her......he didn't want to think that geet might be taking their first night as a mistake.....''no it can't has to be something else''.

''Maan'' she finally broke the silence.

''I have to tell you something''.


''I....I was engaged to someone else before i met you''.

Maan stopped blending the cube of sugar in his coffee and slowly looked at geet who still had her eyes fixed on her cup.

''He is the son of a friend of our family''

''It was decided when we were kids''

''They decided to get us engaged last year as i was going to Mumbai for my studies and he was leaving for Chandigarh.I promised his and my family that i will marry him''.

''That was all until you came into my life and I......I fell in love with you'' she closed her eyes saying that as maan kept his gaze fixed on her.

''The only reason i said yes to daadima's request to find a girl for you because the promise i made held me back and....and i didn't knew that you love me as well''.

''But now that i know what you feel for me,i'm torn between you and my family''.

Maan clenched his jaw.

He was shocked at the revelation.

''You heard it right maan'' a tear threatened to fall off her eyes,''i don't know what i'm going to tell them now''.

Her voice has become shaky now.

''Don't worry geet'' he said in a threatening rather than calming manner ''i know what i have to do'' he mumbled to himself.

''Stop crying'' he now said lovingly looking at her as he kissed off the tear from her cheeks.

Precap- She looked so innocently beautiful he thought and kissed her forehead.

             Love shreya

(Link to the song in a vm on maneet by angadkria4life2

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Edited by shelly_08 - 06 March 2011 at 5:03am

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
amazing update
Wow dat was hot BlushingBlushing
hope geet finds a solution 2 dis dilemma
Wonda wat Maans going 2 du
Cont soon Xx...
Thanks 4 the PM

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Loved the update tx
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:38am | IP Logged
I hope maan to b her fiance 4m childhood bt i thnk he must b not otherwise dadi wouldnt tel geet to find a bride 4 him.
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeee nvr thought of such a sitution 
bt niceeeeeee n waiting as to wt maan is planning

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