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MG FF Innocence...LOST [email protected] n Link to thread 2 (Page 108)

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Posted: 21 August 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
awesome!!!

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Posted: 21 August 2011 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Hi,
I liked ur ff..
the language and d way u weave ur story is diff...
maan's char is also bit mysterious...
wating to know how d story unfolds..
please add me to ur pm list...
 
Anupama

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Posted: 21 August 2011 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Read first 3 parts...
They r like...WOW...amazing.
Let me go read other ones...
I loved the astrology  joke...haha
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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged
fab update
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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
nice update
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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
I read this chapter 20.
Is dis a dark story?
I am not happy with the way Maan is lying to Geet..
Rite now she is pregnant...and her condition is delicate...he needs to be more concerned about her and the baby...
she still has approx 8 -9 months before delivery...and in this time frame if she finds out...the truth...she mite even miscarry.

I m not happy with this Maan at allCry

He knows how much Geet trusts him...more than her life..and yet..the remorse juss scratches his heart and goes away...

Will this Maan change at all?
Is he going to pay for his deeds?

Edited:
I read all the chapters...Chalo I m happy Rajinder's past is revealed...and it sucked that Rhea and the baby had to die...
Maan killed Rajendra out of anger...
I m scared of his obsession of Geet...
he goes wild whn he is with her...whether if it was before marriage or after..
I find this actions, or shud I say sexual acts juss a bit too much.
Is that all he cares about...I mean it starts from there n ends there as well.
Is he not concerened about Geet and her emotions?
Does he not respect and her values and her character?
Too many questions for u.
Please answer them.

Thanks...
Pls. add me to PM


Edited by Water. - 22 August 2011 at 12:54am
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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 12:49am | IP Logged
nice update...
Is it a completely  dark story??????...will he ever  have any remorse for his deed???
eager to know the next part...
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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Water.

I read this chapter 20.
Is dis a dark story?
I am not happy with the way Maan is lying to Geet..
Rite now she is pregnant...and her condition is delicate...he needs to be more concerned about her and the baby...
she still has approx 8 -9 months before delivery...and in this time frame if she finds out...the truth...she mite even miscarry.

I m not happy with this Maan at allCry

He knows how much Geet trusts him...more than her life..and yet..the remorse juss scratches his heart and goes away...

Will this Maan change at all?
Is he going to pay for his deeds?

Edited:
I read all the chapters...Chalo I m happy Rajinder's past is revealed...and it sucked that Rhea and the baby had to die...
Maan killed Rajendra out of anger...
I m scared of his obsession of Geet...
he goes wild whn he is with her...whether if it was before marriage or after..
I find this actions, or shud I say sexual acts juss a bit too much.
Is that all he cares about...I mean it starts from there n ends there as well.
Is he not concerened about Geet and her emotions?
Does he not respect and her values and her character?
Too many questions for u.
Please answer them.

Thanks...
Pls. add me to PM

OOO TERIII...too many questions 2 answer...


Ok so startin with the 1st-YES...this IS a dark story----a very dark one indeed...

Comin 2 MSL's char,well all I can say u is that not all the people on this world are the same...some have their good qualities surpassing the negative traits and vice-versa...and if Maan is like that,there is a VERY strong reason behind that (which will b revealed la8r).


All I can say is that I've made a char who can neither be only hated or loved----same is the case wid geet----may b she's not a murderer,but she has also lied 2 her family-the family who loves her to death and trusts her blindly----this only means that both r at fault!

And yes Maan doesn't kill ppl for money or for fun---he have never claimed a life of an innocent.

Maan-Geet relation---it is complicated...Maan is NOT just physically attracted 2 her-he loves her like hell...if that was the case-he had many opportunities,but he never used them 2 his advantage...


Will he repent? Well...u hav 2 wait and see...

Thank u for ur comments and I really hope I continue 2 entertain u with this ff

Love

Shreya

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