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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 5 (Page 90)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged

THANKS MUSKAN  FOR UPDATING OUR DEEWANGI................... PLZZZZZZZZZ KUCH ACHHA KAR DENA............ N O MORE TWIST IN MAANEET'S LIFE............................ LOVE U FOR THIS

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:59am | IP Logged
mushki pls update soon...i come to my flat for lunch and soon i need to rush to off...!!

then i wont be able to read....so pls do soon dear..!!!

me waiting...!!!

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yaaay i cant wait for the update

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged
let seeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by millii

let seeeeeeeeee


hey how r u dear???

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~deewangi~
part 44

Rajender - lets make it fast, we will pick Geet from her school
Rano tried her level best to stay back..she rushed inside & cried looking at papaji's photo.
Thai ji tried to console her & tell her it was for their own good. She put her hand around her shoulder & supported her. Rano's legs were rooted the ground, she immediately picked the phone & called Maan.
Maan - mama
Brij snatched the phone & slammed it - chachi challo abhi
Rano - main ne kanhi ahi jana
Rajender - Rano where will u stay the new owner will be coming any time to take over the house.
Rano - we will manage, just leave us alone.
Rajender was never bothered about her & Geet. All he wanted was the money. Thai ji, darji were at least truly concerned about them but Rajender couldn't be bothered. The business was in geets name so he needed her to be under his custody to take hold of the business.
Rano - hum yanhi rahenge delhi main
Rajender held her hand & began to drag her out, darji & thai ji protested. He shot a stern look to them. He pushed Rano inside the car & drove towards the gate. Their car came to sudden halt.
Brij to the driver - oye gadi kyun rok di?
Driver - shahab us car ne rasta roka huwa hain
Brij actually panicked - Maan he whispered looking at Rajender.
Rano immediately opened the car door & ran toward Maan. He stepped out & hugged Rano
Rano cried - inho ne hawali bej di aab mujhe aur Geet ko HP lejana chaten hain
Maan was mad he pulled Brij out of the car & kicked him & punched his life out in one blow. He laid there half dead, Rajender dried to lift him while darji tried to spaek to Maan. He held darji's collar & raised to punch him. Rano held his hand. He punch the bonnet of the car instead.
Darji - yah humare ghar ka malla hain, tum insab main mat pato
Rajender - we are not going to take this nonsense of yours. We are doing our best to take care mohinder's family
Rano - no they are behind our money she spat
Rajender - wat our we going to gain Rano, every thing is in geets name, we just don't want it to go to wrong hands until she is able to take care of herself.
Maan - NO ..nothing is in geets name.
Rajender smiles wickedly - We will be taking care of it until she is 18
Maan - its in my name
Rajender & Brij laughs loud
Maan throws the paper on his face -
they carefully read the paper
until Geet is 18yr her business is taken care by her father or husband. No one has the right to sell her shares with out the signature of both Geet & her husband.
Rajender - yah mujhe pata hain.
Maan - read it again
Rajender was losing out his patience - tum hote kaun ho Geet ko rokne wala
darji - woh humari ghar ki beti hain, woh humari saat jayegi
those words just woke the demon in Maan, he held rajender's collar & dragged him towards the wall & beat him up. He punched his face to the wall.
Darji shouted - tum hote kaun ho Geet ko rokne wala
Maan continued punching like an Armageddon - her husband...get it ..I am her husband. Aur usse mujh se koi dur nahi kar sakta khud woh bhi nahi. Woh sirf meri hain, Maan ki Geet.
Darji looked at Rano - she just shook accepting maans claim on Geet. Darji closed his eyes & sat in the car. Rajender put his wits together - she cannot be married, she is just 15
Maan with his blood shot eyes gave another punch in his stomach making him vomit out blood - Geet meri hain sirf meri. Don't even think about putting your dirty eyes on her. One more punch he would have died.
Darji - aab shaadi hogayee hain tho hum kya kar sakten hain
Brij whispers to Rajender - paper main husband ke naam pe Maan Singh Khurana ka naam hain he shows the last para that read geets name as Geet Maan Khurana. 
Maan got all her luggage into his car & drove the car madly to her school.
He barged into her class like mad person yelling her name & dragged her outside.
Geet - kya huwa, sab teehk hain na..mama..mama ko kuch huwa kya?
he made her sit in the car. She saw Rano & sighed in relief
Geet - mama kya huwa
Rano cried & hugged her. Rano was not able to explain the cruelty her own blood is wanting to cause her. She couldn't say anything she sobbed. He drove the car to his house & told nakul to get the luggage upstairs. As they walked in Daadi was surprised. Maan held geets hand tightly.
Daadi - yeh sab kya hain Maan
Rano hugged Daadi & whispered Rajender's mean intentions so that Geet couldn't hear them.
Daadi got some water for them. Maan stood their clutching her wrist hard & harder
Daadi - beta chodo usse
Maan - nahi, yeh meri hain
Daadi was little uncomfortable with those raw words she looked at Rano with a sorry face.
Maan - she is my wife & she will stay with me
Daadi was totally shocked & guilty , she thought Maan was going into her sons path.
Daadi was getting angry now - Maan leave her alone.
Maan hugged her madly - I won't leave her, they will take her away from me. He suddenly became a small boy fearing to lose his most pierced possession.
Maan took Geet to his room & closed the door behind. He hugged her tightly close in his arms. She could feel her bones would crack any moment. He held her compressed in him. She couldn't say a word after hearing his heart beat crying out so loudly.
Daadi knocked the door - Maan yah sab galat hain. Don't do any thing to her. Plz Maan
Rano kept her hand on daadi's shoulder - she is safest in his arms. Woh bas dara huwa hain. Woh usse kuch nahi karega.

Daadi cried seeing the trust in rano's eyes for Maan, feeling guilty some where that she couldn't hold that trust in him even though she brought him up may be she has seen so much of harshness that she couldn't believe a pure innocent feelings still existed.
 
He stood their holding her endlessly. All the fear, all the rudeness, all the anger was pouring out in that hug. The thought that they were even conspiring to take her away from him, killed him, hurt him, made his heart bleed. How could some one dare to even think about separating them. His hold was getting harder & harder if ever it could but some how it did. Now even Daadi thinks of taking Geet away. He felt all this feeling was so suffocating. He could barely breath & she could feel his heart may just burst out compressing all that pain with in him. His heart so much in pain. He wanted to feel her, be sure, be certain she was with him, safe & away from such people.

His hand madly, crazily began to snake her feeling every bit of her. She could feel herself melting into that hold. He sweeped her off the floor at once & made her lay on the bed. He hugged & her holding her closer & closer. She didn't complain just lay there comforting him. She didn't know wat was it, why was he so different today. She always knew he was possessive about her but this was something beyond wat she had every known about him. She understood he wanted to be sure & reassured of her being with him. She just gave in to his pain trying to calm to him. It was more than 5hours. He was still holding her frantically. Every minute he reassured himself with his deuce touch. crying meri hain sirf meri.

Daadi & Rano settled down in the hall. Waiting for Maan to calm down. Rano told Daadi about their wedding & how their fondness for each other has increased ever since. 

PRECAP
rajender poisoning geets mind

~PREV    PART 43    NEXT   PART 45~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan


Edited by muskanp - 27 January 2011 at 10:59pm

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:11am | IP Logged
awesome......
now i think that rajinder poisoning geet will not help....
but may be as she is minor, they can play some legal game about her marriage with maan.....
will be waiting eagerly.......for next update...


Edited by libra25 - 27 January 2011 at 1:21am

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:12am | IP Logged
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awesome  update...loved it..!!!

thanks mushki for updating soon...!!!

loving maan possesiveness and the way he said that she is her wife...!!!

okie guyzz..bye ..need to rush to office..Wink


Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 27 January 2011 at 1:19am

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