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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 5 (Page 74)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
~deewangi~
part 43

13th day pooja was completed. All the 13 days Maan stayed out there outside the door. He didn't even for a second leave them alone. He wouldn't have let anything happen to him. They didn't even to ask for he would be there getting it done. Daadi attended the pooja sat with them for a while & left. All the office members from Handa & KC where there. Even close friends came to convey their condolence.

 
Meera, ridz, arohi & anji came to meet Geet but she didn't talk much. She had become quiet & reserved. She sat cuddled up next to Rano who herself was feelingless. She looked blank & lost. Rano looked more like a lifeless person. She had no idea wat her so called family members conspiring.

On 15th day Maan told to geet to get ready for school while he freshened up in the vanity van parked at the portico of the Handa hawali. Geet got dressed & came out to meet Rano. She kissed Rano who looked really lost.
Geet - mama main school javon?
Rano - umm
brij interfered - oye koi zarorat nahi
Geet ignored & walked towards the hall. Brij held her hand & pushed her inside.
Geet snapped back - mujhe school jana hain
brij - kaha na nahi jana
Geet - mere portions miss hojayen ge
brij - u can continue ur studies in HP
Geet - main kanhai nahi javon ghi main yanhi school javongi
she walks towards the door
brij pulls her hand & drags her inside
Geet - mama dehko na brij veerji mujhe school nahi jane de rahen
MAMA....MAMA
Geet snapped her hand & ran to Rano - mama dehko na
Rano was not reacting she still not sure wat was happening around her.
Brij - tumhari TC ki baat kar li hain humne school main
Geet snorted her nose took her bag & ran towards the door & bumped on Maan.
Brij stretched his hand to hold her hand, Maan held it mid air.
She hugged Maan & cried - mujhe school nahi jane de rahen.
Maan cradled her head with one had & short a fuming look to brij.
Brij - oye chod meri bahen ko
Maan twisted his hand & kicked him still holding on to Geet with the other hand.
Darji &Rajender rushed towards them.
Darji - wat are u doing
Rajender - leave her alone
Maan held her still closer like a rebel. Shooting a killing look to all of them
brij tried to pull Geet away Maan held him by collar & began to beat him up.
Rajender & darji tried to stop them but Maan was wild fuming nothing could have stopped him.
Rano suddenly heard them all shouting at Maan to stop.
Rano screamed - Maan
he stopped at once & looked at her in anger
brij took that as a chance to punch him Maan held his fist inches away from his face still staring at Rano.
Rano - BRIJ chodo use. Maan drop Geet to school.
Maan was still fuming
Rano - NOW
he held Geet from her waist & walked her to the car. She was still crying feeling scared of wat Brij said about going to HP. Maan stops the car at once & shouts - JUST STOP IT
she hugs him & starts crying more. His heart feels like it won't be able to bare it even a minute more. The pain to see her cry was bringing the worst in him. He was not aware wat she was crying about. He had no clue wat HP family were planning. She pressed herself into him - mujhe aapse dur nahi jana.
He cupped he face & looked into those teary eyes impatiently - tum kanhi nahi jaa rahi ho, samjhi tum.
Geet - woh veerji woh...keeps his finger on her lips & yelled STOP CRYING...he wiped her tears with his thumb & placed soft deep peck on each of the eye lid & pulled her into his embrace. She calmed herself in his arms, he placed a soft peck on her forehead. I won't let u go anywhere. He said it firmly.
Geet - I love u a lot
he dropped her to the school. He had instructed the school staff & her friends not to mention about papaji to her. Even arohi just hugged her & took her to the class.

HANDA HAWALI
brij - chachi ji aap ne Geet ko school kyun bheja
Rano - she feel better & waise bhi uska class miss ho raha tha
rajender - Rano wats the point
Rano looks at them puzzled
rajender - we are anyway going to HP today.
Rano - wat?
Rajender - we have arranged everything
Rano gets really scared & worried for Geet & Maan. She definitely can't separate them. It was one of the papajis heart felt happiness above all she knows for sure Maan won't take it. He might just kill them before they even think about such a thing.
Rano tries to sweet talk them - nahi veerji, hum dono yanhi manage kar lenge, yeh ghar bhi tho hain, unka business
Rajender - every thing will be taken care off, you don't have to worry
Rano felt something was surely fishy now
Rajender - we have spoken to the lawyer & rahul about it.
Rano - nahi veerji uss sab ki zaroorat nahi hain
Rajenders voice becomes harsh - we are going to HP now, its not an option
the servants come down with 5 big suitcases with their belongings
Rano to darji - darji hum yanhi rahna chaten hain
darji - how can we leave u alone here?
Rano - nahi we will manage, unhone sab kuch kar rakha hai, yah ghar bhi tho
Rajender - I have already sold this hawali
Rano was shocked, she fell down on the floor regretting signing those papers admist of all confusion on the 4th day. She felt they are upto something really nasty, she cried - bej di
Rajender - business ka aapko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi, I will stay here & take care of it.
Every thing started to become clear to Rano they wanted the money, she definitely didn't want her children to be caught between this dirty money game. Before she could say anything, thai ji guided her out of the hawali.
Brij - jaldi karna padega, warna woh kamina kuch kar sakta hain
Rano slapped Brij - mind ur words
Brij got irritated but darji held him back - Maan kuch nahi kar sakta, yeh humara ghar ki baat hain
Rajender - lets make it fast, we will pick Geet from her school
Rano tried her level best to stay back..she rushed inside & cried looking at papaji's photo.

PRECAP
Maans losing it completely

~PREV   PART 42    NEXT  PART 44~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
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Love muskan


Edited by muskanp - 27 January 2011 at 1:12am

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Yayyyyyyyy me 1st woooohoooooooo btw Happy Republic Day to u dii n everyone anyways awwwww dis update was so so sad uffffff dis Hp ppl naaa wanna killll dem only money money ufffff so retarded hateeee all oh noooo Dey sold da house oh nooooo now wat will happen will geet n rano go to HP nooooo anyways awww cuteeeee maneet In car plzzzz muskaaan diii don't seperate our cuteeee maneet n now do continue soon

Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 25 January 2011 at 10:49pm

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I SHOULD NOT

BUT STILL
 
SORRY MUSKAN
BUT I REALLY HATE ITCry


Edited by smj1977 - 25 January 2011 at 10:47pm

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that was too harsh i dont know how maan is gg to take it

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ressssDancing
UFFF....ullo da patha brij n other hp membersss..hate them..Angry....y is rano not calling maan...Confused....gawd....hope they learn gud lessons from maan....n maan seriously needs to do sumthing to protect them...n surely there is sumthing fishy....may be brij n darji had planned handa ji's..murder..Shocked....uggg...hate them..poor geet n rano...Cry..!! I think it is tym for brij to get a zhor ka jatka from our munda maan..!!Continue soon..!!

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This is getting scarier by the minute!! Disapprove

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Happy Republic Day to you too MuskaanParty

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Muski PLEASE!!!
First you killed papaji now you are splitting Maneet!
 
 
Please dear not fair on us! not at all!! Please! kuch karo...CryCryCryCry Dont make Geet go to HP! She is such a bubbly innocent kid .....she will be crushed by Brij and family! PleasE!CryCryCryCryCryCry
 
Let Maan take them with him!

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