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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 5 (Page 28)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
Di...i jt change ma siggi...hus that...
yeah same here...per mum kharahe hai....kaam kero...
anyway..
Kay is updating...did u see????

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged

~deewangi~
part 40

Their birthday ...Geet 15 & Maan 20
Geet never failed to amuse him. Geet kept the grah pravesh pooja with havan for his mom in their new flat. She decorated the house beautifully. Daadi, Rano & Mohinder attended the pooja. Pandit ji completed the pooja & sprinkled holy water around the house. Daadi was bid taken a back with the house. She didn't understand any thing wat was happening between them & why the house she even missed reading Geet - Maan at the door. She didn't mind anything though but was not clear about their relation. Moreover she always remembered & considered Geet as the small 10yr old girl jumping around with a pony in her skirt little above her knees. Even though she has not seen Geet off late in anything but suit. Daadi always loved Handa's for showering so much of love on Maan unconditionally.

Daadi - beta aap ne pooja arange kiya
she shook her head - mama ne kiya
Mohinder formally got introduced to daadi. While Rano served every one the prasad & breakfast. After the breakfast. They went around the pent house. Mohinder was really proud & happy.
Rano said proudly to daadi - Maan ne Geet ko gift kiya hain
daadi looked at her grandson, he was lost looking at his little wify. Daadi understood Geet held a real special place in his heart. She just hoped Rano & Mohinder didn't mind their relation in future learning about Maan's father. After all who would want to marry their daughter into a family where the father-in-law himself is character less. She didn't want his fathers deeds to effect anything in his life.


Geet dragged him down stairs. He slipped her hand around her waist pulling her closer placed a soft peck on her cheeks abhi bhi kuch baaki hain? She blushed & nodded.
By now he kind of guessed it was a four wheeler but wat took his breath out was a long leek black
Mercedes Benz CLS Class Coup,

 
the perfect blend of style and comfort. The long car that always embodied the irresistible charisma of the motor cars. It had elegant profile with the arching roof line makes a stunning visual statement which is backed up by superb technology and inimitable comfort. She loved to see the delight in his eyes. She would to anything to see him happy. He hopped into the car & touched the steering. He checked the front cabinet & the different options in it. He immediately switched on the CD player.. she had his fav collection of songs recorded in to one CD. He took out the CD & checked wat it was..it read just for records I love u. He pounced on her & hugged her tightly kissing her madly every where passionately I loved it loved it a lot. She turned all pink with his expression of happiness. She felt flushed with his touch already making her feel mushy. She wanted him to express himself, she held back & softly hugged him burring herself in his arms. It was more of joy than passion she knew it.
He softly pushed her curls behind. Cupped her face & admired her in love. She couldn't dare to look into those eyes they were slowly turning luscious. Her cheek slowly turned darker shade of pink with a slight hotness that she could feel radiating to him. He lowered closer & placed a soft sensuous kiss on those red & hot cheek.  He felt his lips would burn with the touch. His hand slipped behind into her silk hair as his lips caressed her lips voluptuously. She closed her eyes & almost forgot to breath. He closed his eyes & kissed her closed eye lip instead one after the other. She kissed his chest I love u. his heart echoed with those words. He so much wanted to say it 100 - 1000 -1000000- 10000000 times but the word always caught up in his throat.
He straighten himself & sat behind the wheel. While she set her duppata. He took her for a long drive. He kept playing with the duppata that fell on the gear. She tried to remove it, he held on to it. She smiled & shied.
They came back home. Maan took daadi to show the car. She blessed both the kids. There was something about of them, they never needed anyone else. Geet did have friends but Maan he didn't want any one actually hated every one, hated this world. If he had a sec more from his hectic schedule he rather spend it was his little wify.  Just being around her listening to her dreams & living  her dreams was his life. He didn't want anything else & never ha anything else.

Mohinder's company was into let out tenders for their new construction work. There was heavy competition & it was real a big deal, since it was a project in collaboration with government. On the day when the tender was being opened the whole gathering knew who will win the project. Every one spoke about this young guy. Dynamic &  charismatic businessman. Mohinder was curious. He was not sure if Maan had applied for the tender, as the project needed very high security deposit. More that 100cr. So it was only the big time players where there. Even some foreign companies also applied for it. It was all the league players in the tender. Even the big players seem to fear about this young competition. Only the foreign companies stood some chance. But again they had the disadvantage of pricing it right.


PRECAP
so the tender goes to???

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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
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Love muskan


Edited by muskanp - 23 January 2011 at 4:12pm

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
RES
awesome update
loved it
happy birthday maaneet
loved what she gifted him
me 2 want that car
so cute 
both of them
love the love mohinder and rano have for maan
cant wait till maan says he loves her to
loves her but has never really said it
hope the tender goes to maan
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm



Edited by kashndsel4eva - 22 January 2011 at 4:37pm

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by charmed ones

Di...i jt change ma siggi...hus that...
yeah same here...per mum kharahe hai....kaam kero...
anyway..
Kay is updating...did u see????


nops dear

going to check...Smile

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
res tooooooo
im gonna reply in next post...lolzzzzzzzz


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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
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tender goes to maan singh khurana...yepeee...vaise who else hav this capacity,...!!!

awesome update dear....will be waiting for next part...lolzWink


Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 22 January 2011 at 4:36pm

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Oh wow wat a gift. Lovely upd

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
loved...i want this car tooo....ahhh they are sooooooooo cute...and this love is so...so i really don't know what to say...once again an update beyond words...loving this story....

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