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~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 5 (Page 134)

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part 45

Daadi - beta before u take any decision I want u to know every thing about Maan
Rano rested her hand on daadi's hand that rested on her lap - I know one thing that Maan loves her more than self. I don't want to know anything else & nothing else matters.  mami g tusi great ho

this is for u
Rano knocked at the door. He didn't respond.
Rano - beta subha se tum dono ne kuch nahi khaya
Maan - mujhe bhook nahi hain
Daadi - Geet ko to bhook lagi hogi na
he got up at once & opened the door & went out & locked the door from out side. His eyes was red & swollen. Daadi tried to go in he blocked the door - woh so rahi hain
Rano - aacha tum tho dinner kar lo
Maan - nahi mujhe bhook nahi hain
Geet felt cold with no Maan around a sudden chillness. She got up & started crying feeling scared mamaCry mama..Cry
Maan ran at once to her. Hugged her - kya huwa tumhe? Kya huwa?
She was still scared & crying with her eyes closed
Rano - new place she would have got scared. Usse aapne bed main sone ki aadat hain. Rano could not control the her tears as she said those words reminded of their dream house being sold ruthlessly.
Maan roared - I will get her place back tomorrow itself, he took his phone & went out to call his contacts to get the hawali back.

Maan having his dinner coolly - Geet mere saat hi rahegi
Geet looked at him, not that she minded but she was seeing him voicing it.
Daadi - yanha pe jagah kanha hain beta?
He held her hand - yeh mera room main rahegi, aur mama aapke room main
Daadi - lekin beta
he got up mid of his dinner & smashing the glass on the floor - kaha na mere saat rahegi tho bus rahegi. he shot a fuming look to every one & walked away. 

Geet took his dinner plate & went to him. He was looking outside the window. She slowly fed him. He ate it quietly. She came back with a smile - dehko mama pura finish kardiya
Daadi - beta aap kyun nahi kahte Maan se
Geet - nahi Daadi I can't say anything that would hurt him.
Rano - but u both can't be living together already?
Geet - if he wants it that way it will be that way.

Maan - nahi mama iss bar main kisi ki baat nahi sunuga
Rano - lekin log kya kahenge?
Maan - I don't care wat anyone says
Rano - lekin woh abhi bachi hain
Maan - lekin main koi bacha nahi, I know my limits

4 body guards will be with her all the time he added.
Daadi & Rano looked at him in shock. Geet was feeling excited thinking about the body guard concept. She hugged him & kissed him - maza aayega na.

Rajender came forward & softly & lovingly - Geet beta hum hain aapke thau ji
she kept quiet
Rajender - we came to get u home, give u back wat Maan has taken away from u
oops he spoke the wrong words
she shot a stern look to all of them - I don't talk to strangers

Rajender - beta he has taken all ur papaji's hard earned money. He sold ur hawali too..
Maan just reached there, but held back his steps to see Geet actually was quiet listening to them.

Edited by cute-aly - 29 January 2011 at 7:12am
Shalve IF-Sizzlerz

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awesome update...
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loved it!
she trusts him alot!
i knew it!she wud never let him down!
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I m proud of his little wify she provd herself yet again! Realy i adore ths couple 4m d bottom of my heart, ths update's each n evry line had a magical spell of her love 4 him n ONLY him. Thank u muskan 4 such an amazin update.
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Wow amazing update
luved it yaar
n luv u too IF-Dazzler

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nice part 
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lovely part.

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