Gosh Shilpi,😊
I was so scared that the Dutta in your OS would just, convenienctly, mumble Nakus' name in solitude and kept reading as quickly as possible to see him bring back Seema from LA-LA land and breathed a sigh of relief when he finally told Seema/Chanda about Nakusha.
You should send a copy to the Cv's and help them overcome their legendary lapses at crucial points in LTL. At least, they should avoid that Dutta's revelation of Nakusha to Seema happens in such a way as to warrant a final Good Bye from Seema with all doors closed for any possible comeback. No offence meant, but I cant bear the presence of this woman around Dutta when Nakusha is left fumbling and struggling to cope with all forms of hardships, physical, emotional, and psycholigical in Patil Niwas where Kala just never let go of a single opportunity to harass her mental well-being.
To come back to your OS, Shilpi, it was beautiful, to the point and encompassed all the elements that would contribute in setting the quadrants in all the right directions for Dutta and Nakusha. Actual show mein nahin, tumhare OS mein Dutta ne akhir kar, Nakusha ko dil se apna liya aur woh bhi Seema ke samne. Ab Ghar wapas jane ki der hain. Unfortunately, wapasi ke rastay bade lambay hain and Dutta will have to recover fully before he takes up the challenges of restoring peace and serenity in Nakusha and his life. I will confess that I have struggled and try to empathise with Seema for had it not been for her, Dutta would never have met Nakusha, the mirror of his soul, but somehow cannot. Mera dil itna bada nahin hain. And I do not believe in aiding delusion in any shape or form...
Very well done. Shall we look to next one during the week. I wish that I could have acceded to your request for a long post but that will have to wait for the next one. So get to work.😆😆😆. This is what is expected of the zealous writers on the Forum!
Kavita😳
