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FF MILEY JAB HUM TUM MN,SG,SK part 7 on pg 23 (Page 9)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
tht was soooooooooo niceeeeeeeee

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=AzaraA]gud one jani tum ney 2nd part main hi aham aham tum samjh hi gai hogi k main kia kehna cha rahi hun Tongue

any ways keep witing i love the u add the pictures and song is also supreb..............good going girl next part k liye plz do pm me and plz yar writing tohri big karlo plz ...........


i will definitely do that dear
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                                                          PART 3

the 3rd episode starts
 
s. hmm par pehle hum pohunche
k. hmm
s.phir nupur ne paani puri order ki or bahaar nikal kar khaane lagi
 
they goes in flashback
 
 
A beaufiful girl in a white churidar is standing opposite to paani puri waala bhaiya
 
she is none another than our nupur
n. hmm wah bhaiya kamaal hai kya paani puri hai manna parega haan
then mayanks car comes in which sam n khanak are sitting actually everyone was going to college even shaan khanak n gunjan also
 
mayank ki car se galti se keechar uddh kar nupur ke dress par lag jaata hai n mayank was driving keechar nupur k dress par or uski cheeks par lag jaata hai
hoyeeeeeeeee (background music)
nupur looks at her dress n put the plate of paani puri n goes angrily goes to the car n mayank opens it. it hurst nupur's leg she was going to fall but mayank saves her
 
(sorry i didn't get any other pic)
 
both lost in eachother for 5 minutes suddenly with the horn of a car disturbed them n then
n. by god aankhein hain ya button dikhta nahi hai kya
m.  wo im sorry meri waja se aapke kapre kharab hogai
nupur cuts him
n. haan haan sorry meri waja se aapke kapre by god mein tum jese larkon ko achi tarah se jaanti hoon
m. hellow meine sorry bola na
n. to koi ehsaan nahi kiya samjhe na
mayank takes out his rumaal
n. mujhe nahi chahiye
m. mein tumhe de bhi nahi raha itni gharmi hai uffh
he was going to clean his face
but nupur wo rumaal cheen leti hai n apne face ko pohunch deti hai
m. arre
n. ek to andhon ki tarah gadi chalate hain phir sorry to bol dete hain lekin rumaal dene mein najaane kya problem hai
m. a hello miss chappar chappar apna tape recorder band karo warna wo bhi kharab hojaega thora break do usse
hoyeeeeeeeeeeeee
n. how dare u tumhari himmat kese huwi tumne mujhe tape recorder kahan tum
m. sirf tape recorder nahiin miss chappar chappar bhi
n. haaaa (she opens her mouth) agar mein miss chappar chappar to tum mr. sadu samjhe
saru
 
on the other side shaantanu & gunjan
g. bhaiya di abhi tak aayi kyun nahi
s. lagta hai k paani puri waale ki puri dukaan lut jaayegi
gunjan smiles bhaiya aap bhi na
 
 
on the other side khanak n samrat are wathching the scene n khanak says arre nupur
 
on the other side shaantanu's car also comes n khanak was just going but shaan's car comes in n khanak steps her foot back shaan opens the door n says sorry khanak smiles n says its okay koi baat nahi she was just going then shaan comes out of the car n is memorized in her beauty
s. beautifull this is called love at first sight
gunjan n samrat on the same time opens the door n gunjan says khanak tum
k. gunjan tum
sam while looking at gunjan beatiful
on the other side mayur r fighting
g. khanak tum yahaan kya kar rahi hoon
k. pehle woh dekho bhaiya or nupur larai kar rahe hain
g. jaldi chalo
they reached there
khanak stands between them bhaiya nupur larai band karo
n. bhaiya!!!!!
m. khanak tum is larki ko jaanti hoon
mayank sees samrat n shaan
sam. hey shaan tu
m. shaan!!
n. yeh sab kya ho raha hai koi mujhe batayega
m. haan haan sab is madam ko batao warna maar daalei gi
n.TUM!!
k.BUS
shaan sees her n smiles a little
sam. kya hai meri behen hai
shaan. kuch nahi
k. nupur ye mere sab se bare bhayi hain mayank bhaiya or yeh hain samrat bhaiya
k. or mister aap kon hai (to shaan)
g. abh khanak ye mere or nupur di ke bare bhaiya hain shaantanu bhaiya
m. WHAT BHAIYA!!
m.shaan yeh teri behen hain
shaan: haan kyun yeh teri behen hai kya han
g. di yeh aapke kapron ko kya huwa
n. dekh na gunjan is sadu ne kya kar diya
m. hello miss tape recorder mein koi sadu wadu nahi hoon
n. how dare u mein koi tape recorder nahi mein nupur bhushan hoon nupur bhushan samjhe na huh
sam. khanak tum in dono ko jaanti ho while looking at gunjan
k. haan bhaiya ye dono meri nursery ki dostein hain nupur or gunjan
or aap inhein kese jaantein hai while looking at shaan
m. yeh mera or sam ka bhi nursery ka dost hai
n. bhaiya aapko dost to dekh kar banane chahiye
m. tumhari himmat kese huwi
 
returning from flashback
hey friends now the flashback scene will b continued but not from this scene mayur n sajan n shanak will all talk with each other about there scenes
 
so after coming back from flashback
 
SHANAK SCENE :
s. ahb khanak suno kal shaam sharp 7 baje tayyar rehna hum  bahaar jaayeingein
k. par shaantanu mein bhaiyya se kya kahoongi
s. par war kuch bhi nahi meine kaha na or wese bhi mein chup chup k nahi balke pure haq se tumhe tumhare bhaiyon se puch kar hi jaunga actually chura kar
khanak blushes
n the background music is dheem ta na dheem ta na dheem rbo music
 
 
PRECAP:
 
shaan: nupur gunjan mujhe tum dono se ye umeed nahi thi
k. bhaiya mujhe aapse or samrat bhaiya se ye umeed nahi thi
 
 
hey friends plz tell me do u liked this part actually  mein abhi thore parts ese hi likhungi i mean mujhe jo khaas parts likhne haina wo shanak k wedding k time par honge or usk baad bhi so plz tell me did u all liked it
 

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:26am | IP Logged
nice precap cont sooon
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:53am | IP Logged

awsome update.

do cont soon.....................
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
BEAUTIFULLLLL !!!!!!!!! SO PEACEFULL !!
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
awesome update
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:27am | IP Logged
ya aisha really liked it do continue soon......and thx k tum ney writing big karli thx.....................



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