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FF MILEY JAB HUM TUM MN,SG,SK part 7 on pg 23 (Page 6)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 12:08am | IP Logged
nice part thanxs for PMSmile

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Nice cs
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Sweet update

cont soon
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oh wow !!! plzzzz continue !!!
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nice CS and concept plz update soon

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                                            PART 2
khanak readed the sms n was just going to dial the number suddenly shaan hug her from the back
 

 
 
 

she gets scared n was going to yell but on the spot shaan keeps his hand on her mouth she turns around n was shocked to see him shaan takes away his hand from her lips n then khanak starts moving back n shaan towards her they'd done this thing till the wall came khanak says sh... shh.shantanu aap aap yahaan par kyun aaye or kese agar bhaiya ne dekh liya to wo kya samjhe gein raat k baare baje k baad aap shantanu plz aap yahaan se jaayiye
shantanu keeps silent
k.shantanu kahaan kho gaye
s.hayee ye meethi si surili si awaaz sunne k liye mere kaan taras gae the
khanak blushes
s. arre ek to itni mushkil se mein ladder k zariye yahaan par pohuncha or tum hoke mujhe jaane k liye keh rahi ho
k. nahi shantanu mera wo matlab nahi tha mein to bas yeh keh rahi thi k agar bhaiya ne dekh liya to
s. arre dekh liye to kya huwa apni hone waali biwi se hi to milne aya hoon kisi or se thori na (in a naughty way looking at her lips)

 

khanak sees this n says nahi shantanu dekhiya aap nahi shaantanu
she tries to go but shan pulls her wrist
ShaNak - Sept. 3 2010 - 4
 
 they were too close
s. HAPPY BIRTHDAY KHANAK
or tumhara birthday gift mein tumhe dunga nahi balke tumse loonga
khanak blushes
k.shantanu yeh aap kya kar rahe hain dekhiye plz aap mujhe jaane dijiye koi aa jaayega
s.( still looking at her lips ) aane do
k. koi dekh lega
s. dekhne do
k. shaa
s. shhhhh
he kisses on her cheeks she close her eyes he then kissed to his eyes then to her neck
Shantanu and Khanak 

 
 
 
 
 n removes the duppata throws it on the floor
 
 
 
she was feeling too awkward but shaan was enjoying that then she turns away but shaan peeche se uske baalon ko hatta hai n then he kisses on her neck
then he turns khanak towards him n was going to kiss
k. sh sha shaa shaantanu ye galat hai humme ye nahi karna chahiye
s. khanak abh mujhse ek saal to nikal gaya par ye ek maheena ek puri sadi jitna lamba lagta hai plz aaj mujhe mat roko
she closses her eyes
 

 
he smiles a little
 

then he kisses whole her neck then picks in his arms n put her on the bed or phir wo uske uppar let jata hai



 
 
 
 

khanak's heart was beating very fast
 
backgroun music:
Resham Si Hai Yeh Hawaein Sanam
Aao Zara Paas Aaye Sanam
Resham Si Hai Yeh Hawaein Sanam
Aao Zara Paas Aaye Sanam
 
 
he kisses her nose n then he was just 1 second ki doori par to kiss her she closses her eyes he opens the eyes then again closed n then kissed on her lips for 5 minutes
 
 
 
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum

Ho Jaane Do Ab Faasle Kuch To Kum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Resham Si Hai Yeh Hawaein Sanam
Aao Zara Paas Aaye Sanam
 
 
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum

Ho Jaane Do Ab Faasle Kuch To Kum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Resham Si Hai Yeh Hawaein Sanam
Aao Zara Paas Aaye Sanam
 
 
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Ho Jaane Do Ab Faasle Kuch To Kum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
 
 
 
 
 then when they broke the kiss they realize it is 2pm n she was feeling very awkward actually both of them n then both looked here n there shaan asks khanak
khanak tum theek to hona  i m really sorry khanak mujhe honsh hi nahi raha k mein kya kar raha hoon mein mein m sorry khanak mein chala jata hoon
he was just going then khanak stops him wo uska haath pakar leti hai n says while looking downwards shaantanu aapne kuch galat nahi kiya aa aap aapko pura haq hai n  smiles a little while turning around
shantanu feels happy n then hugs khanak tightly
khanak thank you thank u so much mein to darr hi gaya tha
k. kyun aapko kya laga mein
s. meinnnnnnnnn kya ha meinnn kya walking towards her she goes backwards sha sha shantanu yeh aap kya kar rahe hain dekhiye plz sha shantanu both falls on eachother on the bed
shan uske haathon ko uppar pakar leta hai or bolta hai acha to agar tumhe koi problem nahi hai to kya mein phirse while looking at her lips
k. shantanu plz
s. mazaak bhi nahi karoon
they gets up
s. khanak ek baar aankhein band karo
k. (in a confused tone) kyun
s. arre baba karo na
she does
shantanu uske kaano k paas jata hai or bolta abh khanak wohb he kisses her on the ears yahaan par bhi baaki tha
she blushes
 
 
Angdaai Leke Hawaein Chali To Kyon Na Khushboo Bikhre Kali
Khushboo Hawaon Mein Kaise Bhare Kaliyan Hai Sharmaati Haay Kya Kare
Kya Pata Hai Yeh Kya Sharam Hai Ya Saja
Kyon Hai Betabiyaan Intezar Ek Zara
Ek Pal Ki Bhi Doori To Ab Hai Sitam
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
 
s. aankhein mat kholna ok abh bas yeh ek last time
he suddenly kiss on her lips
 

Chup Rehna Chaaha Tha Rehna Sake Phir Bhi Jo Kehna Tha Keh Na Sake
Tum Mujhse Kuch Bhi Kaho Na Kaho Aise To Khoye Huve Na Raho
Ab To Jo Ho So Ho Baat Dil Ki Suno
Kehti Hai Dhadkane Keh Bhi Do Keh Bhi Do
Tumhare Hai Hum Tumhari Kasam
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage
Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Resham Si Hai Yeh Hawaein Sanam
Aao Zara Paas Aaye Sanam
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Ho Jaane Do Ab Faasle Kuch To Kum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Armaan Hai Jaage Jaage Hum
Jaage Jaage Jaage Jaage Jaage Jaage
 
she was very surprised but then response to it
it becames passionate one the kiss was for the 10 minutes n they were tight hugging
the clock strikes at 3 they didn't even realize n kiss for 20 minutes n then they break khanak says shantanu abh
s. sorry
when they broke the kiss khanak's hairs were on shantanu's face he takes them out but while he was going he slips down on khanak due to the duppatta n they were too close n both laughed
they gets up
khanak wore the duppatta
then they sees the clock
both says together teen bajh gae
s. hum itne busy hogae k humme pata hi nahi chala
khanak blushes
s. abh kya faida ghar jaane ka                                      hey idea kyun na hum saari raat beth kar baatein karein
k. good idea          par agar bhaiya uth gae to
s. khanakkk
k. ok sorry

 
then both of them sits in the corner
s. khanak
k. hmm (putting her head to his shoulder)
s. kitni ajeeb baat haina mein nursery se lekar college tak mayank or sam ka bohut acha dost tha or tum nursery se lekar nupur or gunjan ki
khanak cuts him
shaantanu aap bhool gae na k humne unka naam gunur rakha hai
s. oopss sorry sorry baba acha to mein kya keh raha tha
haan tum meri pyaari behnon gunur ki or tumhaari hone waali nanandon ki
khanak blushes
s. dost thi par phir bhi hum college mein mile ajeeb ittefaaq haina jab kabhi bhi tum  mere ghar aati ya mein nahi hota or jab mein tumhaare ghar aata tab tum nahi hoti
k. hmm acha aap ko yaad hai jab mayank bhaiya or nupur mile the tab kya huwa tha
s. haan wo din mein kese bhool sakta hoon pehle to gunur ne
k. shantanu wese ye naam meine apni doston ka 3 class mein rakha tha par theek hai aapko ijaazat di
shan smiles  dhanyawaad meri hone waali dharam patni ji
she blushes
k. shantanu gunji or nups ko aap akela chor kar aaye hain koi problem to nahi na
s. meri do pyaari si princess ko mein dekh k aaya hoon
khanak smiles
k. shantanu story continue kijiye na
s. haan ofcourse to us din meri dono behnon ne zid ki k unhe paani poori khaani hai
k. or coincidentally mene bhi apne bhaiyon se ki
both smiles while looking at each other
 
precap : mayur fighting at paanipuri place
                gunjan introduce khanak to shaan n shaan introduce her sisters to mayank n sam
                 shanak n sajan first meeting
 
 
 
hey guys this precap is of flashback n ya do tell me did u liked tha part n ya sorry mayur n sajan fans dont dissapoint with me actually mere exams chal rahe hain but i tried taking out the time plz pray for me k mein paas hojaaoon n ya tell me what do u want to see  in the next part n ya meine kuch galat to nahi likh diya na plz all of u tell me hope i didn't hurt anyone bcoz meine pehle bhi esa hi kuch likha tha but people were very dissapointed with me do tell me have i write anything wrong plz n ya what do u want to see more plz i need ur opinion


Edited by mayur_sidhma - 26 January 2011 at 4:08am

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged
awesome girl.... highly romantic one and the pics added more passion.... shanak s part ws really mindblowing yaar.... loved the songs too... waiting for the next part ... for shanak.. mayur...sajan

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luvd it.plz cont soon........

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