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FF MILEY JAB HUM TUM MN,SG,SK part 7 on pg 23 (Page 23)

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
wowwwwww yaar..
u are just superrrrrb..
excelllent post............

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Nice update
keep it up
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                                        PART 7

 
both cars reach at the same time to excel college mayur comes out n shocked to see sajan in 1 car
n. gunjan tu samrat ke saath khanak kahaan hai
s. abh nupur wo kya haina mujhe gunjan se kuch notes chahiye the to bas isiliye
nupur thinks (oh no agar inhe pata chal gaya to wese bhi notes to ghar par the)
mayur looks at each other they were pareshaan
n. to tum dono ghar par gaye the
s. ni wo kya haina gunjan ko baad mein yaad aaya ke nots college mein hi hain
mayur : oh bach gaye
g. kya
n. ni ni kuch bhi to nahi abh jaldi andar chalo 4:45 ho rahe hain or abhi tak to b.day ki tayyari bhi nahi ki
g. haan di jaldi chalo
they goes inside n r shocked to see the preparations
both sajan n mayur says together : ye sab kisne kiya
awaaz aayi
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
humne (its kash n sidhma)
 
 
gunur are surprised : riddhima shilpa
 
they both hugs eachother but sayank r confused
n. kese ho tum dono
r. hum theek hai or tum
sam. hello hello introduction kaun karaayega
g. oh sorry ye hai riddhima u can call her ridz,ridzi riddhi shilpa armaan sidhaarth in short sid
n. or yeh hai mayank or samrat
m. par yeh tumhe
n. wo kya haina mayank hum malaysia jab studies ke liye gaye the na tab shaan bhaiyya ke dost armaan or sid banne or usi se inki wife hamaari dost ban gayi
shilpa : acha par tumhari bhabhi kahaan hai bohut taareefein suni hain unki
g. haan ek minute
n. shaan bhaiyya
shaan brings khanak outside n took away his hand from her eyes she slowly slowly opens n shocked + surprised to see the decoration n a cake she smiles n says shantanu yeh sab aapne
shilpa : hello hello khanak bhabhi ye sab humaari mehna hai
k. aap
shaan : wait let me introduce yeh hai sid armaan shipa or riddhima u can call her ridz,ridzi riddhi
ridz : or yeh hai hamari khanak
k.par aap kab milein
shaan : hum malaysia mein studies k liye jab gaye the na tab mujhe armaan or sid milein or phir inki wife gunur ki bohut achi friends ban gayi
(sorry friends i dont remember that they were gone to malaysia or what so its a blooper may be sorry for that)
k. oh acha
n. abh cake kaate
shaan : haan haan chalo
 
n. or yeh rahe tumhaare presents hum sab ki taraf se
k. thank u so much
 
the light goes
k. arre kya huwa shantanu (she scared of the dark)
the song starts
mayank :yeh zindagi raftaar se chal pari
sam :jaate huwe raahon mein ham se abhi keh ke gai
nupur : hamaara, yeh waqt hamaara
jo ek baar gaya to aaey na dobaara
samajh lo zara yeh hawaaon ka ishaara mere yaaro
sajan n mayur together : apna har din aise jiyo, jese ke aakhri ho
jiye to is pal aise jiyo, jese ke aakhri ho
[repeat]
kash n sidhma :whenever we know and we have in a bless and you know
when we never retain like kick your last and you know
when we've forty days riding go off the past and you know
givin' up, givin' up, everybody's saying

shaan : ham sab jo saath mein rahain
khushiyaan sab haath mein rahain
gham se bas faasle rahain yun...
chaahe kahin bhi, kisi bhi morr par
bigre gi koi baat bhi agar
mil ke ek dooje se kahain yun...
gunjan : yeh baatain, hain choti moti baatain
yeh aeyn jaeyn jese ke din aur raatain
na aankhon se lagaana kabhi yeh barsaatain mere yaaro

kash sidhma shaan sajan n mayur : apna har din aise jiyo, jese ke aakhri ho
jiye to is pal aise jiyo, jese ke aakhri ho
[repeat]
when we've forty days riding go off the past and you know
givin' up, givin' up, everybody's saying

mayank : duniya matlab ki yaar hai
is ki aadat bekaar hai
is se kam rakhna waasta tu...
apnon se rakhna dosti
in se hi poori har kami
in mein hi dhoond raasta tu...
(pointing towards gunur n shaan)
 
 
ridhima : na jaana, yeh tu ne na jaana
yeh manzil teri, inhain hai tujhe paana
hai main ne kaha jo woh sun le zamaana mere yaaro
(pointing towars gunur n shaan)
 
kash n sidhma : apna har din aise jiyo, jese ke aakhri ho
jiye to is pal aise jiyo, jese ke aakhri ho
[repeat]
sam : yeh zindagi raftaar se chal pari
jaate huwe raahon mein ham se abhi keh ke gai
gunur : hamaara, yeh waqt hamaara
jo ek baar gaya to aaey na dobaara
samajh lo zara yeh hawaaon ka ishaara mere yaaro

shaan sidhma sajan kash n mayur together : apna har din aise jiyo, jese ke aakhri ho
jiye to is pal aise jiyo, jese ke aakhri ho
[repeat]
the song ends
 
khanak is too much happy
 
after 1 hour
sid n armaan:  acha shaan to hum chalte hain
ridz n shilpa : gunur khanak hum chalte hain
k. gunur bata rahi thi ke aap dono ne (shilpa n ridz) interior designing ka course kiya hai matlab marriage bureau type sabki shaadi ki preparations karna
shilpa : pehle to tum humme aap aap mat bulao or dusra yeh ke haan n ya hum hi tumhari shaadi ki preparations kareinge
gunur gets happy : sach
ridz : much
they all hugs khanak gunur ridz n shilpa
after few minutes
shaan : mujhe ek announcement karni hai everybody plz pay attention dekho abh to mujhe pura pura haq banta hai k mein khanak ko date pe le jaa sakoon meine usse kaha hai ke 7 pm ko mein usse us ke bhaiyon ki permission lekar bahaar le jaaunga
sayank sees each other n makes an agry face (they r just kidding)
m. permission...
sam : granted
shanak gets happy
shaan : thanks yaar
m . oh ho ho thanks bol raha hai by the way hum apni behen or jijoo ki khushi k liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain
gunur smiles while looking at sayank
mayur n sajan sees eachother
shaan: to chalo khanak byeeeeeeeeee
k. shantanu (he takes her hand n take her in the car)
mayank give nupur ishara to come in the classroom
n sam gives to gunjan to come in music room
 
both goes n then
 
MAYUR
 
m. nupur mujhe bhi tumhe kaheen le jaana hai
n. par kahaan
m. its a surprise chalo
n. par gunjan
m. wo samrat haina wo uska dhyaan rakega tum bas chalo
n. theek hai chalo
 
SAJAN
 
s. chashmish hum bhi kaheen bahaar chalein
g. par samrat di
s. offo chashmish mayank tumhari di ka khayaal rakhega
g. par hum jaayeingeinkese car to nahi haina
s. haan mayank ki haina
g. haan chalo
s. bas mein mayank se keys le leta hoon
g. haan yeh theek rahega
 
 
m. samrat mein bahaar jaa rahaa hoon ok or nupur or mujhe exams ke baare mein kuch discuss karna hai to theek hai
n. bye gunjan
g, samrat abh kya hoga
s. idea!
g. kya
s. meri bike haina tum yahi college mein raho mein bike ghar se lekar aata hoon
g. par tum pedal jaoge
s. nahi buddhu mein taxi mein chala jaunga
g. par samrat
s. shh mein bas yun gaya or yun aaya bas dus minutes
she nods her head in yes
g. theek hai par jaldi aana acha suno jaana zaruri hai kya hum college mein hi rehte haina
s. chashmish
g. okay baba
 
SHANAK
 
they reached the cinema hall (theater)
k. shaantanu hum yahaan
s. haan khanak hum yahaan mein tumhe tumhaare fav. hero ki movie dikhaane le aaya hoon imran khan ki
k. par shantanu ese to 9 baj jaayeingein or phir hummein............
s. shh ......khanak mein tumhara aaj ka din bohut special bana dena chahta hoon
background music is dheem ta na dheem tana dheem (odhni own music)
k. shantanu konsi film hai
s. i hate love stories
 
MAYUR IN CAR
 
n. mayank hum kahaan jaa rahe hain
m. cinemal hall
n. sach by god sharukh ki film hai?
m. nupur wo
n. kya
m. wo i hate love stories imran khan ki new film haina wohi
n. oh love story par mayank mujhe to na bas sharukh ki hi dekhni hai
m. nupur usne abhi tak koi new film nahi banaayi hai jo ke mein tumhe wahaan par le jaaun
 
SAJAN ON BIKE
 
g. samrat hum kahaan jaa rahe hain
s. film dekhne
g. konsi film
s. imran khan ki i hate love stories
g, samrat mujhe shahid kapoor ki dekhni hai
sam stops the bike n is shocked
s. chashmish! tumhe mujh se zyada shahid kapoor acha lagta hai
g. nahi samrat esa kuch nahi hai mein to bas yeh keh rahi thi ke
s. bas chashmish bas
g. sorry samrat Cry
s. arree chashmish mein to mazaak kar raha tha tum rona band karo chashmish plz dekho agar tum rona band nahi karogi na to mein bhi ro parunga
g. samrat tum bhi naSmile
 
 
both cars n bike reaches on 1 time at the cinema hall
 
n then every1 comes out but shaan sees gunur n khanak sees sayank both sees them with each other
mayur n sajan also sees this everyonne sees each other
 
shaan . tum sab yahaan kya kar rahe ho or wo bhi akele aye ho tum car mein to tum bike mein or wo bhi meri behen ko film dikhaane
n. bhaiya wo
k. mayank bhaiya aap or nupur to hamesha larte rehte haina
sh.or tum gunjan
g. bhaiya mein
k. mayank bhaiya mujhe aapse or samrat bhaiya se yeh umeed nahi thi
sa. par khanak
sh. nupur mujhe tumse or gunjan se yeh umeed nahi thi
 
gunur sees each other with teary eyes
shanak sees each other n smiles a little shaan winks her
 
khanak slowly says to shaan : shantanu abh mujh se nahi raha jaa raha hai she laughs
mayur n sajan gets confused
sh. kya yaar khanak tum do minute k liye chup nahi reh sakti thi ek to pehli baar meine ek prank kiya or tumne bhi apne bhaiyon ko dara diya tha
k. kya shantanu aap bhi na
n. ma maa matlab
k. matlab yeh ke humme tum sab par pehle se hi doubt tha especiall nupur tujh par or mayank bhaiya par
g. to iska matlab
sh. iska matlab yeh ke humne tumhe maaf kardiya or wese bhi hum pehle se hi jaante the ke tum dono ek doosre se kitna pyaar karte ho i mean tum dono couples
k. haan or wese bhi acha haina kya jodi lagti hai
gunur blushes
n. kya khanak tu bhi
gunjan goes to shaan
g. bhaiya aap humse naraaz to nahi haina
nupur also goes
sh. arre nahi pagli mein bhalla tum dono se kabhi naraaz ho sakta hoon
n. bilkul nahi mein esi unhoni hone hi nahi dungi
sh. tu bhi na nupur
 
khanak goes to sayank
k. sorry bhaiya meine aap se is tarah se baat ki par kya karti shaantanu ne mujh se kahaa tha
sh. meine!!
m. nai to kya meine
everyone laughs
 
sh. acha abh to 15 minute wese bhi late ho chuka hai abh movie dekhna ka to koi faida hi nahi shuru se nahi dekha to maza hi kya aayega
k. haan shaantanu
sa. ek kaam karte hain hum alag alag ghoomne jaate hain
sh. ek minute ek minute nupur tum ye film kese dekhne aasakti ho
n. kyun
sh. ismein to sharukh khan hi nahi hai
n. kya bhaiya aap bhi
sa. aap sabko pata hai ke gunjan fav. hero kaun hai
every1 : kaun
g. nahi samrat
sa. SHAHID KAPOOR
n. kyaaaaaa gunjan tu
k. tu to bari chupa rustam nikli hmm
g. kya samrat tum bhi na
sa. yeh to bike par mujh se larne hi lagi jab meine isse kaha ke hum imran khan ki movie dekhne jaa rahe hain
n. wese gunjan srk ke baad ek imran ke hi to 6 paks hain
g. di shahid ke hain
k. imran
n. srk
g. shahid
k. imran
n. huh
g. huh
k. huh
sayank n shaan watches this n their eyes r full of openedStern Smile
then gunur n khanak all 3 of them sees each other n starts laughing
sayank n shaan r still confused
sam.yeh kya tha
g. samrat wo hamaara to esa 3 class se hi chalta rehta hai
n. ha samrat hum teeno ek dusre se do minute ke liye bhi jhagra nahi kar sakte hain
m. huffhh thank god mein to darr hi gaya tha
n. jo darr gaya samjho marr gaya she laughs
sh. acha to abh hum sab couples alag alag ghoomne jaate hain but gunur tum 10 baje tak waapas ghar aajaana ok
gunur . theek hai bhaiya
sayank winks at each other n says. uhum uhum or khanak tum bhi
shaan sees them n then all laughs
 
precap :
sajan song on ao na n kya huwa yeh
shanak n mayur song also (not decided yet)
 
hey friends sorry to say that meine song ka colour change nahi kiya but i m busy thats ySmile hope u all undestand

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged

nice update......Clap n  y no pics of all of mayur,sajan,sanak,kash n srCry.... ?

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 1:53am | IP Logged
cute part.. shanak r so cute... so r the others... mayur and sajan... thanks for the pm
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sv003

nice update......Clap n  y no pics of all of mayur,sajan,sanak,kash n srCry.... ?

 
 
hey dear dont be sad actually i was in a hurry n i m even writting mujh se dosti karogi ff so thats y n i was finding the pics but i couldn't get them but in next part there will also be picsBig smile

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 2:50am | IP Logged
nice nice !!! im vryy happy that u hav written some parts on shanak !
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
awesome update
thanks 4 the pm

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