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FF MILEY JAB HUM TUM MN,SG,SK part 7 on pg 23 (Page 12)

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
gr8 update ..
just loved to read it..update it soooooooon..
and thanks for the pm/..

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
wow nice part
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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
concept-
 
simply love the cc
 
the pics are amazing
 
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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
part 1-
 
wow
 
awesome
 
khanak's b'day was awesome
 
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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
part 2-
 
shanak were awesome
 
so cute
 
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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
part 3-
 
wow
 
fantastic
 
flashbacks wala part rocking hai
 
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
part2
sorry 4 replying late.
bt it was awesome girlClap
highly romantic n d pixs added more passion on it.... Embarrassed
shanak  part was really mindblowing yaarClap.... beautiful writing.Clap
loved the songBig smile........bt this song remember me Mayur..Big smile.Big smile 
thanks for the pm. Smile

Part3
awesomeClap
mindblowing updateClap
flashback was toooo gudBig smileClap
loved itBig smile
loved their shocking expressionLOLLOL
waiting for next updateSmile
update soon,Smile
thanks for the pm,Smile


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 01 February 2011 at 4:19am

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
                            PART 4
 
 
the scene starts when khanak gets up n sees herself in the bed n looks here n there
k. shantanu aap kahaan hain
suddenly she sees a letter which shaan had written n with the letter there is a red rose
she opens it
s.dear khanak sorry meine tumhe uthaya nahi wo kya haina k mein tumhari meethi si neend kharab nahi karna chahta hai so bye bye acha ek baat to batana bhool hi gaya  aaj gunur tumhe call kareingi ok kuch kaam se bye love u
khanak blushes
k. hmm to gunur mujhe call kareingi tab tak mein tayyar hojati hoon
on the other side GUNUR
the two beautiful girls were getting ready
 
 
jab jab chudee khanke re, jab jab payal chhanke re
jab jab sawan barse re

oye bole bole bole bole bole bole bole jiya

 
 
 
 
piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2)
subah sham kare meraa jiya, jiya jiya jiya jiya
piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2)

 
naa jane kyon dil dhadke, ghadee ghadee yeh kyon tadpe
ho bedardee tune isko dard yeh kaisa diya
piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2)


 
 
 
 
they were missing their mom
 

nind udd jatee hai chain bhee khota hai
tanha tanhayee me han jane kya hota hai


rang khil jata hai aankh khul jatee hai
aaina dekhu toh sharam see aatee hai

 
 
betabi deke mujhko kyon hosh yeh meraa liya
piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2)

jab kisee ladke se han ladkee milatee hai
mere dil me chahat kee han chandanee khilatee hai
jab kisee ke ghar me dholkee bajatee hai
jab kisee iki dolee phulo se sajatee hai
meree bhee divanee dhadkan karne lage iya iya
piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2)


 
subah sham kare meraa jiya, jiya jiya jiya jiya
piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2)


naa jane kyon dil dhadke, ghadee ghadee yeh kyon tadpe
ho bedardee tune isko dard yeh kaisa diya
piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2)

piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya..........
 
 
 
(hey friends i thought to add shaan also in this song but was in a hurry so was not able to hope u all like it)
 
after some time GUNUR
g. di dii kahaan ho tum di
n. aayi gunjan bas paanch minute aur (from bathroom)
g. di abh itna bhi kya tayyar hona hum sirf shopping k liye hi to jaa rahe hain or wo bhi khanak k saath
n. khanak! oh no gunjan tune khanak ko phone to kar liya hai na
g. kya nahi to
nupurs cuts her
n.kyaaa (she comes out)
g.di tumne abhi tak khanak ko call nahi kiya
n. nahi to mujhe laga tu kardegi
g. par di tumne hi to kaha tha na k..
n. arre gunjan zyada waqt barbaad naa kar warna or bhi late hojayega usse jaldi phone kar warna wo to mera kachoombar hi bana degi
gunjan smiles a little
g.di tum bhi na
 
on the other side khanak is sitting waiting for gunur's call
 
GUNUR
n. arre ruk aaj uska birthday hai to har saal ki tarah is saal bhi hum dono mil kar hi usse wish kareingein ok
gunjan nods in yes
g. okay
they called khanak n
gunur: HAPPY BIRTHDAY KHANAK
k.thank u so much friends lekin tumne raat ko kyun nahi kiya
n. arre khanku hum itne bhi bewakuf nahi hain jo tumhe or tumhari dono bhaiyon ki oops sorry dono ladlon bhaiyon ki conversation kharaab karoon or uske baad uhum uhum mere bhai ki or meri hone waali bhabhi ki
khanak blushes
g. di jo baat karni hai wo to abhi tak ki hi nahi
k. kya baat (the phone is on speaker)
n. oops arre haan sorry gunjan haan acha to khanak tum 15 minutes mein tayyar raho hum bas tumhe shopping k liye pick karne k liye aarahe hain or wese bhi humne kal shaan bhaiya ko to bata hi diya tha or un hi ki kripa se tu tayyar to ho hi chuki hogi haina
k. acha to abh tu phone rakh or tayyar hone ja
n. acha theek hai rakhti hoon
k. arre sun sun sun sun sun
n. kya huwa
k. nupur to jaanti to hogi na ke tumhe bachpan se jaanti hoon
n. haan to
k. to har baar ki tarah agar tune is baar bhi 15 minutes keh kar  ek ghanta lagaya na to mujh se bura koi nahi hoga or wo bhi mere hi birthday ke din samjhi ke nahi
n. gunjan ye le phone
nupur slowly whispers in gunjan's ear dekha meine kaha tha na ban gaya mera kheema
g. correction di kheema nahi kachoombar
gunur laughs a little
n. haan haan wohi
k. nupur meine sun liya or wese bhi 10 minutes to tu ese hi waste kar chuki hai now u just have 5 minutes actually u both have
n. par khanak
k. no more arguments
n. theek hai bhabhi aap ka hukum sarankhon par
all 3 of them laughs
 
 
after 15 minutes
nupur calls khanak
k. hello
n.hello khanak tu tayyar hai
k.haan aapki meherbani se bohut pehle se hi hoon
n. khanak tu bhi na acha sun tu jaldi niche aaja
 
khanak comes down
gunur are standing outside
k. arre tum bahaar kyun kharre ho andar betho wese driver hai kya
g. nahi wo..
n. gunjan kyun khanak tum kisi or ko expect kar rahi thi
khanak blushes
k. nai esi koi baat nahi hai
n. acha theek hai mein aage beth jaati hoon
k. par kyun
n. haan baat to theek hai abh hum teeno itni bhi moti nahi hain ke ek saath peeche na beth sakein
g. par di
nupur gives her a signal
she understood
k. theek hai chalo (in a sad mood)
nupur n gunjan sits in the car but when khanak was going to sit shantanu comes out from the driving seat
khanak was amazingly surprised
k. shaa shaantanu aap
gunur comes out
khanak hugs him aap aaye na mujhe pata tha
n. uhum uhum kya bhaiya aap bhi hum bachon ke saamne sharam nahi aati kya
they broke the hug
g. di abh bas bhi karo meri bhabhi ko aur pareshaan mat karo
s. gunjan tu bhi
n. haan bhai abh mein kaun hoti hoon tumhari bhabhi ko pareshaan shaan shaan karne wali
khanak blushes
n. yeh haq to sirf paresh shaaaaaaan shaan ko haina
s. nupur tuje to mein
n. sorry sorry sorry bhaiya
k. abh chalein
n. chalo
gunur sits
shantanu opens the door for khanak she sits n they drive
 
in the car
n. bhaiya wese not fair aaj tak aapne humme kabhi bhi darwaza khol kar nahi diya or abh bhabhi abhi tak to aayi hi nahi hai or abhi se hi hamari value kam hoti jaa rahi hai dekh rahi haina tu gunjan
g. haan di aap theek keh rahi ho
all four of them sees each other n then
 
 
they laughs
k. nups tu bhi na
s. wese tumhare liye darwaza mein nahi tumhara pati khole ga
n. bhaiya kya aap bhi (she blushes) 
k. wese nupur
n. hmm
k. mein puchna to bhool hi gayi ke hum kis cheez ki shopping k liye ja rahe hain
gunur sees each other
gunur : khanak!!
k. kya huwa
g. khanak tumhe pata nahi hai
k. nahi kyun kya huwa
n. by god khanak hadh kardi yar tumne hum tum dono ki shaadi ki shopping karne k liye ja rahe hain
khanak blushes
s. oye hoye
s. acha to hum pohunch gaye chalo
gunur sees eachother
n. kya chalo bhaiya agar aap sair hain to hum sawa sair hain (esa hi kuch hota haina friends) hum kya aapko bewakuf dikhte hain
s. abh... nahi to par kyun
g. bhaiya shaadi ka jora lene jaa rahe hain aur aap wo shaadi ke din se pehle nahi dekh sakte
khanak blushes
gunur sees this n smiles
s. arre yeh kya not fair
n. bhaiya abhi college jayiye hum aapko call kareingein tab aap aajayiyega kyun ke hum larkiyan hai araam se 3 4 ghante to lag hi jaayeingein haina gunjan
g.bilkul theek kaha
s. theek hai bye
gunur + khanak : bye
 
they reached the shop
 
k. gunur tum to mera fav. colour jaante hi hona
gunur : hai meri maa pink n red na
k. yup
 
they goes to every shop but they didn't like any joda or saari
n. by god thak gaye
k. chalo ghar chalte hain kuch bhi pasand nahi aya
nupur winks gunjan
n. khanak humne tumhae saath ek chota sa mazak kiya tha
k. matlab
g. matlab yeh ke waapas pehli waali shop par chalo
k. par
gunur: shhh par war kuch nahi chalo
 
they reached there
gunur took her to the room nupur khanak ki aankhon par haath rakh deti hai n when she removes her hand she sees
 

k. woww thanku so much gunur
gunur smiles
 
precap:
 
s. nupur gunjan mujhe tum dono se yeh umeed nahi thi
k. bhaiya mujhe aap se or samrat bhaiya se yeh umeed nahi thi
 
 
 
 
friends do tell me  did u all like my part n plz mujhe yeh batao k mein shanak k liye konsa song choose karo n sajan k liye bcoz meine already mayur ke liye choose kar liya hai but it is a surprise ke wo song kis liye hain
 
acha mujhe yeh batao ke yeh wala song kis pair par match karega ya phir shanak n sajan dono par bcoz mein mayur k liye kuch or choose kiya hai
 
bholi si surat kis par rakhoon shanak or sajan mein se ya phir dono par

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