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MishtyShona IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Nadia, that was HOT n yummy.....Blushing

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Krishna_Sourav IF-Addictz
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
beautiful parts.
read all one shots.
waiting for next one and pls pm me when  u'll post next part.
Chotii Goldie
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Oh. Em. Gee.

That was surely Delectable. Wow. My new fav OS of the lot!

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Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing woman, you KNOW how to create a moment... and you created plenty of those in this..

Geet's adorable comments and gestures at wanting to complete her tasks in the beginning...
Maan leaning against a wall smirking...
Maan kissing his wife senseless...
Geet's reaction to Maan's touch...
Maan simply Speaking! that sexy voice of his would intoxicate ANYONE!
^^ all that, everything else too, was depicted fantastically!!!


This was all SO perfect to actually happen. You totally kept the essence of the characters and that's why this was all the more fun and amazing!!

LOVED IT NADIA!!!XXXXX

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
omg Nadz!!!! ShockedShockedShockedShocked
 
damn girl thi is just.....*melts into a puddle of goo* i can't....wowee....speechless yaaro! EmbarrassedLOLLOLLOL
 
 
Better then mine in everyway!!!! Big smile
 
 
Please write some more!!! ClapClapClap
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged

So sweet she make chocolate mousse.  Loved it when maan said that he cannot decide if geet or the chocolate is sweeter.BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing

 

Any excuse to get close to geet. love their romantic scenes together BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged

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When is scene 5 coming up Nadia????
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Oh My God!!! my cheeks are burning hot right now...hehehe...
I always think food and desire go hand in hand and that you just utilized for our bedroom minded thinking...hehehe...well if Maan's got bedroom eyes Geet has her trademark innocent and sexy smouldering sweet voice and that creates a lethal combination for the pair's chemistry...well i cannot stop ranting about them but finally you wrote wonderfully and yes in a delicious manner...hehehe...keep it coming Nadia we too hvnt been served yet with dinner...hehehe... Great work and gud illustrations...
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
Can't believe I've only just read ur scene - u leave me wanting more lol! How hotttttt was that scene on a scale from 1 -10? its off the charts lol. I can visualise ur scenes perfectly . . . if only we could see ur scenes in Geet for real!Day Dreaming amazing work and thanx 4 the pm!

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