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Maneet FF: Dreams ~1~ Part 21 page 143 (Page 29)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
jia....its awesome dear.....very well writtenClapClapClap

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Haye loved it especially how you portrayed maans feeling and how his growing used to her and liking her actions and also admiring her and awe they were finally snuggled up with each other so cute and awe he wants to know her interest and now how his eyes follow her around and she's feeling shy and conscious loved the last bit where they actually spoke a paragraph to each other lol anyways greag update loved it and can't wait for the party Smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
love it.........awesome update..........cant wait for party Wink

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
jia really loved the update especially whn maan was fumbling and thn whn geet cut her finger and maan was there in a minute just loved it yaar

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
awesome......Clap
Clapthe chemistry building between them is very good........
hopefully they go for a romantic date or something soon....
or may be dadima gifts them a honeymoon package...Wink

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Hmm...u wanted a verdict,right..??so bataau i nahi bataau...kya karu kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha..... thoda ruko kuch der soch ke bataati hu.....

LOLdarr gayi kya....update was really cool Jia....u have been successful in bringing out the passion btw them....and now the atmosphere around them is charged with tension....which will get reflected in the party I hope....I'm sooo looking forward to the party now.....plss continue sooon...I can't wait for more than 24 hrs at the most....LOL

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sindu555

oye jia ... faltoo ki tension le rahi thee tum ... the update was awesome ... Awww thankyou thankyou...hehehehe...

loved the way they are falling for each other ... Maan's nervousness while gifting her the sari was adorable .. poor thing .. THE MSK .... nervous to the core  LOL Bechara MSK...biwi ke saamne kaise fat ti hai iski....

continue soon will surely do...Big smile

love

Sana
 Thankyou Sana Hug

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