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Maneet FF: Dreams ~1~ Part 21 page 143 (Page 20)

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ur updating today.........RIGHT??Ermm

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Originally posted by komlika

ur updating today.........RIGHT??Ermm
Yes I am...Smile just a few more minutes...

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Thankyou all you liked my FF... Smile Please excuse any mistakes....
 
Part 5

 

Dev sat on the edge of the bed wondering what had happened…how was this even possible. He paid no attention to what the attractive lady dressed in a formal wear was saying to him…everything looked so puzzling. He again picked up the newspaper which had his brother's picture along with his wife's, Geet. When had that happened and how? Bro had never wanted to get married, to phir yeh sab…..and daadima, what did she do? what strings had she pulled to get Bro to agree to all this??  he thought…

Naintara slowly entwined his arms around his neck pulling him in for a kiss. " Dev, what are you thinking now?, I am  here in front of you and you seem to be lost somewhere. Kiske bare mei soch rahe hain?" She asked slowly making her way to nibble his earlobe.
 
 
" Hmmmm" Dev closed his eyes in pleasure, he loved it when she did that. She was the one for whom he left his family and moved to Mumbai. He knew how Daadi and Maan would get mad as they never liked Naintara but he was heads-over-heels in love with her for as long he could remember. He gave in the moment of pleasure pushing all his worried thoughts about what might have happened in Delhi way back in his head. He would sort that mystery later, right now there was a gorgeous lady who needed his full attention and he would have to give her just that. He smirked as he pulled Naintara for a full on mouth kiss.
 
 
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Maan was immersed with work when his phone rang, without looking at the caller ID , he picked it up "Hello, Maan Singh Khuarana here"
 
"yeh lo..ab unke phone par call kiya hai to who khud hi honge naab peon to phone uthane se raha " Geet slapped her forehead wondering what was wrong with her husband.
 
"Hello" Maan repeated when he didn't get any answer, he looked at the phone….repeating his greeting again…a little louder this time…"HELLO" and checked the number. Seeing that the call originated from his own house, only one name came to his mind " Geet??" he wondered.
 
"Geet beta, baat ho gayi?" he heard his Daadi's voice on the other end. He wondered if she would say something or rather what she wanted to say when he heard the click and the call disconnected.
 
"Hai babaji..unko kaisa pata chala ki main hoon ? Ab kya karoon? Dubara phone karoon…agar gussa ho gaye to?" She fidgeted with the end of her sari not been able to make a decision.
 
He looked at the phone frustrated. Why didn't she utter anything if she had nothing to say, he angrily thought and if there was nothing to say what was the need to call, he would have gone home by the end of the day. If she needed anything, Daadi was there with her….his mind was going round and round in circles when Adi walked into his cabin with a file.
 
" Sir, yeh file ready hai, sab details maine check kar liye hain. Aap ek baar dekhna chahe to dekh sakte hain. " Maan looked up to see a flustered Adi stand in front of the table.
 
"Aur kuch?" He growled…
 
"G..g..ggoo Goodnight Sir" leaving the file on the table, he made a mad dash for the door.
 
"Goodnight??" Raising his eyes from the file that held his attention, he looked at the clock which showed him the day had ended and everybody was ready to leave as it was already 7pm. Maan got up from his chair and walked up to the glass wall and opened the blinds. He looked at all his employees gathering their things to head back to their homes. Maan took out his cell and hit the call button…and waited for somebody to pick up. One ring, two…three…as the number of rings increased so did his heart rate. Before anybody could pick it up, he disconnected and walked in frustration to his chair, picked up the file Adi had left earlier to scan through it but his eyes fell on his cellphone. He again reached for it, thought a while, then hit redial and waited patiently.
 
 
"Hello" came the curt reply. Her voice was soft and melodious.
 
 
"Ummm…tumne abhi thodi der pehle call kiya tha" he stated as a matter of fact instead of questioning her and without waiting for her reply, he continued "kuch kaam tha?"
 
 
"Ji, nahi woh… Daadima ne kaha tha call karne ke liye….aapko yaad dilaana tha ki…" before she could finish "haan…Main thodi der mei aa raha hoon" he replied and slammed the phone without waiting for a reply.
 
 
"Yeh konsa tareeka hai baat karne ka….na koi hello na bye" Geet muttered under her breath……"Main thodi der mei aa raha hoon " she mimicked him as she made her way back to where Daadi sat.
 
Maan exhaled and creased his forehead…trying to sooth his temple with his finger..He didn't know what bothered him more, the fact that his Daadi thought he needs reminding that he was a married now or the fact that she hadn't called him on her own will.. But why would she even call you Maan, his guilty conscious ate at him, have you noticed the way you talk to her? Just now, you cut in her sentence and unnecessarily shouted at her. Who in their right mind would make a call to you to get bashed for no fault of theirs? No one, he concluded, not even his wife, he mentally stumbled. He sighed as he picked up the file he was looking at and made his way to the elevators.
 
"Geet, beta kis ka phone tha?" Savitri Devi asked her as she looked up from the magazine she was browsing.
 
"Daadima, Maan ka. Lekin isse pehle main unko yaad karaati ki aapki Mumbai ki ticket karwaani hai, phone disconnect ho gaya."  Geet replied while taking a seat next to her. "Unhone kaha hai ki woh abhi thodi der mei aa rahe hain"
 
Daadima nodded as she turned a page…She had wanted to go away and meet her sister's family for a long time now but never got around it but now was a perfect time, this way she could give the newly weds some alone time.
 

Geet adorned the blue saree Maan had picked up earlier in the morning for her without her knowledge… She had been on her way to the room when she saw Maan shove something inside the almirah.  Later when he left, she opened the almirah when one of her sarees, the blue one precisely fell on her feet. She in that instant knew that was the piece Maan had thrown inside..maybe it fell when he had opened the almirah to take something of his… but he had touched that cloth and she had then and there decided to wear it for the day.

 
Maan had made it in time for dinner and he was surprised to see Geet wrapped in that blue piece talking animatedly about something with Daadima. His gaze never left Geet and when she looked at him by mistake, he flashed a quick smile that made her cheeks warm. And the way she blushed and looked down instantly warmed his insides.
 
They all had their dinner together as a family. Savitri devi and Geet made most of the conversation and Maan just pitched in when asked something. He looked at Geet and his Daadi getting along so well and smiled inwardly.
 
"Maan, aapko yaad hain na ki aapne hamari Mumbai ki ticket karwaani hai?"
 
"Daadima, itni jaldi kya hai jaane ki? You can go next month…vaise bhi abhi monsoon season chal raha hai." He tried to postpone her visit, thinking about what would Geet do all day alone at home. Atleast Daadi been at home gave her some company, he reasoned with himself.
 
"No, get my tickets for next week." She said sternly. "Oh, I forgot to tell you, I have arranged a small party Saturday evening here for both of you. "
 
Maan opened his mouth to protest again when Savitri devi raised her hand stopping him "and before you throw a fit, let me remind you, we haven't had the reception party for Geet so I decided to have  a little something"
 
Maan looked at Geet who was looking down with her downcast eyes "Theek hai Daadima, jaisa aap chahein"
 
Geet looked up on hearing her husband agree to all Daadima had just said. He was eating his dinner with a stern expression. When during the day, Daadima had informed her about all this, she was so sure that Maan will never agree. And here he consented without a fight….. not even one argument. What was happening? Hadn't Daadima herself said, he loathed parties. Then why had he approved to all this so easily, Hey babaji kahin yeh is baat ko le kar mujhse naraaz to nahi ho jayeinge....lekin Geet ismei teri kya galti hai? Tune thodi na bola hai daadima ko party karne ke liye… chalo  choddo… Geet tu chup chaap apna khana khaa…galti se bhi unki taraf mat dekhna…
 
Maan was working on his file when Geet entered the room…she had already changed into her pink polka dots night wear and Maan's face fell….he liked seeing her dressed in a saree. She walked swiftly over to her side of the bed. Maan eyed her every movement. He loved the way she fidgeted with the blanket, looking at him when she thought he was busy with his work and then hurriedly covered herself. So now I don't even get a "Goodnight" he thought. He was amused at his wife and her antics. She puzzled him to no end. She would take care of his every need, call him at work (even if Daadima asked her to), waited for him to come home and now when they were alone, she didn't even bother to say a few words.
 
Maan had almost finished up reviewing the file, so he straightened himself and walked like a panther towards the bed. Geet had shut her eyes tight and she looked scared….why was she scared? Was she scared of him? He stopped in his tracks and reverted back to his side of the bed and pretended to read something. He would go crazy…no he was already crazy for playing such games with her. A few minutes had passed and he was still staring at the same page of some random book he had picked from the side table.
 
"Ummmm….Geet" He called her softly wondering if she would reply. He waited anxiously and when he heard nothing he bent over to look at her. At the same time Geet turned to lie on her back. Maan moved back with a lightening speed and pretended to read the book. He slowly turned his face towards her but to his discontent found that she was sound asleep.
 
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I know I didnot include the teaser...sorry...it will be in the next part....promise....Do leave your comments, I love reading them....
 
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awesome.......... dev is alive..........i hope he doesnt create problem for maaneet.........cant wait to read moreSmile

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Thanks for the great update! Continue soon...

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