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Promise and Pyar FF#3 ~Part 545 to 548 | Pg 20 (Page 20)

wajiha-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged
awesome parts.
loved them.
update soon.

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-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Part 545

Geet gets up in the morning and finds herself in Maan's embrace...
Geet tries to remove his arms but her tightens it...

M (sleepishly with eyes closed): Sone do na!
G: Maan humein 11 baje nikal na hai!
M: Ummm...
G: Maan saath baj rahe hain! Utthiye na!
Maan gently opens his eyes... Hides his face in her neck...
M: Thodi der aur sone do!
Geet blushes....
G: Mujhe to chhodiye...
M: Nahi! 10 minute aur....
Geet smiles... After 2 minutes she feels wetness on her neck... Maan was placing wet kisses on her neck....
G: Maaannn... (she moans)
Maan goes upto her lips and nibbles onto it as she responds to it very eagerly...

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Part 546

Finally after 10 minutes Maan breaks off the kiss gasping for air and kisses her forehead...
M:Good Morning!
G: Good Morning! (she smiles)

Finally Geet gets up and goes for a bath.. She comes out wearing light pink kurta with slim fit jeans...

She sits on the dressing table combing her hair.... Maan comes from behind, kisses her wet hair and walks off to the bathroom...

He comes out in his towel and Geet was sitting on the couch reading newpaper....

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Part 547

Maan sees his blue jeans and white shirt kept on the bed...
M (thinks):  Finally meri wife, ek wife ki tarah behave kar rahi hai!

Maan slips on his jeans and then removes the towel... 

Geet looks up at his bare body... She smiles.. He wears his white shirt... He finds his lower button was missing and was removing his shirt when...

G: Rukiye...
She walks to him... 
G: Main kar deti hoon! she brings needle thread and extra button and starts fixing it onto his shirt...

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-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Part 548

Geet bends down to cut the thread and her lips touch his chest...
It sent shivers down both their spines...

Geet then turns...
M: Button to laga do Geet!
Geet blushes...
M: Please!
Geet turns around and starts buttoning his shirt. His hand holds her hand...
G: Maan! Chhodiye na!
M: Kyun? Main to romance ke mood mein hoon!
G: Maan! dadi neeche hongi! Breakfast bhi banana hai!
Maan smiles...
M: par pehle mujhe meri Good Morning AK chahiye!
G: Wo to aapne utthte hi le li thi na!
M: Mujhe ek aur chahiye!
Geet blushes...
G: Abhi nahi! Baad mein!
M: Baad mein kab?
G: Breakfast ke baad! Ab chhodiye...
M: Pakka?
G: Haan!
Geet runs down to the kitchen leaving Maan with a huge Grin on his face!

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Rocks.Dhara IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
awesome dear....!!!

loving the closness and m very excited for their HM...

pls continue...!!!

Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 25 January 2011 at 7:34am
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loved the parts yaar

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puth IF-Dazzler

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lovely updates mina

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