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Promise and Pyar FF#3 ~Part 545 to 548 | Pg 20 (Page 16)

-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Part 539

She comes out of trance when 2 cold hands slide onto her bare waist...
M (huskily): Kya kar rahi ho?
Maan kisses the nape of her shoulder...
G: Wo... ummm... main...
M: Sharma kyun rahi ho?
G: Umnmmm wo....
M: Tumne sirf apne pati ko kiss kiya hai! Humare Padosi ko nahi!
She turns around...
G: Ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain?
M: Ab maine kya keh diya?
G: Main padosi ko kyun kiss karungi?
M: To kya mujhe karogi? (raises his eyebrows and smiles)
G: Haan...(she blurts)

Then she realizes what she said and hides her face in Maan's chest!

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-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Part 540

Maan smiles and hugs her...
M: I Love You!
G: I Love You too!
Maan kisses on her forehead while in the hug...
G: Maan...
M: Ummm...
G: Main apse kuch poochhna chahti hoon!
M: Poochho!
G: Ummm... Ye 143 ka kya matlab hota hai?
Maan breaks the hug...
M: Tum sach mein jaanna chahti ho?
Geet nods in a YES....

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-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Part 541

M: 143 ka matlab hai... I Love You!
Geet opens her eyes wide...
G: Par kaise?
M: 'I' is 1 as it has 1 alphabet... 'LOVE' is 4 as it has 4 alphabets and 'YOU' is 3 as it has 3 alphabets!
G: Par ye jo 4 hai... Uski jagah to bohot saare words aa sakte hain... to Love hi kyun?
M: Uska logic nahi pata mujhe... Aur waise bhi mere aur tumhare beech sirf aur sirf LOVE hai!
Geet smiles...
G: Aap jaake table par baitthiye main khana lagati hoon!
M: Tumne banaya hai?
G: Hmm...
M: To phir main zara mandir mein haath jod ke aata hu!
G: Kyun?
M: Taake hume se kisi ko food poisoning na ho!
M: Geet! Main bhi tumhe samjha du ke mere naam mein bhi single 'M', double 'A' aur single 'N" hai!
Geet gets angry and is about to go!
Maan holds her hand and pulls her back!

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Part 542

M: Mazaak kar raha tha baby!
M: Sorry!
Maan holds his ears and say...
M: I'm really sorry!
M: 143...
Geet smiles but tries to maintain fake anger...
Maan notices the smile...
Maan bends down to her lips and gives a small peck!
M: I love you!
She smiles...
She gives him a peck on his lips...
G: Ab aap jao table pe!
M: Main help karta hoon plate lagane mein!
G: Table set hai!
M: Phir bhi main help karunga!
Maan helps Geet carry the dishes to the table and they enjoy a lovely peaceful and romantic dinner...

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
awesome updates............i read first thread it was hilarious.....i fell of my chair so many timeD'oh..........geet T&C were too goodROFL...........maan action movieROFL.........traffic policeman..........ROFL

Edited by komlika - 24 January 2011 at 12:39pm

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-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Part 543

Daadi comes by then but she is too tired so she goes back to her room...

Maan and Geet in their bedroom...
Geet changes into her night suit and starts packing her last bit of clothes...
Maan comes from behind and hugs her...
G: Maan! Chhodiye na! Packing karne dijiye!
M: Ummm.... (He kisses her neck)
Geet felt shivers down her spine...
Maan kisses her earlobe and whispers...
M: I Love You!
Geet blushes...

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 24 January 2011 at 12:52pm

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Part 544

M: Jaldi karo Geet! Mujhe sona hai!
G: To aap jaake so jao!
M: Nahi! Aaj mujhe tumhe apni baahon mein lekar sona hai!
Geet blushes even harder...
Maan helps her pack and picks her up and places her on the bed... He then lies down next to her, take her into his embrace...
Maan peck on her lips...
M: Good Night!
Geet kisses on his cheek...
M: Good Night!
Both sleep with a smile od satisfaction and eager for their honeymoon!

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 24 January 2011 at 12:54pm

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged

wow so innocence  Geet & funny she doesnt know 143  ROFLROFLROFL

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