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Promise and Pyar FF#3 ~Part 545 to 548 | Pg 20 (Page 12)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sindu555

Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

Hmmm.... will try to write well!!! But i cant promise funny the amount of funny updates!

dekh tu phir se tension le rahee hai ... just chillax babes ... be yourself ... this is not the first time we are reading ur work....  we know u write very welll and am sure u'll do complete justice to this one too 
 

chill babes chill 


serioulsly...chill maar...aur jaldi update karr...!!!

u donno mina..bt u ROCK babes...Smile

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

Thank San and Roops!Big smile


mera thanks kaha hai minaCryCryCry

lolz

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Part 536

Geet frowns..
G: Kya?
M: Ke main apni sweet si wife ka beautiful sa chehra nahi dekh pa raha hu!
Geet blushes...
Geet kisses on his back... It sent shivers down his spine...
 Maan loosens his grip on the hand and turns around to find his wife looking mesmerizing than ever!
Geet kept her hand on his chest and he slipped his hand on her bare waist and locked at the back pulling her closer...
Geet shivered but loved the feel of his grip...
M: Aaj subha ka AK to tumne chhod diya!
G: To ab kar lete hain...
Maan smiles at her innocence...

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
then maan will said...m all set babes...lolz...isi liye to yaha aaya hu..!!!

nakul and chandu ke sapno to phod ke apna romance ka mahal khada karne...hehehe

mina love u yaar...very sweet update...carry on babes..we r waiting..!!!

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Part 537

Maan slowly brushes his lower lip with her upper lip and sucks it. Geet responds by sucking his lower lip... They start exploring each others mouth and the kiss becomes a very passionate one! They keep going on! Stop to take a breath but Maan starts again.... Geet's hand going through his hair...

He is kissing so passionately as if there is no tomorrow and Geet is responding to his kiss and his touch on her neck...

Maan gives a chain of kisses on her face and kisses the side of her neck and remains there with his lips touching her neck.... Geet holds on to his hair and both want the time to STOP!

Maan lifts his head up and finds Geet all red...

M: I Love You!

G: I Love You too!!!

M: Main change karke aata hoon!

G: Main dinner lagati hoon!

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
@Prats: Terko thanks kyu? Tu to meri behen hai na? Behen ko kya Thanks!

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

@Prats: Terko thanks kyu? Tu to meri behen hai na? Behen ko kya Thanks!


oye hoye dear...loved the mina version of maneet...u r too good darling...loving AK of maneet EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
WOW
Mina awesomeeee updates
Love it
Ufff soo romantic
u doing great
Any more coming?
Continue soon
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