Originally posted by: ffkhanReserved. will comment tomorrow again after finishing reading it.π³
Originally posted by: ffkhanSorry Neethz I am late to comment. But u know, better late than never.ππ³
Gowwwwwssssssssssshhhhhhhsh!!!!!!! It's so wonderful, lovely Abhiyalicious OS.π It's so touching and emotional and almost made me cry..!!Aww!! Thanks, Zana! So sweet of you!
So u are describing the scene of ur imagination that's when Piya was running away through the backyard. Yeah that's right, it's "Piya", not "Pia".π Please edit your post and convert the name into the right spelling.π³Is it?? Does it matter?π
Okay coming to the FF again, here Abhay caught her in the backyard and told everything truth about him.π² The confession about his truth was so.................π.......made me cry.Aww! I know, right?? He hates his existenceπ
Abhay is really helpless, and his life has really became a joke for everyone. i wish, everyone could understood his sorrow, but it's not possible as that will harmful to his life if everyone knows the truth.Hmmm...you're right. But it wasn't everyone, it was Piaπ³
In this situation it's normal for Abhay to not believe Piya. I can feel Abhay-Piya both of their feeling, I can run with their emotions.
After then whatever Piya told Abhay is so true! She cares for Abhay, that's why she's doing all these. bcoz she can't tolerate that people would say ill of him behind his presence. Piya can't see him alone like this.Yes, I've said time and again that Pia has adopted the wrong way but her intentions are right. She's not bad at heartπ
It's really tough for Abhay to forget all of his bitterful past, to forget the person whom he loved years after years. How painful......πAnd specially when her doppelganger in front of him! i can imagine his agonyπ
Some of Piya's lines were best of the OS- "There's still hope and light for me."
"Maybe you'll never love me, but you can't stop me from loving you." So true...........Aww!!π³
The last scene portraying was awesome. Take care and do writing more......................ππΌThanks for your lovely comment, Zana!! Do check out my other OS which I wrote the very next day after this one whenever you get timeπ³All the best for your exams! Study well!π€
Because it's not Piya's original name spelling, that's why. Do u feel good when anyone tell you Neeti not Neethi?Originally posted by: Chill_OutWhat's wrong with Pia but? π³
Originally posted by: ffkhanBecause it's not Piya's original name spelling, that's why. Do u feel good when anyone tell you Neeti not Neethi?
Well, according to me right spelling is one of the most important matter.Originally posted by: Chill_Out
Hmmm...good point. But she's fiction. It doesn't really matter. And...check this out!
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