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HUMM.....HUM TUM.__FF ##PART 10## PAGE 30. (Page 5)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:37am | IP Logged
wow.. nice concept.... pls add me to yr PM list...

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HI  MY  FRIENDS  I  AM  BACK  WITH  MY   UPDATE..............................................PLEASE  LEAVE   SOME  LOVELY  COMMENTS ........I  LOVE  TO READ  THE  AND  DO  HIT  THE  LIKE  BUTTON.

PART 4:

GEET: WHAT?  but  why.
she  rushed  in  maan  roon  but  it  was  lock  ...................
MAAN:  go  away.
GEET: please  say  me  whats  my  mistake ......she  cried  louder.............
MAAN:   dont  cry  i will  not  melt..
GEET:  i  need  hanky  to  clean  my  nose.
MAAN:  go  to  that  chunny.....
GEET:  HE  IS  BUNNY.
MAAN:  what  ever  just  leave
GEET:  how  can    i  take  his  hanky.
MAAN: why?
GEET:  because  i  only  use  your  hanky.
MAAN:  O O O..take  my  hanky  and  you  kiss  to  him  WOW.
GEET:  maan  please  open  the  door  ....you  know  i  cant  stay  with out  talking  to  you.
maan  loves  geet  sincerity the  way  she  always  say  she  love  him  and  he  know  may  be  for  outer  world  she  is  ugly  but for  him  she  is  the  beautiful girl  in  world  her  eyes,her  lips,her cheeks  which  turn  red  when  she  cries ,her  way  of  talking ,the  way  she  get  scared  of  dark  and  call  him........her  white  skin  for  which  he  some time  looses  control  .
he  know  that  he  is  mature  and  he  knows  everything  but  geet  too  need  to  grow  up.
MAAN: maan  slowly  open  the  door  clearing  his  tears  and see  geet  standing in  front  of  his  door......
he  passes  his  hanky but  does not  open  the  door  fully.
MAAN: take.
GEET:  maan  what  my  fault  ?please  say  .........
MAAN: nothing  he  dont  want  to  say anything  to  geet  .he  is  very  reserved guy.
MAAN:  umm  how  many  times  you  kissed  that  idiot  bunny?
GEET: umm....confuse  look
MAAN:  say  me...
GEET: only  thousand  times........
maans  mouth  wide  open .
MAAN:  GET  LOSTTTTTTTTTT
he  scream  ..geet  got  scared  first  time  he  is  angry  with  her  and  that  to  this  extent .she  was  in  feer  and  left ...........she  went  to  her  room  and cries  her  eyes  out.............
MAAN:  maan  closes  his  eyes..


AFTER  ONE  WEEK  A  DAY  BEFORE  LEAVING  BACK  TO  INDIA .
EVERY BADY  WAS  PRESENT  ON  THE  DINNING  TABLE .....
MR.HANDA:   where  is  geet?
MRS .HANDA: she  is  in  her  room doing  some  work...
MAAN:  maan  was  curious  now ...what  she  might  be  with  that  bunny  and  what  type  of  work  she  is doing..........
he  completed  his  work  fast and  went  to  see  geet.
geet  wasin  the  shower talking some non sense ....
MAAN: where  is  geet?  he heard  her  talking he  smiles...after  oe  week.
GEET:  see  BUNNY  what  you  have  done  i  can   go  out  now
the  word  bunny  was  enough  to strike maan .........
MAAN: what  the  hell bunny  is  doing  with  MY geet......
he  cant  control  any  more he  cant  make  out  what  both  are  doing.
GEET: ok  baba  dont  be  angry  i  no  what  i  should  do  to  make you  happy.
maan  again  heard  her  kissing  UUMMMAAHHHH
MAAN: geet  open  the  door .he  knocks  the  door  hardly ...
GEETTTTTTTTTTTT
before  he  rushed  in  the  bathroom  geet  opened  the  door..
he  stood  there  first  time  he  saw  geet  without  two  ribbons her  hair  open  teasing her  cheeks..
he  is  mesmerized by  her  beauty.......
she  was  standing  in  front  of  him  in  the  towel  only  and   her  legs  were  naked.....
GEET:  maan  ....she  said in  fear...
what  happen  maan  why   are  you  screaming?
maan  came  back  to  his  sense ....
MAAN: who  is  there  inside  the  bathroom  with  you? to  whom  you  was  kissing............he  cant  control  himself  any  more .
GEET:  no  one.
MAAN  RUSHED  TO  THE  BATHROOM  TO  SEE  WHO  WAS  THERE....
GEET: MAAN!
MAAN: dont  hide  anything  where  is  your  bunny?
GEET: O BUNNY...here  it  is.
maan  turn  to  see to   whom  geet  is  talking  about.
he  was speechless  ..............
BUNNY  was  no  one  other  than  the  teddy  he  gave  to  geet  that day the  pink  one  and  the  blue  one.....
she  was  talking  about  the  blue  teddy  as  bunny to  whom geet  said  that  it  is  maan.
MAAN:  O  this  is  bunny  he  takes deep  relaxing  breath ....
GEET: are  you  talking  with  me  i  mean  are  you  still  mad  at  me?
MAAN: no  i  am  sorry.
GEET:  smiles  ....no  no i  am  happy  she  jumps  in  air .......
her  towel  jumps along  with  her  from  her  legs  to  thighs .....maan's  eye  caught  the  side  and  stood  there  till  he  heard geet  saying
GEET: maan  i  am  so  happy  you  know  when  you  were  not  there i  use  to  talk with  bunny .
she  sat  on  the  bed..she  drag  him  on  the  bed 
GEET: maan  i  was  missing  you  she hugs  maans  tightly ...with  this  geet  took  bunny  in  her  arms  and  kiss  with  all  force  saying  i very  veryyyyyy  happy.
MAAN: if  you  want  geet  you  can  kiss  me  too  your  nose  will  not  come  in  between  .....he  said  shyly
GEET: ok  but  you  should  also  kiss me
MAAN:  he  was  embaressed ......ummm
GEET: she  went  close  to  maan   and  her  breath  tickles  himm  he smiles ..........
she kissed him  like  not  letting  him  go  and  he  melts  with  her kiss he  want  to  take  geet  in  his  arms  but  control  he  know  that  is  not right.
GEET: now  you  turn...kiss me.
MAAN: he  want  to  escape  but  before  that  geet  went  to  his  side  and put her  cheeks in  front  of  his  lips ...
GEET: KISS ME  MAAN.
MAAN:   he   kissed  her  and  both  was  froze for  a  moment  like  they  want  more  and  dont  want  to  move  fromm  there  positions
both  stares  in  one  another eyes  ....
MAAN: umm  geet  come  out  i  am  waiting  for  you  we  will  go  for  shopping  because   we  are  leaving   tomorrow .
he  left  leaving  geet  FROZING
GEET: what  was  that  why  i  am  feeling  to  kiss maan  again.i  should  ask  him.

she  went  again  in  her  old  dressing  sense  ....

IN  MALL.
GEET: maan  i  want  to  ask  you  some  question.
MAAN:  busy  in  thinking about  there  first  kiss.
GEET:  maan she  shakes  him.
MAAN:  ummm
GEET:  i  want  to know  why  i  am  feeling  like  this?  why  i  want  to kiss   you  again?
MAAN: he  coughs  he  was expecting  this  question but  not  prepared  for  any  answer........
I  DONT KNOW.
he  simply  said  to avoid  further questions.
MAAN: come  we  will  go.
GEET: ok.


PRECAP: MAAN  18,GEET  16.

PLEASE  PLEASE  LEAVE  SOME  LOVELY  AND  LONGGGG  LONG  COMMENT  I  LOVE  READING THEM....AND  PLEASE  DO  HIT  THE  LIKE  BUTTON.
WAITING  FOR  YOU  LOVELY  AND  LONG  COMMENT  ON  MY  CUTE  AND ADORABLE  MAAN  AND  GEET ..........HOPE  YOU  LIKED  IT.


Edited by sana.saba7 - 22 January 2011 at 5:13am

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Loved it..... I hope now geet is not ugly anymore...... Bunny....lol... Good one.

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:13am | IP Logged
aww they're so cute  :)

cant wait for the next update

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditiwalia56

Loved it..... I hope now geet is not ugly anymore...... Bunny....lol... Good one.


YOU  HAVE  TO  WAIT  DEAR  ................FOR  THE  NEXT UPDATES  TO  KNOW  ABOUT  OUR  GEET
THANKS  FOR  THE  COMMENT  .....
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sindu555

aww they're so cute  :)

cant wait for the next update



THANKS  DEAR  ..........

NEXT  UPDATE  WILL BE  SOON  I  WILL  TRY  TO  UPDATE  TODAY  BUT  NOT  SURE..............




Edited by sana.saba7 - 22 January 2011 at 5:17am
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sana.saba7

Originally posted by aditiwalia56

Loved it..... I hope now geet is not ugly anymore...... Bunny....lol... Good one.


YOU  HAVE  TO  WAIT  DEAR  ................FOR  THE  NEXT UPDATES  TO  KNOW  ABOUT  OUR  GEET
THANKS  FOR  THE  COMMENT  .....


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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
I am wondering how mad are we about maneeet , yur post is beautiful and m feeling happy bout imagining maaneet as kids....oh their first kiss at school age.... isnt this post is some thing similar to dev and paro as kids.

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