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HUMM.....HUM TUM.__FF ##PART 10## PAGE 30. (Page 3)

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:26am | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
hi  here  is  my next  update..........

PART 3:

GEET:  OK  come  we  will have  some  lunch.
MAAN:  no  no  if  you  are  hungry  then  only  come..dont  come  for me.
GEET: i  too  have  stomach  which  can  be hungry  .i am coming with  you  because  i  am  hungry....
MAAN:  cant you  talk  nicely for  once?
GEET :  no.
           by  this  geet  went  to  nearer  hotel  to  have  some  ............geet  ordered  all  maan's favorite  ..........
MAAN: GEET  dont  eat  that  it  is  very  spicy .
GEET: is it?
MAAN:  yes.
GEET: what  i  should  eat  then?
            maan  thought  for  a minute ...he  no  geet  cant  eat  spicy and  she  is  also  hungry 
MAAN:  wait  till  i  am  back......dont  move.
GEET:  umm  but  come  fast.
MAAN:  ok.
he  went  to  the  hotel  owner  and  ask  him to talk with  MR.KHURANA.
hotel  owner  said  ok to MR.KHURANA  to  whatever  he said.
MAAN: where  is  the  kitchen?
OWNER: sir  that   the  way.
MAAN: ok.  thanks .
owner  is  shock  to  see that   the  small  kid  is having  that  much  capacity  to  do and  that  to for  his  small  girl  friend .....
then  owner  turn  to  see  maan's  girl friend  geet.

he was  stunt to  see  that  much  handsome  rich  guy  is  interested  in  this  ugly  girl.
maan went  to kitchen  he   ordered  to  some  chef  to  help  him  with  the cooking.
after  few  min.maan  was  on  his  way to  geet.

GEET: where  were  you?
MAAN: geet  i  went  for  loo.
GEET: ok...but  i am  hungry.
MAAN: here  are  something  for  you.
GEET: excitedly  what?
she  saw that  all the  dishes  is her  fav.
she  immediately  begin  to  eat.
maan  is  not  a  boy  to  express  something  his  love .his  hate.
he  simply  watches geet  eating  her  lunch.
meanwhile  all others  also  join  them.
DEV: geet  from  where  did you  get  this ?  i know  this  hotel  they  dont have  any  dishes like  this.
GEET: umm....i  dont  know ask  maan.
MAAN: maan  gave  a glare  to  dev to  which  dev  shuts   his  mouth.
all eat  there  lunch  and  went  to  see the  place  with  all  their  gaurds.
anni  and  geet  where  last........behind  all  .
some  boys  where  walking  on  the  street  ans  saw  both  anni  and  geet.
BOY 1: see  see  model  with  bahenji.
BOY 2: no no  she  is  such  a  bitch.
maan  stair  at  both  of  them  and  hide  behind  the  big  tree.
anni  where  is  maan  bro.
GEET: I  DONT  KNOW. she  run  to the  house  crying  loudly.......
after  some  time  when  maan  follows  that  boys  .......
MAAN: what  you  told  to  her.?
BOYS:  hey  hey  see  this  tiny  kid  wants  to  know  that  what  we  said  to  his  bitch  girl  friend.......laughs  louder.
thats it  maan  came  running  and  gave  one  punch  on  the  boy  face  which  starts  bleeding  .........

one  boy  run to  maan  to  fight  maan  runs  and  hide  in  one  of  the  shop......after  searching  in  all the  places  boys  left.
maan  soon  goes  to  house.

MAAN: geet  geet.........
GEET:  what  happen  why  are  you   shouting like  ideot.
VICKY: i  dont  know  why  geet  has  such  proud even  she  dont  have  any  quality.......ugly  girl.
DEV:  because  maan  bro  gives  her  so  much  importance.
VICKY: but  what  maan  bro  saw  in  her?
DEV; ?????
MAAN:  geet  see  what  i  brought  for  you?
GEET: what?  show  me...
MAAN:  no  first  clean  your  nose  then...
GEET: OK.
MAAN: she  cleared  her  nose  with  his  hanky  and  kept  back  in  his pocket.
GEET:  now  show  me.
MAAN: he  showed  her  one  of  the 


ANNI :  wow  maan  bro  that  is  awesome  ........
GEET:  i  loved  it .
see  she  pointed  to  blue  teddy  he  is  maan  and  she  pointed  to  pink  one  this  is  me.
VICKY:  that  teddy  has  bad  luck  because  she  is  ugly  geet.
MAAN: one  more  word  you  will not  be  seen  with  us  in our  camp  in  next   month.
VICKY:   sorry  bro pleaseeeeeeeeeee..
GEET:   maan  shut  up..
           vicky  its  ok  .
 NEXT  DAY........

all  are  getting  ready  for  playing  in  the  garden....
maan went  to  geets  bed  room...
knocks....no  reply.
he  went  inside
MAAN:  oye  geet  get  up  we have  to  play...
GEET :  STILL IN  SLEEP...  no  maan  i  am  not  playing  today..
MAAN:  OK.  he  taken  a  seat  on  sofa  and  reads  newspaper.
GEET:  maan  you  go  and  play.
MAAN:  how  can  i?  if  are  not  playing...
GEET:  thats  because  i  went  to  sleep  at  late night.
MAAN:  ummm  when.?
GEET:  3:00 am.
MAAN: what? what  you  were  doing   till  that  time?
GEET:  i am  busy  with  my  BUNNY.
MAAN: BUNNY?
GEET :  he  like  you.........i  cant  stop  kissing  him..
maan  got  up  from  the  bed  what?  who  bunny?  what  bunny?  which  bunny?  how  can  you  kiss  him?  you  are  only allowed  to  kiss  me....which  you  havent  yet.
but  to  that  chunny  ,bunny  you  kissed.
he  was  shock.
GEET: how   can  i  kiss  you.....?
MAAN:  why  not  he  .tears  came  in  his  eyes.
GEET: if  i  kiss  you  my  nose  may  come in  between.thats  why  i  avoid  it  because  my  nose  is  not  clean.
and  when   i kiss  bunny  he  never  complains  me  about  my  nose.
MAAN:  he  started  crying  ......and  you  thought  i  may  complain ?
how  you  can  think  like  this....
from  now  onwords  we  are  NOT  FRIENDS  ANY  MORE.......
when  he  think  he  cant  control  his  anger  he  leaved  the  room  and  went  to  his  room  and  locked.....

please   leave  some  comments  and  do  hit  the  like  button  please  comment  it  motivates  me ........................
to  all  my  friends  and  forums  fans  please  hit  the  like  button  and  leave  longggggggggg  comments.Smile


Edited by sana.saba7 - 22 January 2011 at 5:12am

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
great part.....loved it.....cont soon
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Awesome update , GEET:  i am  busy  with  my  BUNNY.
MAAN: BUNNY?
GEET :  he  like  you.........i  cant  stop  kissing  him..
maan  got  up  from  the  bed  what?  who  bunny?  what  bunny?  which  bunny?  how  can  you  kiss  him?  you  are  only allowed  to  kiss  me....which  you  havent  yet.
but  to  that  chunny  ,bunny  you  kissed.
he  was  shock.
GEET: how   can  i  kiss  you.....?
MAAN:  why  not  he  .tears  came  in  his  eyes.
GEET: if  i  kiss  you  my  nose  may  come in  between.thats  why  i  avoid  it  because  my  nose  is  not  clean.
and  when   i kiss  bunny  he  never  complains  me  about  my  nose.
MAAN:  he  started  crying  ......and  you  thought  i  may  complain ?
how  you  can  think  like  this....
from  now  onwords  we  are  NOT  FRIENDS  ANY  MORE.......
when  he  think  he  cant  control  his  anger  he  leaved  the  room  and  went  to  his  room  and  locked.....he is jealous.Dancing

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
nyc parts...
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
congo dear...finally u got ur thread...i love ur way of writing...!!!DancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancing

u rock babes...Smile

hmmmm...u can kiss me only...POSSESIVE bt maan i always like this for geet!!

bt even i have a dout wy maan give so muchh imp to geet irrespective of her ugliness..!!!

pls put some light on that as welll....Smile

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Nice part!!!

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that was a good one ClapClapClapClap loved it

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