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HUMM.....HUM TUM.__FF ##PART 10## PAGE 30. (Page 12)

rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee maaneet in ur ff r cute n adorable
reading each update falling in luv with thm even more
n geet has both inner n outer beauty which this sameera lacks
so i hope maan will b able 2 explain this 2 geet
n get geet a makeover done na
as she is entering her college life plzzzzz
n pm meeeeee

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nahtani88 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
cont soon

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Rocks.Dhara IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
awesome update...!!

bt wy maan is lieing to geet...din like that...!!!

bt geet should learn and she should change herself so that maan kisi aur ko dekh hi nahi  paye...lolz

pls update soon...!!!

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swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
nice updates.. very interesting.. continue soon

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surbhijn106 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Cool start n begining of ur ff just loved it muahhhh
want to read more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me after u update if u can plz update soonnnnnnnnn
Smile Smile

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varshakhedekar Senior Member

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged

loved dis story.........n ur updates r awesome.........pls pm me whenever u update

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sana.saba7 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged



geet  was  shock to  here  this  before  she  thought  that  maan  said  lie  to  her  because  she  will  get  mad  at  him  when  he  cant make  to  farewell  ............but  why  he  is  neglecting  now.?

GEET:  nothing  maan i  am  in  no  mood  to  go for  a dinner...
MAAN: OK.   i  will  also  not  eat  dinner  if  you  are  not  eating.......
maan  was  patiently  waiting  for her  answer he  knew  she  will  never  say  no  now.
GEET: are  you  hungry  .....then  why  you  didnt  eat  anything.
MAAN: how  can  i?   i  want  to  eat dinner  with you..........hmmmyes  i  am  very  much  hungry  rubbing  his  tummy  by  making  faces...
GEET: ok ok....wait  ...she  ran  and  changed  her  dress
come on  lets  go.
MAAN: he  smiles  seeing  geet  done  in  5  min...ok  come  on.
they  make  their way  to  car  maan  opened  the  door  for  geet.....

GEET:maan i want your  hanky....
MAAN: HMMMM...he  raised  his  left  hand while  driving...
geet  took  the hanky  from his pocket and  cleaned  her  nose  by  making  sounds...
GEET: dont use  that  i  had  spoiled ....
MAAN: i have  never  used  that  hanky  is  only  for  you..
MAAN:  smiles knowing  that  how  can  ever  think  that  he  will give  her  place  to  anybody......YES.
GEET: pakka  promise na.....
MAAN: YES  baba now  come  we  have  reached..he  goes  to  her side  and  open the  door.....and  offer his  hand to  her
GEET: maan  you  are  not  my  servant  why  are  you  doing  this .....
MAAN:  geet  this  is  called  as  gentleman ....
by  the  way  geet  have  you  decided your  course for  your  college ?
GEET: no  first  i  have  to decide  the  college then  the  course...
they  went  inside  the  restaurant .....
MAAN:  you  just  choose  the course  have  decided  the  college  for  you....
come  seat  they  both order  the  dinner  ....
GEET: ok.
maan  was  curiously  waiting  her  to ask  which  college  but  he  know  she  will  never  ask  him  any  questions....
he  smiles .....seeing  how  can  anybody  trust  some  one  this  much ...he  likes  when  she  do  this ...

MAAN: ok  geet  you  need  sleep  lets go  home  from  tomorrow  your  college  is starting  ...

GEET: UMM  but  have  you  decided  college  for  M.B.A.

MAAN: YES . you  and  me  are  in  same  college  so  get  ready  early  at  morning  from  now  i  will  pick  you  ....

they  on  their  way  to  home  geet is  really  happy  that  now  maan  and  her  will  be  together  i  can  meet   that  sameera..

MAAN: geet  i  have  something  for  you ....

GEET: what?  where  ......she  begin  to  search  in  his  pocket ....
MAAN:  wait

geet  took  the  small  box  and  tears  filled  in  her eyes .....
she  want  to  ask  maan  from  where  he  got  the  money  because  he  never  uses  his  pocket  money....and  this DIAMOND  EAR RINGS..  ONLY  FOR  HER.

GEET  this  is  for  you  for  your  first  college  day..
by  the  way  how  is  that? did  you  liked  it?
GEET: maan  this  is  lovely  and  she kissed  his  cheek....
maan  blushed ...

geet  went  to  her  bedroom  and  tried  the  ear rings  ............
maan  went  to  his  room  and  slept ...


please  readers  leave  some  more  comments  lovely  and  longgggggggggg  comments....
i  love  to  read  it  please  it  motivates  me....

sana  wants  more  comment  and  do  hit  the  like  button..



Edited by sana.saba7 - 25 January 2011 at 1:14pm

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Gr8 part
Love Maan & Geets relationship
Awww Maan is so nice giving earrings 4 Geet in ha first day
Cont soon Xx... Tongue

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