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PART 1---PAGE I
PART 2---PAGE 2
PART 3---PAGE 3
PART 4---PAGE  5
PART 5---PAGE 9.
PART 6---PAGE 14.
PART 7---PAGE 18.
PART 8---PAGE 22.
PART 9---PAGE 27.
PART 10---PAGE 31.



ShockedShockedYOU   ALL  SAID  YES  SO I  AM   HERE  WITH  MY FF.
HOPE  YOU ALL LIKE  IT.

PART 1:
MAAN   IS  15  YEARS  OLD...
DEV  IS  MAAN'S BRO  14  YEARS OLD
ANNI  IS  MAAN'S  SIS  13  YEARS  OLD.
VICKY  IS  MAAN'S  YOUNGER  BRO 12  YEARS  OLD

MAAN  SINGH  KHURANA  IS  ELDEST SON OF  KHURANA  FAMILY..........THEY ARE  ONE  OF  THE RICHEST  FAMILY  OF THE WORLD  SAME  AS  HANDA  FAMILY.......

MR.KHURANA  IS  CALLED  AS  PAPA BY  CHILDRENS.
MRS .KHURANA  IS  CALLED  AS  MUMMA.

MR.HANDA IS CALLED  AS  DAD.
MRS.HANDA  AS  MOM.

BOTH  THE  FAMILIES  LIVE  IN  THE  SAME AREA  OPPOSITE  TO  EACH  OTHER.

BRIJ  IS  THE  ELDEST SON  OF  HANDA  FAMILY 14  YEARS OLD 
GEET  IS  13  YEARS OLD.
RAJJI   IS  12  YEARS  OLD.



GEET  IS  VERY  UGLY  LOOKING  EVERY BODY  WANTS TO  RUN  AWAY  FROM  HER..........
SHE  PUT 2 RIBBONS  ON  BOTH  THE  SIDES  OF  HAIR.  ALWAYS   HER  NOSE  LEAKS.........................

MAAN  IS  THE  ONLY  MUSCELS  BOY  IN  THE  SCHOOL  .HE  IS  DOING HIS  10TH IN THE  SCHOOL  .HIS  LAST  YEAR  IN  THE  SCHOOL.

WHERE  AS  ANNI  LOOKS  SO  HOT  AND  HER  BROS  USE  TO FIGHT  WITH  EVERY  ONE  WHO  EVER  TRIES  TO  DO  MISCHIEVE  WITH  HER....

AND  PARI  IS  DAMN SEXY .
VICKY  AND  PARI  IN SAME  CLASS  AND  ANNI  ,GEET  IN  SAME  CLASS  BOTH ARE  BEST  FRIEND...


BOTH  THE  FAMILIES  PLAN   FOR  THE  TOUR  IN THIS  VACATION .

IN  SINGAPORE.


GEET:mom  where  is  maan?
MOM:maan  went  with  all  the  others  to  see  the  place ..
GEET:how  can  he?
MOM:  why?
GEET:  he  never  goes  any where  without  me ..........
MAAN:  GEEEET.............
MOM:   now  go  and take  the  handkerchief.
  
geet  run  all  over  the  big  house  to  reach  maan's  voice  she  was  above  to  fall  from  the  ladders  maan  catches  her  from  the  waist...

GEET: you went  leaving  me?
MAAN:  no.i was  waiting  for  you.
GEET:  cho  sweet.
MAAN : shut up!dont  call  me  sweet  i am  not .
GEET: ok.how  is  darling ...
geet  giggles.
MAAN: WHAT!
you  only  knows  how  to  annoy  me
GEET: what  i  can  do  if  you get  annoy soon.
MAAN: SHUT UP. and  dont  call  me  by  stupid  names 
GEET:why? ask  innocently
MAAN: i  dont  like  any.
GEET: you  never  likes  any  thing.

MAAN:no. i like the....
GEET: what?


maan  dont want to  answer  her  question  
he  just  avoided..

MAAN:come  lets  go.
GEET:  where  are  all..
MAAN:they  are  waiting  for  us  lets  go.
GEET:ok.
MAAN:  atleast  clean  your  nose  first ...

geet  nose  is leaking

GEET: how  can i?
MAAN: why?
 
then  suddenly  he  realize  what  geet means

MAAN: hmm..
he  raises his  hands  up..
geet  takes  the  hanky  from  his  pocket  and  starts  cleaning  her  nose  by  making  sounds...
afterwards  she  kept  hanky  back  in  his  pocket .
GEET: dont  use  that  ,it  is  spolied
MAAN: ok.lets go.
    
both  went  to  the  group  who is  standing  for them....pari  also  came  along  with  them  to enjoy  holiday.....
 ANNI:hey  geet  fast  we  have  to  go...........

both  came  and  joined  them

all  shouts  yepeeeeeeeeee
 
vicky  is  drooling  over  pari

MAAN: VICKY.
VICKY: hmmmmm
MAAN: shouts  .stop it.
VICKY: what  bro  go  to  that  ugly  geet 
MAAN: what  you  are  doing? with  strin look.
VICKY: bhai  i  want  pari  to  be  my  girlfriend..\
maan  shock  with his  small  bro .he thinks  he is just  12years.
MAAN: you  are  too small  for  this ..and  by  the way  first  say  me  what is  girlfriend.....?
VICKY: to  whom  we  can  kiss.
MAAN:WHAT?
VICKY: yes  bro  you  dont  know that then  you  too  need  dev  bhai's  class  he  is love  guru.
he  showed  me  how  to  kiss by  kissing  his  girlfriend...
but  his  gf  is  not  nice  she  every time shouts  at  me....but  dev  bro said me  he  is  with  her  only  for  her  kiss  beacuse  she  is  good  kisserEmbarrassed.amoung  all  his  gfs  she  is  the  best.

maan  eyes  widen  in horror like  he  is  dreaming  all this Shocked
his  small  bro  talking  like  this  
this  is  only  because  of  that  dev  he is  spoiling  him....

MAAN: DEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV



PRECAP:  MAAN  AND  GEET  ON THE  CYCLE...............!

HEY  YOU  ALL  PLEASE   LEAVE  THE  COMMENTS ............IT  WILL  MOTIVATE  ME.
AND  DO DO HIT  THE  LIKE  BUTTON  PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
COMMENT.....
 

JUST  SAY  HOW  IS  MY  CUTE  GEET  AND  MAAN


Edited by sana.saba7 - 07 February 2011 at 9:41am

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would like to go with it... so pm me too

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Nice concept but plz geet ko thoda sa saaf suthra bana do plz bytheway they both r cute luved both of tem. Do continue soon n do pm me.

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 loved d concept........  but do something wid geet................. nd plz tell who tie ribbons on ponytails dese day................... u know i have cousin she is just 10 even dat mattko knows how to dress up.............LOL

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Nice concept plz cont .

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wow nice start plz cont soon can u add me in pm list ......

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HEY    AS  I  PROMISE  I  WILL UPDATE  THE  NEXT  PART  SOON  .HERE  IS  THE  UPDATE.........................

PART 2:

MAAN: dev  what  the  hell  you  are  teaching  to  vicky?

dev  is  paniking  now  he  knows  his  maan  bro  temper

DEV:bro  what  you  are  talking about ?  innocently  he  ask........
MAAN: dont  act  smart  you  know  well  ....
DEV:  but  bro  you  know  that  vicky  is  lier...
MAAN: i know  that  well too but  he  is  not  lieing  now.
DEV :inside  he  said  .vicky  ke  bacche  i will see  you.
MAAN: now  get  lost  next  time  i will  talk  with  you by   punching......
GEET: shut  up !
 maan  and  dev  turn  to  see  geet  is  standing  in  at  the  back....
GEET: how  you  are  talking  with  your  bro.
MAAN: geet  stay  away  you  dont  know  any thing.
MAAN:just  go.
GEET: no  .
DEV : saviour.....he  run  in  the  group  who  is  standing  with  their  respective  cycles...
MAAN: geet  what  is  your  problem  every  time  they  escape  from  me ...because  of  you.
             you  dont  even  know  what  dev  have  done.
GEET: what?
maan  rubbed  his  temple 
MAAN: nothing  lets  go  first  clean  your  nose  and  what  is  this  why  you wore  sweater....

geet  dress  completely  covering  her self

GEET: o  no  just  it  is i am  getting  cold and  my  nose  is  leaking
MAAN: when  it  not?  and  by  the  way  in summer  season you  are  getting  cold.
GEET: MOOOOOM.....
MAAN: i  just  ask  you  why  are  you  shouting.......
             you  dont  even  know  when  is  cool  and  when  is  hot..
            that  why  i  ask  you  not  to  mug  up  the  answer  but  understand  them.
GEET:  you  are  the  one  who  thought  me  to  mug  up  the answer.
MAAN: that  is  only  for  few  which  you  cant  understand .not  every
GEET: i  dont  understand  any.....by  this  geet  went  near  maan and  took  the  hanky  from his  pocket 
to  which  maan  respond  by  raising  his  hands ......she  cleared  her  nose  and  put back  the  hanky .
MAAN: now  grow  up  you  are  in  8th  class  but  dont  understand  any  thing.
GEET:  maan  you  are  in  10th  now soon  you  will  leave  me  and  you  will  join  the  college?
she  asked  innocently
MAAN:  yes  i will  be  in  college  soon  but  i  am  not  leaving  you.
GEET: promise.
MAAN: ummm
lets  go ........

all  are  ready  for  the  cycle  raise  just  waiting  for  geet and  maan.....
VICKY: this  ugly  geet  everytime  takes  time  to  come  fast....
PARI: shut  up!
vicky  didnt  said  anything  because  he  wanted  to  be  friend  with  pari
  both  joined  them  .everybady are  ready  for  a  race...

ANNI:  1 2 3 GET  SET  GO.....................
all  started  to  ride  their  cycles  in  high  speed...
geet  is  last  amoung  them....but  maan  is behind  geet..
GEET :  go  fast  otherwise  you  will  loose..
MAAN: no.and  dont  hurry  you  will  fall...
GEET: ok.
MAAN: COME  ON  GEET.
GEET:  maan 
MAAN:ummm
GEET:   maan  i  cant  ride  it  hurts.....
MAAN: just  leave  that  stupid  cycle  .that  is  not  your  fault  that  cycle  is bad.
GEET: ok..know  that  maan  is  just  so  cute  but  she  cant  say  that  he will get  angry.
MAAN: geet  seat  nicely  on  my  cycle  i will  take  you ...
GEET:ok.
  geet  adjusted  herself  comfortabely  on  maan's  cycle  with  him
MAAN:  is  that  done?
GEET :yes.
maan  put  her  hands  on  the  stand  and  set  her  duppata ....
MAAN: LETS  GO.
GEET: dont  shout  i will get  deaf ..
MAAN:  O  sorry!
GEET:  its  ok.friendship  me  no  sorry  no  thank  you.
MAAN: smiles  seeing  her  excitement  on  cycle.my  geet  is  sounds  mature  sometimes...
GEET:  firstly  i  am  grown  up  girl  dont  treat  me like  child ..
maan  smiles
and  secondly  i  am  not  your  geet  i am  my  parent  child 
maan  wants  to  laugh  louder  but  get  scared  what if  she  get  down  from  the  cycle.
mean while  two  love  couples  crossing  the  roads    
GEET: what they  are  doing  maan?
MAAN:  maan  coughs  seeing  them .....the  lady  hugs  man while  he  rides....
MAAN: nothing  just  the  lady  is  getting  the  cold  like  you  ........so  she  hugs  him.
GEET:  hugs  him.....what  if  i catch  the  cold.
MAAN: geet  seat  properly  what  will  other  thinks ..?.
GEET:  that  i am  geeting  cold.
maan  doesnt  have  any  problem.
GEET: you  breath  is  falling  on  my  neck.
MAAN:  UMMMM
GEET:  stop  breathing.............she  giggles.
MAAN:  there  is  a  chances of  my  death  then.....

maan  now  was  the  in  front  of  every  bady  all  are  shocked  to  see  them  like  this  and  again seeing  maan  is  first  along  with  geet 
maan    crosses  them with  shooting  the  glare  like DAM  WHO  CARES..........
while  geet  shows  them  the  thump  down.....
and  hugging  thightly  in  excitement  ...........but  maan  is   getting  effected ....

GEET  AND  MAAN  WON  and  waiting  for  them
MAAN:  lets  go  to  buy to  eat  something  i  am  hungry
GEET: no i  am  in  no  mood.
MAAN:  ok  then  we  will go  when  you  mood  will...


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