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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
hiii niki here =D
love the concept
continue soon
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged

hi guys...so here is the 1st part of my new ff...but pls suggest a title for this ff...i m really confused...here is my update..read n njoy...

16 july 2009(tuesday)...at mayank's home...all were doing breakfast...
m-samrat..ab chal na..kitna kahega...kha kha ke mota ho gaya hai..
s-bas kar mayank...mujhe pata hai tujhe clg jaane ki itni jaldi kyu ho rahi hai...sab ladkiya tera wait kar rahi hogi isliye na..
m-chal apni bakwas band kar aur jaldi chal..
mm-mayank..beta tu clg padhne jata hai ya ladkiyo ke sath time spent karne jata hai..
m-kya maa ap bhi ye samrat ki baato mai aa jati ho...ye to pagal hai..khud to pura din ladkiyo par line marte rehta hai aur mujhe kehta hai..
s-acha...mai...
m-chal ab apni bakwas band kar aur clg chal..
both left from there...
s-mayank aj car mai chaloga..
m-koi zarurat nahi hai...car mai chaloga..
s-nahi...chavi de mujhe..aj car to mai hi chalaoga..
m-chup chap beth jaa...
samrat gave an angry look to mayank and sits in car..mayank drives the car...while driving he saw a girl who was very hot n sexy...he was looking at her..he stopped the car..
s-gaadi kyu rok di??
m-vo ladki ko to dekh samrat...kya lag rahi hai...Smile
samrat look that girl...
s-sach mai yaar...kitni hot lag rahi hai...Smile
m-bilkul mere type ki hai...Smile
s-mayank...clg ke liye der ho rahi hai...ab chal jaldi..
m-nahi yaar...clg ki ladkiya to purani ho gayi hai...ab ye nayi item mili hai to mai itni asani se ise hath se nahi jane duga...tu ruk..mai abhi ata hu..Smile
s-kya yaar...
mayank came out from the car and was going to that girl...but when he reached there that girl left from there..
m to himself-shit...Angry
and samrat was laughing in car...mayank again went in the car...
m-has kya raha hai...Angry
s-ab hasi aa rahi hai to hasuga hi na..Smile
m-hasna band kar varna...Angry
s-acha thick hai..ab clg chal..purani wali ke sath kaam chala le..Smile
after sometime..they reached clg...when mayank came out from the car one girl came to him..her name was simran...
simran-kya mayank..mai kabse tumhara wait kar rahi thi...
m-sorry babes..par ab mai aa gaya huna...ab chale..Smile
simran-hmmm...Smile
m-samrat...tu car park kar de...ye le chavi...Smile
he gives the key to samrat..
s to himself-hamesha mujhe hi karna padta hai...Angry
scene shift to other side...
n-chal gunjan...ab clg ke liye nikalte hai..aj bohot der ho gayi hai...
g-di..mai do minute mai ati hu...
n-jaldi kar gunjan..bohot der ho gayi hai..fir mere lectures miss ho jaege...
g-bas di do minute..
gunjan went in the room..
n-kasturi di..ap kahi jaa rahi ho??
k-ha nupur..mai sabarwal office jaa rahi hu...
n-sabarwal office..
k-ha...vaha mujhe secretary ki job mil gayi hai aur aj mera first day hai aur mai late nahi hona chahti hu...
n-wow di...apko job mil gayi..apne mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya..
k-mujhe khud bhi abhi pata chala..mujhe abhi devika mam ka phone aya aur unhone mujhe abhi office mai bulaya hai...chal ab mujhe der ho rahi hai...mai jaa rahi hu..bye..
n-thick hai di...aur apne maa ko bataya??
k-ha bata diya..chal ab mai chalti hu..bye..
n-bye...Smile
kasturi left from there...gunjan comes down..
g-chaliye di..ab chalte hai..
n-chal..
g-kasturi di kaha hai??
n-unhe job mil gaya hai...
g-kya..Smile
n-isliye vo sabarwal office gayi hai..aj unka first day haina isliye late nahi hona chahti thi..Smile
g-chalo acha hai kasturi di ko job to mil gayi...Smile
n-hmmm..ab chal..bohot der ho rahi hai..
g-ha di chaliye..
they left for clg...after sometime...they reached clg...nupur was going in her class n she saw mayank flirting with one girl..she stopped..
n to herself-pata nahi par jab bhi ise dekhti hu to...man karta hai ki jaakar ek thappad maru...Angry
she went in her class...other side...
girl-mayank...u knw what..i love u...Smile
m-babes...u knw na..i dont belive in love...bt dont worry..iska ye matlab nahi hai ki mai tumhe chod duga...Smile
girl-mayank...mai tumse bohot pyar karti hu..tum mujse pyar kyu nahi karte??
simran comes...
sim-kyuki ye already mera bf hai so just leave now..Angry
that girl went from there..
sim-mayank what is this...tum aisa kyu karte ho..u knw na i dont like all this...i m ur gf n u cant ditch me...
m-tumse kisna kaha ki tum meri gf ho..
sim-mayank i knw u love me..par tum kabhi kehte nahi ho...mayank...
m-ek minute ek minute...ye sab tumse kaha kisne...ek baat sunlo..mai tumse pyar vyar nahi karta isliye aisi galat soch mai mat raho...
sim-mayank ham kitne saal se ek dusre ko jante hai...maine hamesha tumhari help ki hai aur tum...
m-to koi ahsaan nahi kiya hai mujpar...
sim-mayank tum aisi kyu baate kar rahe ho...
m-simran..will u pls get lost from here...Angry
sim-thick hai...Angry
she went from there...
m to himself-ye aj kal ki ladkiya bhi na...thoda waqt bita lete hai to fir picha hi nahi chodti hai..
after sometime..gunjan went in her class..n sit on her place
g to herself-ye riddhima abhi tak nahi ayi...ab tak to use aa jana chahiye...phone karke puchti hu...
when she was calling her...riddhima comes in class..
g-aa gayi...
she went to gunjan n sat beside her..
r-sorry sorry aj late ho gayi...vo actually mera chota sa accident ho gaya raaste mai...
g-kya...kaise aur...
r-aree gunjan..relax..zaada chot nahi ayi hai...aur galti meri hi thi..
g-riddhima..tu bhi na..bilkul pagal hai...ab bata chot kaha ayi hai..
r-yaha haat par...
riddhima showed her hand to gunjan..
g-ye to kitni gehri chot hai...
r-aree gunjan...itni bhi gehri nahi hai..thick hi jaegi...vaise tune arman ko kahi dekha kya??
g-nahi...mujhe to kahi dikha nahi..
r-mujhe bhi nahi dikha...
after sometime...
g-aa gaya arman..
r-kaha hai??
g-dekh vaha...
riddhima saw arman...n went to him..
r-arman..aj itni der kyu??
ar-aree vo aj bohot late utha isliye aur aj subah ko tumne bhi mujhe phone nahi kiya to mai utha bhi nahi...tum hamesha mujhe phone karti ho aur aj phone hi nahi kiya..
r-vo...mai bhul gayi thi arman...
then arman saw her hand...
ar-ye kya hua tumhare hath ko..ye chot kaise ayi??
r-arman..choti si chot hai...jaane dona..
ar-ye choti si chot hai...ye kaise hua riddhima??
r-arman...vo mera chota sa accident ho gaya tha aj...
ar-what...
r-arman...chodo na ab...galti meri hi thi..mai hi bichme aa gayi thi...
ar-riddhima..mai tumhe roz kehta hu ki tum mere sath clg aya karo par nahi..tum to kabhi meri baat sunti hi nahi ho...
r-arman...ab gussa chodo na...
ar-Angry
r-arman...tum gusse mai bohot cute lagte ho...Smile
ar-tumhe maak suj rahi hai...
r-mai mazak nahi kar rahi hu..sach bol rahi hu..Smile
ar-ab chalo mere sath...
arman took riddhima with him..scene shift to other side...kasturi reached sabarwal office...she went inside the office...voice came from back KASTURI..
she turned back...
k-devika mam...Smile
rm(robbie's mom)-mai kabse tumhara wait kar rahi thi..
k-sorry mam...vo actually traffic bohot thi isliye...
rm-its ok bt next time nahi chalega..u shuld be on time..
k-ok mam...Smile
rm-robbie bas abhi thodi der mai ata hi hoga...tum raunak ke cabin mai jao aur vaha se files lekar robbie ke cabin mai rakh do..
k-ji mam..Smile
raunak is robbie's elder brother...(sorry guys..i forgot to introduce him)kasturi went in raunak's cabin..
k-may i come in sir...Smile
ra-ya come in..Smile
kasturi went inside...
k-good morning sir...Smile
ra-good morning..to tum ho kasturi bhusan..Smile
k-ji sir..mai hu kasturi bhusan..Smile
ra-vaise ek baat tumse kehna chahuga..mera bhai robbie se backar rehna..i mean vo ek bhi secretary ko tikne nahi deta hai...tumse pehle 5 secretary thi par robbie ne un logo ko tikne hi nahi diya...ab dekhte hai tum kitne dino tak tikti ho...
k-sir mujhe apna kaam karna achi tarah se ata hai...Smile
ra-thats good...Smile
k-sir..mujhe devika mam ne apke cabin se files lene ko kaha hai..files kaha hai??
raunak gives the files to kasturi...
ra-ye lo...
k-thank u sir..Smile
ra-Smile
kasturi took the files from raunak and went in robbie's cabin to keep the files...just at that time robbie comes in his cabin...
ro-kaun ho tum??
k-mai...mai kasturi...
ro-kaun kasturi...aur tum mere cabin mai kya kar rahi ho??
k-to ap hai robbie sir...
ro-kya tum meri nayi secretary to nahi ho??
k-bilkul sahi pehchana apne sir..mai apki nayi secretary hu kasturi bhusan..Smile
ro-ohh...wow...thats cool...mai tumhe ek salah dena chahta hu...ye job chod do kyuki vaise bhi kuch din mai tumhe ye job chodna hi padega aur isse acha to ye hoga ki tum abhi isi waqt job chod do...
k-sir...mai ye job nahi chodugi..
ro-ok as u wish...mai bhi dekhta hu kab tak tum yaha tikti ho...
hey guys..here ends my 1st part...i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...pls guys..i dont knw whether u will like this part or nt but feel free to comment...so kya hoga ab??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..
hazra


Edited by hazraluvsalman - 11 November 2011 at 2:39am

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 10:29am | IP Logged
great part yaar

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
sorry to say but you always write on so many couples together that confuse me but nice ff

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
wow its too good yaar
continue soon

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
nice part.
loved it.

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