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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 3:29am | IP Logged

hi friends..updated part 6...i hope u like it...dnt forget to comment...hazra

nupur comes...
n-tum jaise ladke par kisko bharosa hoga samrat...Angry
g-di...
n-samrat...hame tumhare plan ke baare mai sab pata chal gaya hai...Angry
s-plan...kaisa plan nupur..
n-bano mat samrat...kya karne wale the tum meri behen ke sath...Angry
s-nupur ye tum kya keh rahi ho mujhe kuch samaj mai nahi raha hai...
n-ek thappad lagaogi na to sab samaj mai aa jaega...Angry
g-di...di ab chodiye na...chaliye ap...
n-ek baat kaan kholkar sun lo samrat...gunjan se dur raho varna mujse bura koi nahi hoga...Angry
nupur n gunjan leaves frm there...
s to himself-sab gadbad ho gayi...mere plan ke baare mai in dono ko kaise pata chala...shit...Angry
after sometime...
m-samrat...tujhe kya hua..abhi kuch der pehle to bohot mood mai tha..achanak kya ho gaya..
s-sab gadbad ho gayi..Unhappy
m-gadbad...kya hua??
s-pata nahi nupur ko mere plan ke baare mai kaise pata chala..
m-par tera plan tha kya?
samrat told him abt his plan..
m-plan to bohot acha tha..
s-ye samaj mai nahi aa raha hai ki nupur ko pata kaise chala mere plan ke baare mai..
arman comes..
ar-maine bataya...
s-wht..
ar-maine tumhari baatein sunli thi samrat...
s-(giving an angry look to arman)
ar-actually mujhe nahi pata tha ki tumhara plan kya tha..vo to maine sirf gunjan ka naam suna tha jab tum kisi se phone par baat kar rahe the par mai ye zarur janta tha ki tum kuch to galat karne wale ho gunjan ke sath par ab to mujhe tumhare pure plan ke baare mai pata chal gaya hai...tumhe aur mayank ko mai janta hu par ye nahi janta tha ki tum is had tak bhi jaa sakte ho...
s-arman...tu mera kuch nahi bigad sakta...tu ab dekh mai kya karta hu teri dost ke sath...Angry
other side...gunjan n nupur reach home..
sheetal-tum log itni jaldi aa gaye aj..
n-ha maa...actually aj clg mai zada lectures nahi the isliye..
sheetal-acha thick hai...
both went in the room..
g-di..ap itni chup kyu hai..kuch to boliye...
n-...
g-di pls mujse baat kijiye na..Unhappy
n-gunjan...tu pls apna muh band rakh..mujhe nahi baat karni hai tujse..
g-par di maine kya kiya hai..Unhappy
n-kya zarurat thi tujhe samrat se baat karne ki..Angry
g-di..di vo khud hi mere paas aya tha..
n-aur tune uske sath date par jaane ke liye haa bhi keh diya...Angry
g-di...mai nahi kehna chahti thi par vo...
n-gunjan...tu meri behen hai aur agar tere sath kuch bura hota to mai kya karti...dekh gunjan tu janti haina ki samrat aur mayank kis type ke ladke hai fir kya zarurat thi usse baat karne ki..
g-di pls mera yakin kijiye..maine use manaa bhi kiya tha par vo maan hi nahi raha tha..Unhappy
n-acha ab chod ye sab...par tu mujse promise kar ki tum ab kabhi bhi samrat se baat nahi karegi...
g-i promise di...
n-Smile
other side...
ar-riddhima...
r-kya hua arman??
ar-agar aj mujhe samrat ke plan ke baare mai nahi pata chalta to bohot bura ho jata..
r-ha arman...par samrat ka plan tha kya?
ar-vo gunjan ko bulakar use apne dost ke ghar le jane wala tha aur vaha vo gunjan ke sath...zabardasti karne wala tha..aur ek camera bhi chupakar rakha tha us room ke ander taki sab kuch record ho jae...
riddhima shocked...
r-wht...omg..samrat ye sab karne wala tha..
s-aur ab to usne mujhe dhamki ki di hai ki vo gunjan ko chodega nahi...i hope ki gunjan uski baato mai na aa jaye..
r-arman hame gunjan ko samjana hoga..vo to kisi ki bhi baato mai bohot jaldi aa jati hai..hame use samjana hoga arman..
ar-ha riddima...
other side..robbie and mona in a hotel room..
ro-oh god..mom ka phone..ye mom na pata nahi kab mera picha chodegi..
he receive the call..
ro-yes mom..
devika-robbie..whr r u??
ro-mom...mai meri frnd ke sath hu...aur aj office nahi aaoga..ok..bye..tc
he disconnect the call..
devika-kasturi...aj 3 baje bohot important meeting hai aur tumhe kaise bhi karke robbie ko vo meeting mai lekar ana hi hoga..kyuki robbie ke liye vo meeting attend karna bohot zaruri hai..
k-ok mam...
devika went...
k to herself-3 bajne mai 3 ghante baki hai...aur mujhe robbie sir ko meeting mai lekar ana hoga par kaise...Unhappy
kasturi went to raunak...
k-may i cum in sir..
ra-kasturi..pls cum..Smile
k-raunak sir..kya ap meri help karoge??
ra-ya sure...Smile
k-devika mam ne mujhe kaha hai ki aj 3 baje bohot imp meeting hai aur vo meeting mai robbie sir ka hona bohot zaruri hai..aur robbie sir to ayege nahi isliye mere paas ek plan hai...agar ap meri help karoge to shayad robbie sir meeting mai aa jaye..
ra-kaisa plan??
then kasturi tell him abt her plan...
ra-plan to acha hai kasturi..Smile
k-to ap meri help karoge na raunak sir??
ra-ya sure kasturi..mai tumhari help zarur karuga..Smile
k-thank u raunak sir..Smile
after sometime...raunak call robbie...
ro-hey bro..wats up..Smile
ra-robbie...yaha bohot badi problem ho gayi hai..n i really need ur help...
ro-hua kya hai??
ra-mujse galti se kisi ka ccident ho gaya hai...pls tu jaldi aa..
ro-wht...ok mai abhi ata hu..tu fikar mat kar...thick hai..
ra-robbie pls mom ko kuch mat batana varna vo gussa ho jaegi..
ro-ok thick hai..
...
ra-kasturi...vo thodi der mai aa raha hai..Smile
k-Smile..3 bajne mai ab sirf 15 min baki hai...
ra-dnt worry kasturi..vo aa jaega..Smile
other side...
m to himself-nupur ka project partner to mai bankar hi rahuga..nupur mujhe pasand nahi karti hai...nafrat karti hai mujse to mujhe sabse pehle ache banne ka natak karna padega taki use lage ki ab mai badal gaya hu..aur ek baar mai uska partner ban jao fir to best project of the year ka award mujhe hi milega..Smile
other side...robbie reach that place..
ro-raunak...kya hua??tu thick to haina..
kasturi and devika comes..
k-devika mam...robbie sir aa gaye...Smile
devika-robbie..acha hua tum aa gaye...bohot imp meeting hai aur tumhara  meeting attend karna bohot zaruri hai..ab chalo..
ro-par mom...
k-devika mam..ap ander jaeye..mai robbie sir ko lekar ati hu..Smile
devika-ok..
she went...
ro-ye sab kya hai raunak..Angry
ra-sorry robbie..par mujhe tumse jhoot bolna pada varna tum nahi ate..
ro-wht...tumne mujse jhoot kaha...Angry
k-robbie sir...ye plan mera tha...agar mai apko kehti to ap meri baat sunte nahi isliye maine raunak sir ko apse jhoot bolne ko kaha..
ro-ye tumne acha nahi kiya...Angry
ra-robbie...ab isme gussa hone wali baat nahi hai..kasturi ne kuch galat nahi kiya hai..
k-robbie sir...ab ander chaliye..
ra-robbie ab gussa chodo aur chalo ander...
after sometime..
k-raunak sir..thank u so much..agar ap meri help nahi karte to aj devika mam fir se mujpar gussa ho jati..Smile
ra-kasturi ab tum kitni baar mujhe thanks kahogi...aur ham ab dost hai isliye baar baar thnx kehne ki zarurat nahi hai..
k-Smile
after sometime...kasturi reach home...
sheetal-kasturi beta...aj itna late kyu ho gaya..aur tera phone bhi nahi lag raha tha..mujhe to bohot ghabrat ho rahi thi..
k-maa mera mobile switch off ho gaya tha..battery low this isliye..
sheetal-par beta aj itni der kyu ho gayi??
k-aj office mai bohot kaam tha maa...
sheetal-beta...vaha tujhe koi taklif to nahi haina..
k-aree nahi maa...
sheetal-beta ab tu aram kar le..pura din kaam karke thak gayi hogi na..
k-thick hai maa..
other side...gunjan talking on phone with riddhima..she told gunjan abt samrat's plan n she was shocked..
r-gunjan...vo to acha hua ki arman ne samrat ki baatein sun li thi varna pata nahi kya hota..mai bas tujhe itna kehna chahti hu ki tu samrat se dur raha kar kyuki tu khud bhi janti hai ki vo kis had tak jaa sakta hai...
g-riddhima..ladke itne bure kyu hote hai..Unhappy
r-gunjan...sare ladke bure nahi hote...ab arman ko hi dekh le..vo kitna acha hai..hamesha hamari help karta hai..
g-riddhima...mai tujse badme baat karti hu..bye..
r-ok bye..
...
n-gunjan...tujhe pata hai vo mayank...(she stops)
n-gunjan...tu ro rahi hai..
g-nahi..nahi di...
n-gunjan..kya hua tujhe...
g-di...Cry
she hugged nupur...
n-gunjan...bolna kya hua??
kasturi comes..
n-di..dekhiye na gunjan ko..pata nahi kyu ro rahi hai..
k-gunjan...kya hua tujhe??tu ro kyu rahi hai??
g-Cry
k-gunjan..kisi ne kuch kaha tujse??
g-di..vo samrat...Cry
n-samrat...
g-di...riddhima ne mujhe samrat ke pure plan ke baare mai kaha...vo kitna bura hai di...Cry
n-kya plan tha samrat ka??
then she told them abt samrat's plan n both were shocked..
g-di...samrat aisa kaisa kar sakta hai..maine uska kya bigada tha ki usne itna ghatiya plan banaya..Cry
n-usko mai nahi chodugi...Angry
k-aise logo ke muh hi nahi lagna chahiye..
n-mai us samrat ko nahi chodugi...mujhe to ab kal ka intezar hai..Angry
k-gunjan..tum ro mat...ham sab haina tumhare sath..ham tumhare sath kuch galat nahi hone dege...ab jaa kitchen mai..maa tujhe bula rahi hai..
gunjan went frm thr..
k-nupur..meri baat sun...tu kal samrat ko kuch nahi bolegi..
n-nahi di..mai kal us samrat ko nahi chodugi..vo apne ap ko samajta kya hai..Angry
k-gunjan..mai aise ladke ko achi tarah se janti hu..agar tune usse kuch bhi kaha to vo pata nahi gusse mai ake kya karega..
n-nahi di..aise logo ko to sabak sikhana bohot zaruri hai..Angry
k-nupur..gunjan meri bhi behen hai..mujhe bhi uski fikar hai isliye tujse keh rahi hai ki kuch aisa vaisa mat kar dena ki baat aur bhi bigad jaye..
n-to kya ham chup bethe..
k-tu samaj nahi rahi hai mai kya keh rahi hu...nupur..mai aise ladke ko bohot achi tarah se janti hu...vo log kuch bhi kar sakte hai...kuch bhi isliye tujse keh rahi hu..samja kar meri baat..
n-di mai samaj rahi hu par...acha thick hai nahi karugi mai jagda samrat ke sath..bas khush..
nupur went from there..
hey guys..here ends my part 6...i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..so kya hoga ab??kya karegi nupur??kya mayank ban paega nupur ka project partner??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..
hazra
 


Edited by hazraluvsalman - 21 November 2011 at 3:21am

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best dialogues and i feel tht i am watching it on my tv screenClap

update soon...

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadffi

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best dialogues and i feel tht i am watching it on my tv screenClap

update soon...

ohh really...thank u so much dear...Smile
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lovely update
may god bless u

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nice part
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