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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
lovely update

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Posted: 29 July 2011 at 12:25am | IP Logged
hi friends...updated part 5...i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...read n njoy...

credit goes to stuti(stuti_naksh4eva) for the banner.
nupur went...
m to himself-itni akkad...tumhara partner to mai bankar hi rahuga nupur..Angry
other side...
s to himself-arman ne aj jo bhi kiya uski sazaa ab chasmish ko milegi...bas ab to chasmish ke sath date par jane ka intezar hai...
other side...in class...
akash(nupur project partner)-nupur...thanks meri partner banne ke liye..Smile
n-akash maine tumhe isliye partner banaya coz is class mai ek tum hi ache student ho aur jise mai apna frnd manti hu so thnx bolne ki zarurat nahi hai..
ak-Smile
other side...
r-canteen mai chalo yaar..maine subah se kuch nahi khaya hai..i m really vry hungry...
ar-ok lets go..
g-riddhima tum arman ke sath jao..mai nahi aa rahi hu..
r-kyu??
g-mujhe library jana hai..
r-oh common gunjan..library baadme chale jana...abhi hamare sath canteen chalo..
g-nahi riddhima..mujhe...
ar-riddhima..agar ise library jana hai to jane do...shayad ise kuch kaam hoga...
r-ok thick hai...bye gunjan..
g-bye...
arman n riddhima went in the canteen...scene shift to sabarwal house...kasturi was waiting for robbie...
k to herself-adhe ghante se wait kar rahi hu..pata nahi aur kitna time lagega robbie sir ko...
her cell rings..
k-devika mam...
she receive the call..
k-hello...
rm-kasturi..kaha ho tum??
k-mam..mai bas thodi der mai robbie sir ko office lekar aa rahi hu...
rm-come in 15 min..yaha bohot kaam hai..
k-ok mam...
...
k to herself-ab mujhe hi robbie sir ke room mai jakar dekhna padega..
she went in the room...
k-robbie sir...
ro-tum...tum abhi tak gayi nahi...
k-sir ap chaliye mere sath..devika mam hame office bula rahi hai...
ro-shut up...
mona(robbie's gf) come in the room..
mo-hey my rockstar...Smile
ro-hey mona darling..kabse tumhara wait kar raha tha...Smile
they both hug each other...
mo-who is this girl??
ro-she is our new servant...Smile
mo-ohh...tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...jao yaha se..
k-mai koi servant nahi hu...mai robbie sir ki secretary hu...
mo-ohh...tumhare kapde dekhkar to aisa hi lagta hai ki tum is ghar ki servant ho...
k-robbie sir...chaliye...bohot der ho rahi hai...
ro-keep ur mouth shut...mai mona ke sath bahar jaa raha hu...lets go mona darling..
mo-yup..lets go...Smile
robbie n mona went from there..
k-robbie sir...robbie sir rukiye...
kasturi tried to stop him bt he left...
k to herself-ab kya karu...robbie sir to chale gaye..ab mai devika mam ko kya jawab dugi..Unhappy
other side...
s-hey chasmish..
gunjan turned back...
g-samrat...
he went to gunjan..
s-chasmish...aj 7 baje taiyar rehna ok..Smile
g-7 baje..par...
s-chasmish...ham 7 baje date par jaa rahe hai aur mai tumhe pick up karne aaoga tumhare ghar ke paas...
g-nahi samrat...tum nahi aaoge..aur mai bhi tumhare sath nahi aaogi...
s-this is nt fair chasmish...tumhe mere sath ana hoga..
g-samrat mai...mai nahi aa sakti...mujhe...
s-chasmish...tum mujhe apna dost manti hona to fir...
g-samrat...pls mujhe nahi ana hai...
gunjan went from there...
s to himself-ana to tumhe hoga hi chasmish...
he again went to gunjan...
s-chasmish...
g-samrat...tum samajte kyu nahi ho..mai nahi aa sakti tumhare sath...
s-chasmish pls...
g-aur mera naam gunjan hai...chasmish nahi..
s-ok sorry gunjan ji...
g-ab mujhe jane do...
s-gunjan...agar tum mere sath date par nahi aaogi to mai...to mai tumhe pakkad kar rakhuga..
he pulled her towards him...
s-aur jab tak tum haa nahi kahogi tab tak mai tumhe nahi choduga...Smile
g-samrat...samrat chodo mujhe..pls..Unhappy
s-pehle kaho ki tum mere sath date par aa rahi ho...
g-samrat..samrat pls mujhe jane do...pls..Unhappy
s-pehle kaho ki tum mere sath aaogi to hi mai tumhe choduga varna...Smile
g-samrat...thick hai..mai aaogi tumhare sath...
samrat leaves her n smile...gunjan went from there...
s to himself-ab ayega mazaa...Smile
in canteen...arman cell rings...
ar-riddhima..mai 2 min mai ata hu...
arman went from there...other side..samrat was talking on phone with sumone...arman saw samrat taking gunjan's name..
ar to himself-ye samrat gunjan ka naam kyu le raha hai aur ye kisse baat kar raha hai...sunna padega..
other side..samrat on phone..
s-mai 7 baje gunjan ko lekar vaha pohoc jaoga...sara plan maine tumhe samja diya hai...aur kuch bhi gadbad nahi honi chahiye...
boy(on other phone)-dnt worry samrat...koi gadbad nahi hogi...
s-gud...ab mai rakhta hu...
boy-ok bye..
...
s-ab ayega asli mazaa...Smile
samrat went from there...arman heard evrything..
ar to himself-ye samrat kisse baat kar raha tha...aur plan kya ho sakta hai...mujhe pata karna hoga..par usse pehle mujhe gunjan se baat karni hogi...
he went in the class...bt gunjan was nt there..
ar to himself-ab ye gunjan kaha chale gayi..
ar-her aashi...
ashi-yes arman...
ar-kya tumne gunjan ko kahi dekha hai??
ashi-maine gunjan ko abhi thodi der pehle bahar jate hue dekha...
ar-ok thanks...
arman went to find gunjan..other side..in canteen...
r to herself-ye arman kaha reh gaya...2 min bolke gaya aur abhi tak nahi aya...
riddhima went from the canteen...she saw arman n went to him..
r-arman...arman kaha the tum??mai kabse canteen mai tumhara wait kar rahu hu aur tum yaha...
ar-riddhima gunjan kaha hai??mujhe usse abhi milna hai...
r-arman tum kuch pareshan lag rahe ho...kya hua??sab thick to haina...
ar-mujhe kuch thick nahi lag raha hai..samrat kuch galat karne wala hai gunjan ke sath...
r-wht...par tum aisa kaise keh sakte ho..
ar-kyuki maine uski sari baatein sun li hai...vo koi plan bana raha hai gunjan ke liye...aur 7 baje vo pata nahi kya karne wala hai...mujhe is baare mai gunjan se baat karni hogi...kaha hai vo?
r-mujhe nahi pata...class mai hogi...
ar-vo class mai nahi hai...
r-ohhh...to fir kaha hai...ruko mai cal karti hu use..
arman saw gunjan with nupur...
ar-vo rahi gunjan...
r-chalo..
arman n riddhima went to gunjan..
r-gunjan...tum kaha thi??
g-mai to di ki class mai thi...
n-kya hua??tum log itne pareshan kyu lag rahe ho..
ar-gunjan...kya tum samrat ke sath aj kahi bahar jane wali ho??
g-samrat ke sath...na..nahi to...
n-arman..tum aisa kyu puch rahe ho??
then arman told them abt samrat's phone conversation...
n-kya...
r-gunjan...tujhe sach mai kuch nahi pata..matlab tu sach to bol rahi haina...
g-...
ar-gunjan...pls tum bolo jo tum bolna chahti ho..
n-ha gunjan bolna...tu chup kyu ho gayi...
g-mai...vo actually...samrat ne mujhe kaha ki...vo mujhe aj 7 baje date par le jaega..
r-par kyu...
g-vo khud mere paas aya tha...aur usne mujse sorry kaha..fir usne mujse kaha ki mujhe uske sath date par jana hoga kyuki ye uska sorry bolne ka tarika hai...
n-to tu use mana nahi kar sakti thi kya...tu janti haina vo kaisa hai fir...
g-di maine use mana kiya tha par...
r-par kya gunjan...
g-di chodiye na...aur vaise bhi mai uske sath kahi nahi jane wali hu...
ar-gunjan...pls tum samrat se dur raho..vo acha ladka nahi hai...tum meri dost ho isliye tumhe keh raha hu...
r-arman bilkul thick keh raha hai gunjan...samrat aur mayank se to dur hi rehna chahiye..dono bhai ek jaise hai...
n-ab mujhe class mai chalna chahiye...gunjan mai tujse baadme milti hu...bye guys...
nupur went...
r-chalo ab ham bhi class mai chalte hai...lets go...
other side...kasturi reached sabarwal office...
ra-hey kasturi...
k-raunak sir...
ra-kya hua??
k-vo devika mam ne mujhe sabarwal house bheja tha robbie sir ko lene ke liye par vo...Unhappy
ra-vo apni gf ke sath chale gaya...rite..
k-apko kaise pata chala...
ra-vo mera bhai hai kasturi..mai use achi tarah se janta hu vo kaisa hai...
k-sir ab mai kya karu...Unhappy
devika comes...
d-kasturi...
k-devika mam ap...
d-where is robbie??
k-mam vo robbie sir to...Unhappy
ra-mom...robbie apni gf ke sath bahar chala gaya...
d-wht...kasturi ye tumhari responsibility thi robbie ko office lane ki aur tumse itna bhi nahi hua...Angry
k-mam par robbie sir meri baat hi nahi mante...Unhappy
d-this is nt the reason kasturi...mujhe laga ki tum robbie ko handle kar sakti ho aur isliye maine tumhe rakha bt no..i was wrong...Angry
k-sorry mam...Unhappy
d-kasturi i dont think ki tumse ye sab hoga...u r fired...
k-mam..mam pls aisa mat kariye...ap...Unhappy
d-mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai kasturi...now leave...
k-mam pls...pls aisa mat kariye...Unhappy
d-i dnt want to hear anything...pls leave kasturi...
ra-mom...i think hame ek chance dena chahiye kasturi ko...
d-raunak...is ladki se itna chota kaam bhi nahi hua to ye...
ra-mom...ap robbie ko janti haina...vo kisi ki baat nahi manta hai...aur kasturi to nayi hai to hame kasturi ko ek chance to dena chahiye na...
d-...ok...bt next time agar tumse galti hui to...
k-mam..agli baar aisa nahi hoga..
devika leaves from thr...
ra-kasturi...now dont worry...mom to aisi hi hai..tum unki baato ka bura mat mano..
k-nahi raunak sir..mujhe devika mam ki baat ka bura nahi laga...bura to mujhe isliye lag raha hai ki mujse itna chota sa kaam bhi nahi hua...Unhappy
ra-kasturi...now leave it...aur robbie ko handle karne mai tumhe thoda time to lagega na...so..
k-raunak...mai apse kuch kehna chahti hu...
ra-ha bolo na..
k-sir mujhe nahi lagta ki mujse ye sab hoga...matlab robbie sir bohot hi rude hai aur vo apki tarah bilkul nahi hai...vo meri baat bhi nahi sunte...pata nahi mai kaise unhe handle kar paogi..mujhe kuch samaj mai nahi aa raha hai...Unhappy
ra-kasturi...ye sab negative thoughts apne dimag se nikal do...be positive yaar...dont loose hope kasturi..u r a nice girl n u can do it..
k-raunak sir..ap bohot hi ache hai...kash robbie sir bhi apki tarah hote...Smile
ra-thanks kasturi..now get back to work..varna mom fir se gussa ho jaega..Smile
k-ok sir...Smile
other side...mayank was very angry...samrat came to him...
s-hey bro..kya hua...itna gusse mai kyu hai??
m-vo nupur apne ap ko samajti kya hai...Angry
s-kya kiya usne??
m-mai uska project partner banna chahta hu par usne mujhe mana kar diya..uski himmat kaise hui mujhe mana karne ki..mai itne ache se usse baat kar raha tha aur vo mujpar chilla rahi thi..kehti hai ki vo mujhe partner nahi bana na chahti hai...aur usne partner dhund liya hai...Angry
s-bas itni si baat aur itna gussa...
m-partner to mai uska bankar hi rahuga...Angry
s-chill dude...ab isme itna gusse hone wali baat nahi hai...Smile
m-tujhe kya hua...tu itna khush kyu hai..
s-kyuki aj mai gunjan ke sath date par jaa raha hu...Smile
m-wht...gunjan to nupur ki behen haina...
s-hmmm...
m-samrat tujhe vo behenji hi mili thi..i mean khubsurat ladkiyo ki kami thodi hai ki tu us gunjan ke sath date par jaa raha hai..
s-oh common mayank...date to sirf ek bahana hai...aj jo uske sath hone wala hai vo to usne kabhi sapne mai bhi nahi socha hoga...Smile
m-tere dimag mai chal kya raha hai...koi plan hai kya...mujhe bhi to bata...
s-dude...mai tumhe baadme samjata hu...abhi mai chasmish ko date ke baare mai yaad dilake ata hu...Smile
he saw gunjan and went to her...
s-hey chasmish...Smile
g-samrat...
s-kaha jaa rahi ho??
g-mai library jaa rahi hu...
s-ohh...to aj date par jane ke liye taiyar rehna ok..Smile
g-nahi samrat...mai tumhare sath nahi aa sakti...
s-par tumne mujse kaha tha ki tum mere sath aaogi..
g-samrat..pls tum mera picha chod do..mai vaise ladki nahi hu..
s-i knw chasmish par tum to janti hona ki ye mera sorry bolne ka tarika hai...
g-samrat mai tumhe janti bhi nahi ho to mai tumhare sath date par kaise aa sakti hu...
s-ham dono dost hai chasmish...
g-hamari dosti ko waqt hi kitna hua hai samrat...ham aj hi to dost bane hai...
s-iska matlab tumhe mujpar bharosa nahi hai...
nupur comes...
n-tum jaise ladke par kisko bharosa hoga samrat...Angry
g-di...
n-samrat...hame tumhare plan ke baare mai sab pata chal gaya hai...Angry
s-plan...kaisa plan nupur..
n-bano mat samrat...kya karne wale the tum meri behen ke sath...Angry
s-nupur ye tum kya keh rahi ho mujhe kuch samaj mai nahi raha hai...
n-ek thappad lagaogi na to sab samaj mai aa jaega...Angry
g-di...di ab chodiye na...chaliye ap...
n-ek baat kaan kholkar sun lo samrat...gunjan se dur raho varna mujse bura koi nahi hoga...Angry
nupur n gunjan leaves frm there...
s to himself-sab gadbad ho gayi...mere plan ke baare mai in dono ko kaise pata chala...shit...Angry
hey guys...here ends my part 5..i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...so kya hoga ab??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all...
hazra



Edited by hazraluvarjun - 22 August 2011 at 11:33am

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Nyc update pls continue soon

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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
i had alot of catching up to do! i like how the story revolves around all your characters! 
good  job!!Smile

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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
mayank aur sam akal dhay sam trying use gunjan make him fall for gunjan gunjan hee sam ki dream girl hai

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nice update!!!!
 
 
 

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Nyc update i hope samrat gunjan ke sath kuch galat na kare. Continue soon

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superb update..hopefully samrat doesnt do anything bad to gunjan...cont soon

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