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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Nice part

cont soon

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really amazing..
grrr8888 work..
thnx for the pm.......

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Its so awesum as usual.thnks for the pm

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged

hi guys...updated part 4...i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...read  n njoy..

gunjan went from there...
n-di agar mai gunjan ke sath nahi hoti to pata nahi kya hota iska...ye itna darti kyu hai di...
k-gunjan bohot hi innocent hai...aur jaisi bhi hai meri pyari si choti behen hai...Smile
n-aur meri bhi...Smile
at sabarwal house...its 1 o clock..bell rings...devika(robbie's mom) openes the door..
rm-robbie...time dekha tumne...raat ke 1 baj rahe hai...kaha the tum..Angry
ro-(he was drunk)-oh mom...ab mujhe ander to ane do...
rm-tumne fir se drink kiya...robbie y u drink so much...
ro-mom i promise agli baar kabhi drink nahi karuga...ok...bye...
he was nt in his senses...he walked n fell on the floor..he was unconscious n so he fainted...
rm-robbie...robbie utho..
then she called the servant...
rm-ramu...robbie ko room mai le jao...ye hosh mai nahi hai...
ramu-ji devika mam...
he took him in the room...n made him lie on the bed...he then removed his shoes n switch off the light n left...
other side...in devika's room...
rm-robbie kab sudrega...aj bhi drink karke aya hai..is ladke ka kya hoga...mai to pareshan ho chuki hu...
rd-devika..maine to tumse pehle hi kaha tha robbie bohot bigad chuka hai...jab phone karta hu to kaat deta...kabhi kehta hai ki busy aur kabhi uthata hi nahi hai...ye ladka khud to pagal hai aur hame bhi pagal kar dega...
rm-kuch to sochna padega robbie ke baare mai varna vo out of control ho jaega...
rd-ho chuka hai devika...
rm-maine robbie ke liye ek secretary rakhi hai kasturi bhusan...
rd-koi fayda nahi hai...robbie kisi ko tikne nahi dega...
rm-par kasturi mujhe samajdar lagti hai...aur ab vo hi robbie ko sudharegi...n thts my challenge...
rd-itna bharosa us ladki par...
rm-hmmm...
next day...17 july 2009(wed)...
g-di...jaldi kariye na...der ho rahi hai..ab kitna make up karogi...
n-by god gunjan...thoda sabar rakh yaar...mujhe eyeliner to laga ne de...
g-par di ap kitna time laga rahi ho..jaldi kariye na...vaha clg mai riddhima kabse mera wait kar rahi hai...
n-aree gunjan tu jaa bahar mera wait kar..mai 5 minute mai ati hu...
g-par di jaldi...
n-ha baba...tu jaa...
k-chalo mai chalti bye nupur..bye gunjan..
g-bye di...sambhal kar jana..
k-hmm..dont worry...Smile
kasturi went...
g-di mai bahar apka wait karti hu...jaldi aao..
n-ha thick hai...
gunjan went from there...
n to herself-ye gunjan bhi na...ache se make up bhi nahi karne deti hai...
other side...in clg...riddhima in class...she was waiting for gunjan..
r-ye gunjan bhi na...kitna time lagati hai...arman bhi nahi aya hai abhi tak..mujhe akela rehna bilkul pasand nahi hai..Angry
s-to kya mai company du...Wink
r-tum...Angry
s-vo actually mai kisi bhi khubsurat ladki ke chehre par ye sadness nahi dekh sakta isliye tumhe company dene aa gaya...Smile
r-acha...par mujhe tum jaise awara ladke ke sath rehne mai koi interest nahi hai...so get lost...Angry
s-aree bapre...tum to gusse mai aur bhi zada khubsurat lagti ho...pls aise hi gussa kiya karo...bohot acha lagta hai sacchi...Smile
r-samrat...Angry
s-wah wah...kya baat hai...Smile
r-Angry
arman comes...
ar-samrat...
s-ohh..hi arman...Smile
ar-riddhima ko pareshan mat karo varna...
s-varna kya karoge tum...Smile
ar-aisa haal karuga ki muh dikhane ke layak nahi rahoge...
s-mazak to bohot acha kar lete ho tum...Smile
r-samrat...tumne arman ka gussa kabhi dekha nahi hai isliye aisa keh rahe ho...
s-ab to mujhe arman ka gussa dekhna hai...common arman...Smile
r-samrat tum pacthaoge...
s-common arman...show me ur anger...Smile
arman got angry n he punch samrat...all wer shocked...
s-Angry
ar-dekh liya mera gussa...
r-maine kaha tha tumse samrat par tumne meri baat nahi suni...
samrat was went out from the class...
r-arman...tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha..
ar-riddhima...kal bhi vo tumhe pareshan kar raha tha aur aj bhi...mujhe pasand nahi jab koi tumhe pareshan kare..
r-acha ab gussa chodo...aur beth jao..
other side...gunjan and nupur reached clg...
g-di mai class mai jaa rahi hu...baadme apse milti hu...bye..
n-bye gunjan...
gunjan was going in her class bt samrat called her from back...
s-hey chasmish...
she turned back...
g-tum..
he went to her...
s-actually mai tumhe sorry kehna tha...
g-...
s-maine kal tumhara mazak udaya tha isliye...
g-...its ok...
s-nahi...i mean tumne mujhe maaf to kar diya na??
g-...ha...
s-so friends...Smile
samrat forwarded  his hand to gunjan
g-...
s-kya ham friends nahi ban sakte...
then they shake hands...
s-thnx...Smile
g-thnx kyu??
s-meri frnd banne ke liye...Smile
g-Smile
s-to aj tumhe mere sath date par chalna hoga..Smile
g-kya...date par...
s-actually ye mere sorry bolne ka tarika hai...Smile
g-nahi..mai nahi aa sakti...aur maine tumhe maaf kar diya hai isliye...
s-no...tumhe mere sath ana ho hoga kyuki ye mera sorry bolne ka tarika hai...jab bhi meri wajah se koi sad hota hai to mai use date par le jata hu isliye tumhe bhi mere sath ana hoga...
g-nahi samrat..mai date par...mai kabhi bhi date par nahi gayi...
s-oh common chasmish...agar tum mere sath date par nahi aaogi to mujhe lagega ki tumne abhi tak mujhe maaf nahi kiya hai..
g-nahi samrat maine tumhe maaf kar diya hai...
s-chasmish tum aj mere sath aa rahi ho...ok..
g-par samrat...
s-lecture ke baad milte hai chasmish...bye..
samrat went...
g-par samrat...
g to herself-date par...samrat ke sath...Unhappy
she went in her class...
r-gunjan...kaha reh gayi thi...
g-vo...sam...
g to herself-nahi mai abhi riddhima ko date ke baare mai kuch nahi bataogi varna vo fir se gussa ho jaegi...
r-kya??
g-kuch nahi...vo mujhe library se ek book issue karvani thi isliye der ho gayi...
r-pata hai aj kya hua...
g-kya??
r-aj arman ne...
sir comes...
r-sir aa gaye...baadme bolti hu...
g-thick hai...
other side...at sabarwal office...devika called kasturi in her cabin...
k-may i come in mam..
rm-come in...
kasturi went inside...
rm-have a sit...
kasturi sits..
k-yes mam...
rm-kasturi...tum robbie ki nayi secretary ho aur ab tumhe use handle karna hoga...
k-yes mam..
rm-maine tumse pehle kaha tha ki vo raunak ki tarah nahi hai isliye tumhe use handle karne ana chahiye...
k-mam..ap bilkul fikar mat kariye...mai robbie sir ko handle kar lugi...mujhe pata hai unhe kaise handle karna hai..
rm-i like ur confidence...
k-thank u mam...Smile
rm-robbie abhi tak office nahi aya hai isliye ab tumhe sabarwal house jana hoga aur use yaha lana hoga...
k-sabarwal house...
rm-yes..bahar driver wait kar raha hai...tum driver ke sath jao aur robbie ko lekar aao...
k-ok mam...
rm-now u can go...
kasturi left...
other side...in class...
girl-hey nupur...u r too good in studies yaar...shukla ke sare sawalo ka sahi jawab diya...keep it up...Smile
n-thnx...Smile
girl-tum itni padhai kaise kar leti ho.i mean i hate studies...
n-but i love to study...
girl-omg...how can u love studies...anyways...bye..
n-bye...
students were talking abt nupur..
girl1-nupur is really intelligent yaar...
girl2-i agree...aur pata nupur ne last time ki test mai top kiya tha...
girl3-kash mai bhi nupur ki tarah itni intelligent hoti...
mayank was getting inrritated by their talks...
m-hey stop it now...Angry
girl1-wht is ur problem mayank...
m-i have problem...tum log kabse nupur ki baate kar rahe hai...mai irritate ho raha hu...
girl1-mayank u knw wht...u r jealous of nupur bcoz tum nupur ki tarah intelligent nahi hona isliye...u r nt intelligent ok..
m-stop it...jealous aur mayank sharma...never...Angry
girl1-oh really...vo to dikh hi raha hai mayank sharma...
devdar sir comes...
sir-students...project ke baare mai to tum sab ne notice board par pada hi hoga...so nw u all hve to choose ur partners...bt abhi nahi...baadme...
then he start teaching...after sometime...
sir-partners decide hone ke baad mai tum logo ko topic duga n then u hve to reasearch on that...aur jiska bhi project sabse acha hoga use best project of the year ka award milega excel clg ki taraf se...so be ready for that...
he left...all were busy in choosing their partners...
boy1-hey nupur kya mai tumhara project partner ban sakta hu??
boy2-nupur kya mai tumhara project partner ban sakta hu??
girl-agar ye log nupur ke partner ban jaeyege to obviously award to jitege...bcoz she is the topper of the class...
m to himself-mujhe nupur ka partner banna hoga..sari mehnat to use hi karni hogi..mai to sirf timepaas karuga.project karegi nupur aur sara credit luga mai...mayank sharma...aur princi bhi mujse impress ho jaega...ab ye nupur kaha chale gayi...
he went out to search nupur...other side...kasturi reached sabarwal house...she went inside n was shocked to see such a big n beautiful house...
ramu(servant)-ap kaun hai??
k-ji..mai kasturi..
ramu-acha to ap kasturi hai...devika mam ne mujhe phone karke apke baar mai kaha...ap robbie sir ko lene ayi haina...
k-ji...
ramu-ap uper jaeye aur vaha left side par unka room hai...
k-ji thank u...
kasturi went upstairs n went on the left side...
k to herself-yahi room hoga robbie sir ka...
then she knocked the door...bt nobody opened...
k to herself-robbie sir darwaza kyu nahi khol rahe hai...
then she pushed the door...n the door opened..
k to herself-darwaza to khula hi tha...mai bhi na...
kasturi was shocked to see his room...everthing was messed up...
k to herself-ye robbie sir ne kya haalat bana di hai room ki...
then she started keeping all the things at a proper place  n at tht time robbie came out from bathroom...
ro-tum yaha mere room mai kya kar rahi ho..
k-robbie sir actually...
ro-aur tumhari himmat kaise hui meri chizo ko haat lagane ki...
k-apka room bikhra hua pada tha to maine socha...
ro-ramu kaka...(he shouted)...
he comes...
ro-ye ladki ko mere room mai ane ki izazat kisne di??Angry
ramu-devika mam ne hi ise yaha bheja hai apko lene ke liye..
ro-what...
k-robbie sir ap jaldi se taiyar ho jaeye..mai niche apka wait karti hu...
ro-hey tum mujhe janti nahi ho...abhi bhi waqt hai...chod do ye job varna bohot pachtaogi..Angry
k-nahi sir..mai ye job nahi chodugi...aur ye job mujhe devika mam ne di hai aur jab tak vo mujhe nahi kahegi tab tak mai ye job nahi chodugi...
ro-ohh to ye baat hai...ab mom hi tumhe dhakka mar kar nikalegi n that my promise...
k-dekhte hai sir...ab ap jaldi se taiyar ho jaeye...devika mam apka wait kar rahi hai..
kasturi went from there...
ro to himself-is ladki ka kuch to karna hoga...Angry
other side...in clg...
m-hey tumne nupur ko kahi dekha hai??
boy-nupur class mai hogi ya to library mai...
mayank went in the library...all were shocked to see him...
girl-mayank library mai...omg...
then he saw nupur n went to her...
m-hi nupur...kya mai yaha beth sakta hu??
n-tum...
m-ha...kya mai beth sakta hu??
nupur was going bt mayank caught her hand...
m-nupur mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai...
n-mayank mera haat chodo..
he leaves her hand...
m-sorry...
n-mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai...
m-pls nupur...ek baar sun to lo...
n-mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai..
m-pls nupur..
n-bolo...
m-pehle betho...
both sits...
n-jaldi bolo..mujhe class mai jana hai...
m-nupur...kya mai tumhara project partner ban sakta hu??
nupur was shocked...
n-kya...
m-pls nupur mana mat karna...mai...
n-tumhara dimag to thikane par hai...aur maine apna project partner dhund liya hai...
m-nupur pls..pls...
n-sorry mayank par maine apna partner dhund liya hai...aur mai tumhare jaise ladke ko apna partner bana na chahti bhi nahi hu...
nupur went...
m to himself-itni akkad...tumhara partner to mai bankar hi rahuga nupur..Angry
other side...
s to himself-arman ne aj jo bhi kiya uski sazaa ab chasmish ko milegi...bas ab to chasmish ke sath date par jane ka intezar hai...
hey guys here ends my part 4...i hope u like it..dont forget to comment...so kya hoga ab??kya karega samrat??kya mayank nupur ka preject partner ban jaegi??kya nupur maan jaegi??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next uppdate ka..love u all..
hazra


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Its so small update yaar.nyway nice part...ab zyada der mat karna...update soon...i cant wait...

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