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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged

tht was nice part

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged
nice part dear plzzzz start mayur love story soon .Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
u updated afte soooo long yr
awesomeee update
loved it to the core
fantastic job
mayu was so rude
poor nupur
feeling bad for her
all the couples were amazingggg
 
do continue soooooooon

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.
NICE WORK GREAT JOB..
UPDATE SOON DEAR .N THANKS FOR THE PM.Tongue

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
Hi...its me marjaan aka angelmrjn.i luv 2 read ur ff.....i luv RoKa n AR jodi.plzzz...here aftr pm to me 2.....update ur nxt part soon....

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
mast hai yaar,,itne amazing concepts aapke dimag me aate kaha se hai.... awesumm

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Nice part

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged

hi guys...updated part 3...i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...read n njoy..guys...here r some titles...pls pls suggest me which will suit this ff..

1.tum mile

2.love ho jaega

3.kuch kuch hota hai

if u want to suggest any other title other than this then do tell me...

both went down...
rm-robbie...kaha jaa rahe ho??
ro-mom..mai mona ke sath long drive par jaa raha hu...Smile
rm-robbie...
ro-mom pls ab ap mujhe lecture dena shuru mat kar dena...chalo mona...
both left from there.
rm to herself-ye robbie kab sudhrega...
other side...in clg...
r-ye mayank apne ap ko clg ka hero samajta hai...kitna besharam ladka hai vo...Angry
g-mai to usse dur hi rehti hu...jab bhi vo aur uska bhai samrat mere samne ate hai to mujhe ghabrat hone lagti hai...
r-isme darna kya hai gunjan...vo log thodi hamara khun kar dege...
g-riddhima mai teri tarah nahi hu...
r-to mere jaisi ban bindaas...
g-ab chod na...chal class mai chalte hai...
both went in the class...
r-ab ye arman kaha chale gaya...
g-riddhima use lecture attend karne mai koi interest nahi hai aur vo to tu use force karti hai isliye vo tere sath attend karta hai...ab chal...
r-gunjan tu beth...mai ati hu...
g-thick hai...
gunjan went n sat on her place..samrat comes in class...when he enters in the class all were shocked to see him...
girl1-omg samrat aur class mai...
girl2-samrat tum lecture attend karne aye ho??
s-ya sweetheart...any problem...Smile
girl2-no samrat..Smile
g to herself-ise abhi hi ana tha...Unhappy
samrat went and sat beside gunjan...
g-...ye meri dost ki jagah hai...
s-yaha apki dost ka naam likha hai kya...Smile
g-...
g to herself-ye riddhima kab ayegi...Unhappy
s-tum is class mai sabse different...i mean tum sab se alag dikhti ho bilkul bhenji types...aur uper se chasme bhi hai...Smile
all laughed...
gunjan was getting nervous...she stood up n was going to go from the class but samrat stopped her..
s-hey chasmish...Smile
she turned back...
s-kaha jaa rahi ho...sorry agar bura laga ho to...Wink
she went out from the class...
r-aree gunjan tu kaha jaa rahi hai??
g-riddhima tu kaha chale gayi thi...Unhappy
r-mai to arman ko dhundne gayi thi par tu kaha jaa rahi hai..class mai chal na...
g-mujhe class mai nahi jana hai...
r-kyu kya hua??
g-vo...vo samrat...
r-samrat...kya samrat??
g-vo class mai hai...
r-to kya hua??
g-vo...mujhe nahi jaana hai class mai...
r-kuch to hua hai class mai...bol na mujhe kya hua??samrat ne kuch kaha??
g-...
r-matlab usne hi kuch kaha...ab use chodugi nahi...Angry
gunjan stopped her but riddhima went in the class...she went to samrat...
r-utho...Angry
s-what...
r-maine kaha utho..Angry
samrat stood up...
r-tumhari himmat kaise hui meri dost ko kuch kehne ki...samajte kya ho apne ap ko...Angry
gunjan also went in the class...samrat saw gunjan...
s-ohhh...to tum us chasmish ki dost ho...Smile
r-uska naam gunjan hai...Angry
s-par mai to use chasmish hi kahuga...Smile
r-tum jaise ladke kabhi nahi sudhar sakte...Angry
s-sudharna chahta bhi kaun hai...Wink
r-ye meri jagah hai..hatho yaha se..Angry
s-yaha tumhara naam to nahi likha haina..Smile
r-hath jao yaha se..Angry
s-nahi hathuga to kya kar logi...Smile
r-hath jao samrat...Angry
s-no...Smile
she was going to slap him bt he caught her hand...
r-hath chodo mera...Angry
s-nahi...Smile
r-samrat leave my hand...Angry
arman comes...
ar-hath chodo riddhima ka...
s-ohhh arman...mai riddhima ka hath nahi choduga..Smile
ar-maine kaha riddhima ka haat chodo...
s-maine bhi kaha na mai riddhima ka haat nahi choduga...
then sir comes in the class n samrat leaves her hand n sit on his place...
riddhima and arman sits on other place...gunjan was standing...
sir-tum kyu khadi ho...
g-vo...
sir-samrat ke baju mai jagah hai..jao aur beth jao uske baju mai...
she went n sit beside samrat...samrat kept his hand on gunjan's hand..she got nervous...
s-ooopss...sorry chasmish...Smile
g-Unhappy
after sometime...gunjan went out from the class...
r-samrat...tumhe to mai baad mai dekh lugi...Angry
arman and riddhima also went from there...
s to herself-chasmish tumhe pareshan karne mai bohot mazaa ata hai...Smile
other side...
r-gunjan...tu itna darti kyu hai...
g-riddhima kya zarurat thi tujhe us samrat se baat karne ki...Unhappy
r-gunjan vo to tujhe pareshan kar raha tha aur...
ar-gunjan just relax...vo kuch nahi karega...aur mai hu na tum dono ke sath...Smile
r-ha gunjan...arman hai to tension lene ki kya baat hai...Smile
g-Smile
r-chalo canteen mai chalte hai...Smile
they went in the canteen...other side...raunak drops kasturi...
k-thank u so much sir..Smile
ra-its ok kasturi...take care of urself ok..Smile
k-yes sir..Smile
ra-bye...Smile
k-bye sir..Smile
raunak left from there...kasturi went inside...her mom saw her with raunak...
km-kasturi...vo ladka kaun tha jo tujhe chodne aya tha??
k-maa vo mere boss hai raunak sir...
km-acha...par tu unke sath...
k-maa actually mujhe bohot chakkar aa rahe the isliye raunak sir ne mujhe drop kar diya...
km-chakkar aa rahe the...beta tu thick to haina..tujhe chakkar kyu rahe the...bohot zaada kaam tha kya...
k-aree maa ek sath itne saare sawaal...
km-par beta...
k-maa mai bilkul thick hu..ap fikar mat kijiye...Smile
km-Smile
k-nupur aur gunjan abhi tak nahi aye??
km-nahi beta...tu room mai jakar thoda aram kar le..bohot thak chuki hogi na..
k-thick hai maa..Smile
kasturi went in the room...other side...at sabarwal house...
ra-ramu kaka...robbie kaha hai??
ramu kaka-vo to apni dost ke sath bahar gaye hai..
ra-aur mom??
ramu kaka-vo kahi bahar gayi hai..
ra-acha thick hai...
he went in his room...other side..in clg...samrat told mayank abt gunjan n they laughed...
s-par sach mai mayank vo bhenji i mean chasmish hai bohot innocent...Smile
m-to pareshan karne mai to aur bhi mazaa ayega...Smile
s-ya rite...Smile
m-uska naam kya hai??
s-gunjan...Smile
nupur heard their talks...
n to herself-ye log gunjan ki baate kar rahe hai...
she went there..
n-maine tum logo ki baate sun li hai...Angry
s-ab ye kaun hai??
n-tum log jiski baat kar rahe ho mai uski behen hu...Angry
s-what...matlab tum chasmish ki behen ho..
n-ha mai gunjan ki behen hu..Angry
s-cool...Smile
n-tumhara ka yahi kaam haina dusra ka mazak udana...Angry
m-ha ham logo ka yehi kaam hai..Smile
n-agar meri behen ke sath kuch bhi bura hua to mai tum dono ko chodugi nahi by god...Angry
m-by god...itna gussa...Smile
n-Angry
s-aa gayi teri item...
simran comes..
sim-mayank tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..chalo na kahi drive par jate hai..i m bored...
m-anything for u babes..lets go..Smile
sim-Smile
mayank and simran left from there...
n-samrat...meri behen se dur raha karo...Angry
she was going bt samrat stopped her..
s-hello...miss by god...
she turned back n gave an angry look to him...
n-nupur...nupur hai mera naam..Angry
n she left from there...
n-ye to kuch zaada hi gusse wali hai par chasmish iske jaisi bilkul nahi hai...kitni alag hai dono behen...Smile
other side...in car...
mona-hey robbie...maine suna hai tumhari mom ne fir se secretary rakhi hai tumhare liye...
ro-ya darling par tum fikar mat karo..mai use zada din tak tikne nahi duga...Smile
mo-ya rite...Smile
other side...in canteen...
r-arman...tumse ek baat puchu??
ar-permission lene ki zarurat nahi hai...pucho..
r-tumhare type ki ladki kaise honi chahiye??
ar-tum achanak se aisa sawal kyu puch rahi ho?
r-aise hi...kyu nahi puch sakti..
ar-to suno...jo meri gf hogi vo sabse khubsurat honi chahiye...aur vo apne ap ko bohot lucky manegi kyuki uske paas mere jaisa bf jo hoga...Smile
r-apne ap ko bohot smart samajte ho...
ar-samajta nahi hu...mai smart hu...
r-acha chodo...mujhe ye batao ki tumhe aisi ladki mili kya??
ar-abhi tak to nahi par bohot jald mil jaegi..
r-ohh...koi dhyan mai hai kya??
ar-riddhima tum ye sab achanak se kyu puch rahi ho??
r-nahi batana hai to mat batao...
g-Smile
ar-gunjan tum has kyu rahi ho??
g-mai..mai kaha has rahi hu...
ar-kuch to baat hai...
r-ye gunjan to pagal hai..mujhe kuch kaam yaad aa gaya..bye guys...
riddhima went from there...
ar-gunjan riddhima mujse ye sab kyu puch rahi thi??
g-mujhe kya pata arman...
ar-tum dono ko samajna mere bas ki baat nahi hai...
he also went from there...
g to herself-ye riddhima bhi na...Smile
after sometime...
n-gunjan...tu akeli hai...riddhima kaha hai??
r-di vo arman ke sath chale gayi...
n-kya...tujhe akela chodkar chale gayi...mere ane tak wait nahi kar sakti thi..
g-di actually arman ko der ho rahi thi..use kuch kaam bhi tha..aur riddhima ko to hamesha vahi ghar drop karta hai...di ab ham bhi chalte haina..
n-ha chal...
both were going...
s-hey chasmish...Smile
both turned back...
n-teri itni himmat...Angry
nupur was going to samrat bt gunjan stopped her..
g-di..di pls rehne dijiye na..pls chaliye...
n-par gunjan...
g-di pls chaliye na pls...
n-tu kehti hai to thick hai...chal..
both left from there...
s-pata nahi kyu par ye chasmish ko pareshan karne mai bada mazaa ata hai...Smile
after sometime..gunjan and nupur reached home...
g-maa kasturi di kaha hai??
mom-beta vo bohot thak gayi hai isliye room mai aram kar rahi hai...
n-mai bhi room mai jaa rahi hu...
gunjan and nupur went in the room...
g-kasturi di..Smile
k-aa gaye tum dono..Smile
n-di kaisa tha aj ka pehla din??Smile
k-bohot acha tha..Smile
n-di sabarwal office to bohot bada hoga na...Smile
k-hmm..Smile
g-aur vaha ke log kaise hai di..
n-bohot ache hai...pata hai aj mujhe office mai chakkar aa rahe the to raunak sir ne mujhe ghar drop kar diya..vo bohot ache insan hai...Smile
n-par di ap jiski secretary ho uska naam to kuch aur haina..
k-robbie naam hai unka..
n-oh..vo kaise hai??
k-vo itne ache nahi hai..matlab unka baat karna ka tarika mujhe acha nahi laga..aur vo mujhe keh rahe the ki mujhe sabarwal office mai zada din tak tikne nahi dege...
n-wht...uski itni himmat jo meri di ko aisa kaha...
k-aree buddhu..tu fikar mat kar...unko kaise handle karna vo mujhe achi tarah se ata hai...
n-to fir thick hai...Smile
k-gunjan tu bohot pareshan lag rahi hai..kuch baat hai kya??
g-nahi di..bas aise hi...
n-aree di vo samrat...
g-di pls...
k-samrat...kya samrat??
g-kuch nahi di...
n-di actually iski class mai ek ladka hai samrat aur vo gunjan ko bohot pareshan karta hai...gunjan ko chasmish bolta hai...
k-kya chasmish...naam to acha hai...Smile
g-di...Unhappy
k-ok ok sorry...fir kya hua??Smile
n-par di vo log bohot hi bure log hai..aur uska bhai mayank to pura pagal hai...jab bhi vo monkey mere samne ata hai to man karta hai 2-3 thappad laga du.Angry..dono bhai sirf timepaas karne ate hai clg mai...huh...
k-tum dono avoid karo aise ladke ko...
n-mai to kisi se darti nahi par ye madam itna dar jati hai...muh hi nahi khulta hai samrat ke samne...
g-di pls...
n-kya di...sach hi bol rahi hu mai..thoda apna muh khola kar...
k-nupur thick keh rahi hai gunjan...
g-bas karo ap dono..Unhappy
gunjan went from there...
n-di agar mai gunjan ke sath nahi hoti to pata nahi kya hota iska...ye itna darti kyu hai di...
k-gunjan bohot hi innocent hai...aur jaisi bhi hai meri pyari si choti behen hai...Smile
n-aur meri bhi...Smile
hey guys here ends my part 3...i hope u like it...so kya hoga ab??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka...love u all..
hazra
 
 
 


Edited by hazraluvsalman - 11 November 2011 at 2:59am

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