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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
hey hazra! Smile
wow another beautiful concept! Clap Thumbs Up
love it to the core! Heart
thanks for the pm! Smile
please update soon!Smile
~Alisha~

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
aww!Smile
amazing job!!Clap
I love the concept!!Heart
nice idea!! Smile
update soon!!LOL
thanks for the pm!!Smile
*anisha

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
AMAZING YAAR
MAYU IS SO FLIRTY
CONTINUE SOON
N THX 4 D PM

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Hey hazra sorry for late comment i log on and got your pm
wow very nice ff i love roka and mayur my fav jodi
keep up good work and pm me when u update
 

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged

hi guys...updated part 2..i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...read n njoy..

kasturi took the files from raunak and went in robbie's cabin to keep the files...just at that time robbie comes in his cabin...
ro-kaun ho tum??
k-mai...mai kasturi...
ro-kaun kasturi...aur tum mere cabin mai kya kar rahi ho??
k-to ap hai robbie sir...
ro-kya tum meri nayi secretary to nahi ho??
k-bilkul sahi pehchana apne sir..mai apki nayi secretary hu kasturi bhusan..Smile
ro-ohh...wow...thats cool...mai tumhe ek salah dena chahta hu...ye job chod do kyuki vaise bhi kuch din mai tumhe ye job chodna hi padega aur isse acha to ye hoga ki tum abhi isi waqt job chod do...
k-sir...mai ye job nahi chodugi..
ro-ok as u wish...mai bhi dekhta hu kab tak tum yaha tikti ho..
other side...nupur was sitting in her class...
n to herself-meri notes...meri notes kaha chale gayi...Unhappy
she went outside to search for her notes...then she saw her notes lying down...she went there n took her notes...
n to herself-thank god notes mil gayi varna fir se itni mehnat karni padti...
when she turned back she saw mayank...
n-tum..
m-ye notes meri hai..
n-ye notes meri hai mayank..
m-jhoot mat bolo...
n-mai kabhi jhoot nahi bolti...ye handwritings mere hai...
then he takes the notes from nupur..
n-...meri notes do mujhe..Angry
m-ahh...chilla mat...Angry
n-chillao nahi to kya karu...tum meri notes mujhe do varna...Angry
m-varna...varna kya karegi tu...
n-dekho pls mujhe meri notes de do..mera lecture start ho chuka hai...
m-to mai kaha tumhe rok raha hu...jao apni class mai..
n-mujhe meri notes de do mai apni class mai chale jaogi..
m-aree kaha na ye notes meri hai...chal ab jaa yaha se...
n-tamiz se baat karo...Angry
m-tamiz...vo kya hota hai??Smile
n-Angry
mayank was going from there bt...
n-ruk jao mayank...Angry
he stopped...nupur took her notes from him bt mayank pushed her n she fell n all started laughing on her...
m-mayank se panga logi to yehi haal hoga...samji...Smile
he went from there...nupur stood up...
n to herself-kitna besharam ladka hai mayank...Angry
mayank went to simran..
m-hey simran...tumhe notes chahiye thi na..ye lo mai tumhare liye notes lekar aya...Smile
sim-oh wow mayank...thnx..par ye notes hai kiski??Smile
m-tumhe usse kya hai..notes mil gayi na...ab zaada sawal mat karo..
sim-ok baba...thnx..Smile
mayank went from there...
sim to herself-mayank mai janti hu ki tum mujse pyar karte ho...tum kehte nahi ho but i knw u love me..Smile
other side...in class...
r-gunjan...mujhe kuch kehna hai tujse..
g-kya??
r-gunjan mujhe na...mujhe pyar ho gaya hai...Smile
g-kya...
r-ha gunjan...i m in love...Smile
g-kaun hai vo??
r-arman...Smile
g-kya...Smile
r-ha gunjan..i really love arman...Smile
g-Smile
r-par gunjan mai kaise pata karu ki vo bhi mujse pyar karta hai ya nahi...
g-riddhima...isme pata karne ki zarurat nahi hai...mujhe lagta hai ki arman bhi tujse pyar karta hai...
r-ye tu kaise keh sakti hai...
g-dekh riddhima..tum dono ek dusre ko bohot pehle se jante ho aur ache dost bhi ho...aur aj tujhe ye chot lagi to arman kitna tense ho gaya...isse pata chalta hai vo teri kitni care karta hai...
r-to iska ye matlab to nahi ki vo mujse pyar karta hai...
g-riddhima...tu itni achi hai aur tujhe dekhkar to kisi ko bhi tujse pyar ho jaega..Smile
r-kya gunjan tu bhi...aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..mai itni bhi khubsurat nahi hu...
g-riddhima mai sach bol rahi hu...tu bohot hi achi hai aur...
arman comes...
ar-kya baate ho rahi hai dono best friends ke bich mai zara mujhe bhi to batao..Smile
r-..kuch nahi arman..ham to bas aise hi baate kar rahe the...Smile
g-ha arman...Smile
ar-gunjan..nupur ko kuch hua hai kya??
g-nahi to..kyu??
ar-vo ro rahi thi abhi...
g-kya...kya hua di ko??Unhappy
ar-i dont know..mai to class mai aa raha tha to maine use rote hue dekha isliye mai uske paas gaya aur usse pucha to usne kuch kaha nahi aur rote hue vaha se chale gayi...
g-kya...kaha gayi di??Unhappy
ar-pata nahi...
g-mai ati hu..
gunjan went from there...
r-kya hua hoga nupur ko...
gunjan went in nupur's class but she was not there..
g to herself-di to class mai nahi hai...
then she asked one girl...
g-excuse me..
girl-yes..
g-kya apne meri di..i mean nupur ko kahi dekha hai??
girl-mai to abhi abhi class mai ayi hu..sorry...
g-its ok...
she was going from there but mayank stopped her..
m-to nupur tumhari behen hai...Smile
gunjan turned back...
g-ha...kya apne meri di ko kahi dekha hai??
m-mujse panga lene chali thi teri behen...
g-kya matlab...mai kuch samji nahi..
m-aur samjane ke liye mere paas waqt bhi nahi hai...pata nahi kaha kaha se chale ate hai...
mayank went from there...
g to herself-ye aisi baate kyu kar raha tha...kuch to baat hai..mujhe di ko dhundna hoga..Unhappy
gunjan went n started to find nupur...other side...at sabarwal office...
k-devika mam...maine sara kaam kar diya hai...Smile
rm-hmm...good...
devika got busy in her work...
k-devika mam...
rm-kya hua kasturi...tum yaha kyu khadi ho??
k-vo..robbie sir to apne cabin mai nahi hai aur sara kaam bhi ho chuka hai to ab mai...
rm-tum ek kaam karo...mujhe abhi bohot urgent kaam ke liye bahar jaana hai isliye ye files ko thick se sahi jagah par rakh dena...
k-thick hai mam...mai rakh dugi..
devika left from there...kasturi was arranging the files n kept all the files at a right place...after sometime...raunak comes..
ra-mom...mai ghar jaa raha hu...
kasturi turned back...
k-raunak sir ap...
ra-oh kasturi tum ho..mujhe laga mom hai..Smile
k-...
ra-tum abhi tak ghar nahi gayi??
k-vo devika mam ne mujhe ye files sahi jagah par rakhne ke liye kaha hai to isliye mai...
ra-ohk...mom kaha gayi hai??
k-pata nahi..unke koi urgent kaam tha..
ra-ok...agar mom aye to unhe keh dena ki mai ghar jaa raha hu..
k-ji thick hai mai keh dugi..Smile
kasturi was nt feeling well...
ra-kasturi..tum thick to hona??
k-..ji..mai thick hu..
ra-i dont think so ki tum thick ho..
k-vo bas thode se chakkar aa rahe hai...
ra-kasturi i think ab tumhe ghar jaana chahiye..vaise bhi aj tumne bohot kaam kar liya hai..
k-nahi sir..mai thick hu..aur..
ra-kasturi...itna kaam karna acha nahi hai...tum ghar jao..
k-nahi sir...
she was going to fall as her head was paining bt raunak helped her..
ra-kasturi..tumhari tabyet thick nahi hai...chalo mai tumhe tumhare ghar tak drop kar deta hu...
k-...
ra-chalo kasturi...
k-par devika mam...
ra-mom ko mai keh duga...ab chalo..
both went outside...
k-sir...mai khud chale jaogi..
ra-aree kasturi meri car hai..mai tumhe drop kar duga..
k-nahi sir..its ok mai khud chale jaogi...
ra-kasturi mai tumhara boss hu isliye tumhe meri baat maanni hogi..chalo..
kasturi sits in car and they left...other side..
g to herself-di phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai aur kahi bhi nahi dikh rahi hai...kahi di ghar to nahi chale gayi..Unhappy
riddhima and arman went to gunjan..
r-gunjan..kya hua nupur ko??
g-pata nahi riddhima..di kahi mil hi nahi rahi hai..aur phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai..mujhe lagta hai di ghar chale gayi hai..
r-vo tumhe chodkar kaise ghar jaegi...yahi kahi hogi..class mai check kiya??
g-ha class mai bhi nahi hai..mujhe lagta hai ki mayank ne di ko kuch kaha hai aur isliye di ro rahi thi..
r-mayank ne...par aisa kya kaha hoga usne??
one girl comes...
girl-tumhari behen nupur washroom mai hai aur vo ro rahi hai...
g-kya...
gunjan and riddhima went in the washroom..they saw nupur n went to her..
g-di..di ap yaha..aur ap ro kyu rahi hai??
n-..kuch nahi gunjan..Cry
g-di boliye na...mayank ne kuch kaha apse??
n-...Cry
r-nupur...bolo na kya hua..
n-mayank ne sabke samne mera mazak bana diya..aj sab mujpar has rahe the..mujhe kitna bura lag raha tha us waqt..Cry
r-par kiya kya usne??
n-usne mujhe dhakka dekar gira diya..Cry
g-kya..par usne aisa kyu kiya??
then nupur told them everything..
r-vo kya pagal hai..usne tumhari notes tumse le li aur kehta hai ki vo uski notes hai...usko bolna chahiye ki kabhi usne lecture attend bhi kiya hai ki vo notes likhega...
n-riddhima...rehne do ab...mai dusri notes bana lugi..vaise bhi mujhe uski shakal vapas nahi dekhni hai..
r-par ye galat hai...vo...
n-riddhima..ab rehne do...mai dusri notes bana lugi...
nupur went from there...at sabarwal house...robbie was in his room with his gf mona...
ro-so mona darling...lets go for a long drive..Smile
mona-okk...Smile
both went down...
rm-robbie...kaha jaa rahe ho??
ro-mom..mai mona ke sath long drive par jaa raha hu...Smile
rm-robbie...
ro-mom pls ab ap mujhe lecture dena shuru mat kar dena...chalo mona...
both left from there.
rm to herself-ye robbie kab sudhrega...
hey guys...here ends my 2nd part...i hope u like it...so kya hoga ab??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka...love u all...
hazra


Edited by hazraluvsalman - 11 November 2011 at 2:48am

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 6:53am | IP Logged
hey dear
amazing part
loved it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm

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