Gunahon Ka Devta

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: chatterbox

dreamy zor ka jhatka means literally that she wud get a shock of her life


papa rai is too evil she shud stop playing games too much and at times be normal bahu

she is smart but over smart at times too

if she plans balance she wud be fine


 
@ red, that is what I was searching for!...you are so right, she is being too oversmart. I think she feels that she has scared them and so will listen to her!
 
I wonder why does she wants to keep them under her toes constantly?....a story here I think. I always said there is more to her reason for marrying.....
 
thanks for the translation, yes she will get the shock of her life.....imagine Jagat and MC bundle her in the middle of the night?!....I would be too afraid to sleep in that house...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i think she is just like that only

no other reason
and becoz of her brash or rough behaviour  she was not abl to get married as she kept rejecting ppl or insultng them

mayb she took some liking for jagat as he seemed like a jhoru ka ghulaam type

mayb she wants to be bossy or likes to be bossy and she did hate what papa rai did to mama the day they got married so she is teaching them lesson bt she wud pay for it if she is not careful
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: chatterbox

i think she is just like that only

no other reason
and becoz of her brash or rough behaviour  she was not abl to get married as she kept rejecting ppl or insultng them

mayb she took some liking for jagat as he seemed like a jhoru ka ghulaam type

mayb she wants to be bossy or likes to be bossy and she did hate what papa rai did to mama the day they got married so she is teaching them lesson bt she wud pay for it if she is not careful

 
ha!ha! I like that, Jagat looking that type.
 
hmm maybe you are right, no other reason.....what a contrast to Arpita....I love that. One girl, worshipping her husband and her in-laws, loving them so much and nothing is too much...the other, almost bullying the men and being nice to her MIL though I don't think she sits down with her or talks to her...it would be nice to see Simple cooking alongside Mama and chatting....
 
I think the contrast is deliberate....but suited to both household.
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww dreamy
another masterpiece................................................
mere paas words nahi hai ki mai tumari taarif kaise karoooooo
iss analysis ko padha toh mai khoi hoon
kehna chaho bhi toh tumse kya kahoo
kisi juban bhi woh lawaz hi nahi
ki jinmein kitna achha hai yeh
tumein bata sakooo
it is tooooooooooooo goood
Edited by danno - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey ferdousπŸ€—
how r u?
today i m very happy & busy too coz my parent r coming from Iran &  i m cleaning my home &  garden.πŸ˜‰

as always u &  nandu said every thing & i havent more word.

really what a woman wants from her hubby?
she wants nothing except peace,love & safe life .

as for bj,i m looking forward to see her face & her reaction.she ll be come like a fish in fried  oil!
πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: danno

woww dreamy

another masterpiece................................................
mere paas words nahi hai ki mai tumari taarif kaise karoooooo
iss analysis ko padha toh mai khoi hoon
kehna chaho bhi toh tumse kya kahoo
kisi juban bhi woh lawaz hi nahi
ki jinmein kitna achha hai yeh
tumein bata sakooo
it is tooooooooooooo goood

 
Hi sharan,
 
Our resident shayeri....you need to start preparing....if Avita consummate, you need to compose something suitable for the occasion!πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: chista

hey ferdousπŸ€—
how r u? Hi  Sara, fine thanks.πŸ€—
today i m very happy & busy too coz my parent r coming from Iran &  i m cleaning my home &  garden.πŸ˜‰ oh that is wonderful!...I hope they stay for awhile and you get to spend lovely time with them!!...take them to the eiffle tower, the champs e, seine, lourdes..even disney world!!πŸ˜†

as always u &  nandu said every thing & i havent more word. thanksπŸ˜ƒ

really what a woman wants from her hubby?
she wants nothing except peace,love & safe life . so true, even better if it was a man like Avdesh...gosh he just melts the heart - how he thinks of her so much, loving her so much!

as for bj,i m looking forward to see her face & her reaction.she ll be come like a fish in fried  oil!
πŸ˜† ...aha, that is nice...she will be fried!! she will be green in the face when she realises Avdesh just wants to be a lover!πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 13 years ago
hii dreamyyyyy
mai koshish karongiiiiiii
mai waise try toh kar rahi hoon
bass starting ki lines ban jaye phir toh aagey flow apne aap bann jata hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: danno

hii dreamyyyyy

mai koshish karongiiiiiii
mai waise try toh kar rahi hoon
bass starting ki lines ban jaye phir toh aagey flow apne aap bann jata hai

 
@ red, so true...starting line is always difficult...for me, I also need to think of a theme or a motif to appear throughout...then the rest falls in place...editing also helps!
Ohh I cannot wait to read your masterpiece, I bet it will be wonderful and reflect their romance!...honestly, the consummation feels more of an anti-climax. The lead up is what is interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Dreamy di...

Nice post

Dat Arpi is one Behoodi... 😑

Who told her to put her finger in the middle...

Kya pata kab next milega??

Such a wonderful chance she lost...😑



Was happy to see you on P forum yesterday...