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FF:Adha Ishq ch 22 updated on pg 39 (Page 8)

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anurag24t

i want d girls to win. i am on their side. u are a fabulous writer and do update soon.
thanks u Wink

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
hey guys here it is do comment
 

 Ch 4: Aa Dekhe zara Kisame Kitana Hai Dum

Geet: ab hum donoo dance kar na hai chalo maan

Maan: theek hai tho ho jaa

3rd song Aaj Hai Sagaai (but first duo dance from girls side)

(geet dancing)

Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Naach Ke Humko Dikha
Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Naach Ke Humko Dikha
Kudi Ki Tarah Na Sharma
Kudi Ki Tarah Na Sharma
Hay Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Oye..
(maan starts dancing)
Sabko Nachaoon
Nach Nachke Dikhaoon
Aa Mujhko Gale Se Laga
Sabko Nachaoon
Nach Nachke Dikhaoon
Aa Mujhko Gale Se Laga
Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada
Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada
Oye Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Hay Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Oye Soniye
(maan dances)
Sar Pe Sajaake Sehra
Baaraat Leke Aaoon
Dulhan Tujhe Banaake
Doli Mein Leke Jaaoon
O Shava O Shava
O Shava O Shava
(geet dancing)

Bholi Samajhke Mujhpe
Na Daal Aise Daane
Shaadi Nahin Karoongi
Ja Maan Ja Deewane
O Shava O Shava
O Shava O Shava
(maan dancing)

Sun Albeli Meri Tanha Akeli
Ab Katti Nahin Ratiyaan
Ja Re Harjaai Chal Chhod Kalaai
Sab Dekhti Hain Sakhiyaan
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Oye Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Hay Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Oye Maan Ja

Hey..
Hey..

Kehti Hain Meri Sakhiyaan
Dil Mein Hai Chor Tere
Kyon Haath Dhoke Aise
Peechhe Padha Hai Mere
O Shava O Shava
O Shava O Shava
Sakhiyon Se Apni Keh Do
Ki Beech Mein Na Aayein
Ban Jaayein Meri Saali
Jeeja Mujhe Banayein
O Shava O Shava
O Shava O Shava
Main Na Aaoon Tere Sang Tere Achchhe Nahin Dhang
Na Aise Baat Badha
Mujhe Kar Na Tu Tang Ab Band Kar Jung
Aa Banke Dulhan Ghar Aa
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Haan Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Haa Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

Everyone takes a break from dancing

And is talking when these three guys arrive

Samraat(mjht), Prithvi (Gaurav Khanna).....from LNMDJ, and shaan aka shanthanu khandelwal of RBO(karan tacker)

Samraat: itna sanaata  kyun hai bhai?

Prithvi: haan hum itne jaaldi har nahin maanthe

Shaan: aur yeh kitne sad hai ki humare dost shaadi kar ra hai arre  kyun

And suddely the  song

Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey
Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey
(samrat singing dancing)
Ek Kunwaara, Phir Gaya Maara
Phas Gaya Dekho, Ye Bechaara
Ek Kunwaara, Phir Gaya Maara
Phas Gaya Dekho, Ye Bechaara
Do Din Ki Hai Ye Chaandni
Phir Kaari Kaari Raat Hai
Tu Maan Jaa Dulhe Raaja
(Tak Ser Khaaji, Tak Ser Khaaja
Kal Teri Shaadi Tera Baj Gaya Baaja) -2
Ek Kunwaara, Phir Gaya Maara
Phas Gaya Dekho
Ye Bechaara..!
(Prithvi (Gaurav Khanna)dancing
Ankhiyon Ke Pinjre Mein Bandh Karke
Le Gayi Jo Tujhko Pasand Karke
Soni Soni Meethhi Baatein Chand Karke
Kismat Apni Buland Karke
Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey
Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey
Ankhiyon Ke Pinjre Mein Bandh Karke
Le Gayi Jo Tujhko Pasand Karke
Soni Soni Meethhi Baatein Chand Karke
Kismat Apni Buland Karke
Sach Kya Hai Zara Jaan Le
Us Chehre Ko Pehchaan Le
Unki Galiyan Mein Na Jaa
(Tak Ser Khaaji, Tak Ser Khaaja
Kal Teri Shaadi Tera Baj Gaya Baaja) -2
Ek Kunwaara, Phir Gaya Maara
shaan of RBO(karan tacker) dancing
Aaj Hasle Tu Kal Rona Padega
Sukh Chain Tujhe Sab Khona Padega
Jab Woh Kahegi Uthh Jaayega Tu
Jab Woh Kahegi Tujhe Sona Padega
Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey
Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey
Hey.. Aaj Hasle Tu Kal Rona Padega
Sukh Chain Tujhe Sab Khona Padega
Jab Woh Kahegi Uthh Jaayega Tu
Jab Woh Kahegi Tujhe Sona Padega
Karni Hongi Ghulaamiyaan

(All the 3 guys dancing)
Teri Hongi Salaamiyaan
Aa Laut Ke Bandhu Aaja
(Tak Ser Khaaji, Tak Ser Khaaja
Kal Teri Shaadi Tera Baj Gaya Baaja) -2
Ek Kunwaara
Phir Gaya Maara
Phas Gaya Dekho, Ye Bechaara
Do Din Ki Hai Ye Chaandni
Phir Kaari Kaari Raat Hai
Tu Maan Jaa Dulhe Raaja
(Tak Ser Khaaji, Tak Ser Khaaja
Kal Teri Shaadi Tera Baj Gaya Baaja) -2

Sid: little brother I love your friends

Samrat: Sid bhai abhay ki shaadi hai tho we had to come

 Prithvi: haan aur hum larke kitne ache haan woh asie larkiyon ko  win nahin kar ne de gay

Shaan: waise abhay yaar tumhare saliyan sirf 4 haan aur nahin hai kya?

Misha: of course haan infact Piya aur humare dost  are coming

Nidha,Ramani,Sanjana,sonia, and Vritika

Just then sanjana and Nidha walk in and hug piya

 Piya: Sanju ,Nidi fianally tum agay

Sanjana: sorry piya late hoge but anyway congrats

Samrat: waise yeh lakiyaan kuch bhi nahin kar sakthe sirf make up aur who bhi karne 3 hour lagate

Sanjana: excuse me who are you to say this any ways this week shaadi hai lets wait and see .

Nidha: anyways we are very happpy  for you  congrats jiju Panchi di koi help chaiye kya?

Panchi: haan tum dono kitchen mein jao mama will let you know what  to do

sanjana and Nidha go in the kitchen

nidha: madhu aunty kuch kaam hai kya?

Madhu: haan tum dono yeh sherbert  larkon ko server karo(she leaves)

Sanjana opens the cupboard and takes out chli powder and adds it in the drink

Nidha: sanju kya karen pagal hogi hai

Sanjana:don't worry piya ,abhay, panchi,misha koi nahin haan yeh lo this tray has no chille powder in it my tray does lets go geet bhabi tum yeh water ka tray hold karo iss mein hot water hai tho  jab larke pani chaiye yeh de do lol I have teach that samrat a lesson he beteer not underestimate us girls

Girls walk out

They serve the drinks but sid stops them and tells them abt the soap trick

Sid: wait let me try it first

Nidha:gives him the normal glass with no chili powder

Sid: it's fine you guys can drink it

Nidha is taking the empty glasses  away when  She bumps into Prithvi and all the copper glasses fall to the floor

Prithvi: I'm sorry here let me help  you pick the glasses up

Nidha: oh thanks (picking up the glasses looking down at the floor)

Prithvi (looking at her lost in her beauty)

Nidha: thanks again by the way I'm nidha

Prithvi:Nidha  you have a beautiful name I'm Prithvi  they are reaching their hands  out shanking  when suddenly the guys are shouting at the girls

Prithvi: huh what happening over their?

Nidha: oh know Mirchi

Prithvi: what (they run over to see what happened)

Girls cant stop  laughing 

Prithvi: what happened

Samrat : water  fast

Geet:  gives them water  yeh lo pani

Shaan: spits out the water  yeh tho hot water hai

Sanjana: ab bhi kya tum  larkon ko lag tha ki hum larke  sirf make up kar sak the you fool don't try to think we are any less got it

Madhu the boys some ice

Prithvi and samrat grab the ice cubes and Nidha and Sanjana and put the ice down their back

Prithvi grabs nidha

Nidha:ahhhh what are you doing stop it

Samrat grabs Sanjana

Sanjana: you idoit I wont spare you  how dare you  she grabs the bucket of ice and puts on his head  

 Shaan: is helping the  samrat get back at the girls when  he

Samrat :shaantanu   do what ever you can to worry the girls this mean war

Shaan goes outside for some frsh air when he see a chipkali (lizard) he picks it up

Walks over to the nearest girl who is sitting down talking to Misha  when shaan places the Chipkali on her chunni

Ramani: screaming at the top of her lungs AHHHHHHH

Shaan laughing sid, shauriya,samrat, prthivi laughing

Everyone dancing to

Hariyaale Banne Baba Ke Dhore Mat Jaio
Hariyaale Banne Baba Ke Dhore Mat Jaio, Dadi Ka Laadla
Mere Banna, Dadi Ka Laadla Mere Banna

Here We Go Now, Here We Go Now
Ahaa, Sounds Fresh, That's Right...
all the girls
Kachchi Kaaliyaan Mat Todho, Malan Degi Gaaliyaan - 2
Kachchi Kaaliyaan Hum Naa Todhen, Le Jaayen Poora Bageecha - 2
Malan Teri Bagaiyaa Bhali Hai
Har Kyari Mein Kaaliyaan Khilli Hain
Bhavre Hum Prem Ke Pyasa
Sun Lenge Teri Gaaliyaan...

Kachchi Kaaliyaan Mat Todho, Malan Degi Gaaliyaan - 2

Kaliyon Ke Galon Pe Til Hai
Aur Kaano Mein Baaliyaan
Kaliyon Ki Aankhen Nasheeli
Par Par Par
Kaliyon Ki Aankhen Nasheeli
Par Hothon Pe Gaaliyaan

Bhanvare Hain Yaa Bhainse Hai Ye
Gaate Sunlo Kaise Hain Ye
Apne Tabele Mein Khonte
Se Inko Hai Baandhna

Kachchi Kaaliyaan Mat Todho, Malan Degi Gaaliyaan

Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah
We The Cool Champions
Always Number One
Never Play With Us
We The Son Of A Guns
You Are Trying So Hard To Challenge Us
You Will Fall Flat On Your Face

Main Hoon Naar Naveli, Mein Hoon Chil Chabeeli
Mere Paas Nahin Tum Aana
Mere Chakhshu Kataari, Jaadu Ki Pitari
Tumhe Padh Jaayega Pachtanaa
Hato Jaao - 2

Don't Scream Don't Shout

Mat Karo Jora Jori
Humein Naa Yun Bharmao

Break It Down - 2
Don't Scream Don't Shout

We Are On The Hook
We Are On The Line
You Cannot Sing
You Cannot Rythme

Inko Mridang Tabla Sunaye
Jo Taal Chedh, To...

Tin Tinak Tin Tinak Tin Tin Thinak Tin Rhinak Tin
Tiki Tiki Tiki Tiki Tiki Tiki... Taa...

Bhanvare To Hain Matvale, Par Mann Ke Kaale Hain
Bante Hain Kitne Sayane, Par Akal Pe Taale Hain

Kaloyon Sunlo Baat Khari Yeh
Bhavron Se Yoh, Bagiyaan Hari Hai
Hum Jo Naa Aayen Yahaan Pe
To Muh Phir Taakna

Kachchi Kaaliyaan Mat Todho, Malan Degi Gaaliyaan
He Kachchi Kaaliyaan Hum Naa Todhen, Le Jaayen Poora Bageecha

Malan Teri Bagiyaa Bhati Hai
Har Kyari Mein Katiyaan Khilli Hain
Bhavre Hum Prem Ke Pyase
Sun Lenge Teri Gaaliyaan...

Kachchi Kaaliyaan Mat Todho, Malan Degi Gaaliyaan - 2

She Is Very Pretty - 2
She Is Very Very Very Very Pretty
Pretty Pretty Ya...

I Am Very Pretty - 2
I Am Very Very Very Very Pretty
Pretty Pretty Ya...

She Is Very Pretty - 2
She Is Very Very Very Very Pretty
Pretty Pretty Ya...

I Am Very Pretty - 2
I Am Very Very Very Very Pretty
Pretty Pretty Ya...

Sanjana samrat, nidha prithvi, shaan and ramani Eyelocking session

Guys take abhay to dance sid sitting next piya for a while

Panchi :Ramani vritika abhi thak nahin hai

Vritika: hi panchi  where piya she is sitting over there she see sid next to her

Ok I will go greet her  but sanjana and ramani take her to the dance floor

Vritika: 'Hmm, yeh ladka koon hai?'

ramani :'Koon, Abhay  woh Jiju .

Vritika:  jiju ka bhi Hai barra cute handsome bhi!'

ramani :'Woh toh hai, magar  woh huamare

Vritika :Mein abhe aayee!' I'll be back. There's someone I want to dance with.

The music came on, and dancing once again started.

' Vritika Walking uptoAbhay and  stopped. Want to dance
Abhay  not knowing   what to do and not to be rude   just nodded

 and went to dance. Getting to middle of the dance floor they

 danced to a slow song with peoples gaze on them.

Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Feel Me
Hoo Feel Me
Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Heal Me
Ho Heal Me
Thinking Abt The Love We Make And All Life Sharing
Come And Feel Me
HO Feel Me

Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Feel Me
Comon Heal Me

Tu Aaja Tu Bhi Mera Mera
Tera Jo Ikrarr Hua

To Kyun Na Mein Bhi
Keh Dun Keh Dun
Hua Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Hua
Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon

Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon
Piya suddenly looks and sees Viritka dancing with abhay

Piya:  viritka and abhay

Sid: what little bro with your friend oh Shit ab uska band bajega
Ramani:Piya  viritka mistook sid as jiju and then she

Piya really hurt walks away:mein abhi aye

Sid: little bro  toh teri shamat ayee!

Ramani: 'Aur iss viritka  ko meine patana hogaa!' walking upto viritka as the song was nearing it's end.  

Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Feel Me
Ho Feel Me
Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Heal Me
Ho Heal Me

Umm Waise To Maan Mera
Phele Bhi Raaton Mein
Aksar Hi Chahat Ke Haan
Sapne Sanjota Tha

Phele Bhi Dhadkan Yeh
Dhun Koi Gaati Thi
Par Abb Jo Hota Hai Woh
Phele Na Hota Tha

Hua Hai Tujhe Jo Bhi Jo Bhi
Mujhe Bhi Is Baar Hua

To Na Main Bhi Keh Doon Keh Doon
Hua Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Hua

Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon

Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon


Annkhon Se Chuu Loon Ki
Bahein Tarasti Hain
Dil Ne Pukara Hai Haan
Abb Tu Chale Aao

Aao To Shabnam Ki Boodein Barasti Hain
Mausam Ishara Hai Haan
Aab To Chale Aoo
Bahon Mein Dale Bahein Bahein
Bahon Ka Jaise Haar Hua
Haan Mana Mene Maana Mana
Hua Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Hua

Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon

Tera Hone Laga Hoon
Khone Laga Hoon
Jab Se Mila Hoon

Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Feel Me
Haan Feel Me

Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Heal Me
Haan Heal Me

Thinking Abt The Love We Make And All Life Sharing
Come And Feel Me
HO Feal Me

Shining In The Shade In Sun Like A Pearl Up On The Ocean
Come And Feel Me
Comon Heel Me

Ramani runs to vritika pulls her away:oye tum paata hai kit um jiju ke saath dance kar re thi

Vritika:jiju looking at sid pointing to him yeh hai jiju

Sid: no I'm sid Abhay's big bro this is your jiju abhay

Ramani: haan vritika piya is very hurt she stromed up stairs

Abhay: kyat um piya ki dost hai shit

Sid haan little brother your in hot water go to piya asap

Vritika: yeah then I will go and apologise

Piya standing in the balcony wiping her tears

Piya: why am I so hurt waise bhi iam only marry abhay for my familys happiness

Abhay: Piya I'm sorry I didn't know

Piya:there is no need to explain it's fine anyways you can do what ever you want in this marriage you are free because this is a contract marriage  I don't care

Abhay (holding piya's hand) listen piya I know ki yeh shaadi is a contract to show the world but this doesn't mean I will insult such a pure rishta even if it's only a drama I wll be a good loyal husband in the limts of the contract I promise please understand me and haan just because we are getting married for what ever reason doesn't mean I cant care for you and your feelings and you cant take that right away from me got it I have and always will care for you and respect your feelings.  Aur haan Piya aaj you are looking very  beautiful today

Piya: thank you and  Sorry abhay I'm just  not able to forget what happened to me and the thing I realize now is that I  loved kabir I still remember are sagaai  that's what has hurt me the most more then what daanish did to me daanish broke me as a woman as person but  kabir is that the person I trusted to love ,trust and Stand by me didn't as much as I did but it didn't take  him one second to belive the lies that daanish told him just because he is his brother any ways abhay I will also be a good wife , friend in the limts of the contract I'm sorry  abhay for being very rude (they here  foot steps )

Piya:abhay some is coming quick do something romantic

(Abhay does the locker room hug from behind)

Sid, Samrat, prithvi, shaan, shauriya,Angad,Anu,Mona Panchi, Misha, maya, tracker,maan , geet, Sanjana,Nidha,Ramani,vritika come to the terrace

Abhay(still hugging piya ):Piya look very beautiful today ,I cant take my eyes off you mein,bhoat  lucky hoon ki tum muhje mile hai aur I promise ki mein tumne sab kuch du ga ki tum  deseve kar the  ho aur

Sid(whistles) :oh little bro nice way to rectafie your dance mistake lol

Mona: oye hoy abhay veer ji how romantic shomantic mein maarjawa

Anu :haan woh toh hai ahkir bhi kiska hai? Huh

Sanjana: Piya you are very lucky kyun ki aaj kay larki  tho stupid idiotyatic personality hote hai jase tuhare yeh pagal dewares

Samrat: waise koi tum log ke naam theek rake  saali

Ramani: oye  iszaat se baat karo haan hum saali hai laken kabhi soorat pare hum kay cheese hai woh tum log ko line pe liyge         

Vritika: Piya babes  sorry I didn't know ki abhay jiju the

Piya: it's ok everything is fine now

Everyone goes down stairs

Then every one starts dancing to

dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniadulhania teri baanegi ye dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniateri baanegi ye dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniasharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniaraat ye aayi hain naachenghe humteri sagayi hain naachenghe humnaachneghe sang mein dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhaniateri baaneghi yeh dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniasharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhania tujhse hain ashiquiitujhse hain har kushiishq mein ko gayemein teri hogayeebole yeh pehro ki pejanya pejanyasharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhaniaraat ye aayi hain naachenghe humteri sagayi hain naachenghe humnaachneghe sang mein dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhaniateri banughi mein dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniasharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhania kyun tere chehre pe thum gayi ye nazarhosh kyun oor gaye yeh hua kia assarsajaanjee hogayee sajaanya sajaanyasajaanya sajaanyasajaan ki hogayee sanjaanya sajaanyasaajaanya sajaanya sharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniaraat ye aayi hain naachenghe humteri sagayi hain naachenghe humnaachneghe sang mein dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhaniateri baanegi ye dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniasharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhania dulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniadulhania dulhaniadulhania ..  

Angads cells rings: hello

Kabir: yaar angad kahan hai what's with all the noise (kabir hears)

Sid: now a couple dance for my little bro Abhay and my sweet hone wale bhabi Piya

Kabir: what Abhay and piya (hangs up and gets in the car)

Zara Si Dil Mein De Jagah TuZara Sa Apna Le BanaZara Sa Khawbon Mein Saja TuZara Sa Yaadhon Mein Basa Mein Chahun TujhkoMeri Jaan BepanahFida Hoon TujhpeMeri Jaan Bepanah Wooooo Hhhhooo Ooohhhh Hooo…  Zara Si Dil Mein De Jagah TuZara Sa Apna Le BanaZara Sa Khawbon Mein Saja TuZara Sa Yaadhon Mein Basa Mein Chahun TujhkoMeri Jaan BepanahFida Hoon TujhpeMeri Jaan Bepanah Wooooo Hhhhooo Ooohhhh Hooo…  Zara Si Dil Mein De Jagah TuZara Sa Apna Le BanaZara Sa Khawbon Mein Saja TuZara Sa Yaadhon Mein Basa Mein Tere Mein TereKadmoon Mein Rakh Du Yeh JahanMera Ishq Deewangi  Ohhhhoo.. Hai Nahi Hai NahiAashiq Koi Mujhsa TeraTu Mere Liye Bandagi Mein Chahun TujhkoMeri Jaan BepanahFida Hoon TujhpeMeri Jaan Bepanah    Zara Si Dil Mein De Jagah TuZara Sa Apna Le BanaZara Sa Khawbon Mein Saja TuZara Sa Yaadhon Mein Basa Keh Bhi De Keh Bhi DeDil Mein Tere Jo Hai ChupaKwahish Jo Hai Teri Rakh Nahi Rakh NahiParda Koi Mujhse Aye JaanKar Le Tu Mera Yakeen Mein Chahun TujhkoMeri Jaan BepanahFida Hoon TujhpeMeri Jaan Bepanah Wooow O Oo O O 

Song ends

Abhiya have a eyelocking session like they are really lost in

each others eyes when kabir comes clapping his  hands

Kabir: wow piya  congrats this  just great yor getting in enagegd  par abhay yaar I feel soo sorry for you piya asise larki hai who changes boys like clothes  first it was me  then she lied that my brother Daanish Ra(before he could finish ) piya slaped him

Piya; how dare you kabir your brother mere saath zaberdastni kara he ruined me now and your saying I'm lieing what little respect I had left you ruined it kabir

Abhay:  kabir I haven't seen anyone so low as you  you know you don't desrve a girl piya  how could you do that to someone who once loved you with her heart  your brother broke her shook her soul and you broke her heart (in sid style ) if you come near my fiance again I will kill you do you understand that Guys kick him out now

That's it for now do comment and press the like button

Precap: more gust to arrive for the  haldi. Mehndi,sangeet, wedding and boys planning a bachlore  party but they don't know that the gurls will ruin it

 Note: if I didn't add anyone who wanted to be in the wedding  will be add in the next chapter and if anyoneelse who wants to be in the wedding pm your name, who will be you r date 

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Omg!!!!!!
Wat an updt dear.
totaly blasting.
dear u rock,it ws superb.
i dun belive dat in ff ,i dance wid abhay.
thanx dear u make my wish true.
wao yar m totally amaze.
u make my day dear.
i wish if u are in front of me,i would hv hug u.
thnx dear ,thnx a lot.
luv all abhiya scenes dear.
totaly an outstanding part.
thnx for d pm dear.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon, i realy cant w8 for d nxt updt so plz
cnt soon nd dun 4get to pm me.
luv u
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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
hei,
thanks yaar..for including me n shaan...
by the way really if someone places a chipkali i wud scream the same u mentioned..LOLz..i was laughing while reading it...
really thanks again..
but how dare kabir came without an invite n how cud he talk like this..now i'm to support the boys for throwing him out..continue soon..
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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
Thnku my sweetums.....u gave me the best scene i could hope for......that too with Prithvi.....u know i am blushing till now....Mirchi scene wasROFL....and later they put ice through ou dresses....lol...loved....Abhiya convo was superb...shiwed that they hav started towards a journey of love....i hope we get to see more secnens like these in the coming funtions...samrat,shaan also rocked....Gud that they threw Kabir out.......senseless git....
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Hey Fiza d update was rocking.. I loved d Chilli Powder n Hot water part.. It was Awesome.. Abhiya Eye locking session was lovely.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
loved it yr
nd u presented dat mirchi thing very beautifully now waiting 4 next update eagerly

nd i want kabir to get some senses
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
rocking update...fiza

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