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FF:Adha Ishq ch 22 updated on pg 39 (Page 26)

ilove99 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 2:18am | IP Logged
update soon

Fiza28 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged

 Ch 14

Next morning  piya was down with a cold at the breakfast table

Ridz: kya abhay I can I understand cravings at this time but playing in the rain pia cant  afford to get sick abhay

Abhay looks at pia

Pia: ridhima im sorry its not abhays fault he told me not to get wet I didn't listen don't be upset at him he is taking very good care of me I am blessed with such a wounderful husband like him don't be so hard on the poor guy 

Shaurya: oh ho kya baat hai bhabi defending bro huh wow seems like your moods swings arent effecting you today huh

Misha: oye you idoit any wife would  defend such a loving husband thank god abhay is not at all as stupid as you

Shaurya: really  well if im so stupid why do you always find excuse to be with me huh *winks shaurya    

Misha blushing : shut and eat you r breakfast wewre getting late (she pushes a sandwhich in his mouth )

Panchi walks in

Sidharth: hello  beautiful you look ravishing today

Panchi:  o please don't  try flirting with me so early in the morning  hurry up misha , shuarya and you mr.flirt we are getting late

 Pia: where are you guys off too so early

They all look at each other

Misha: we have some work at um um  

Panchi: mount college

Sid: yeah im a trustie there

Shaurya: yup and im going to also be um um a trustie

All of them got to go bye they run out

Mona: oye ki hai yeh mt college yrh tho

Anu : mona my tiffin im getting late

Ridz : pia you and abhay come we have your check up today lets go

Ridz: pia you are perfectly fine and the baby is doing well  you will feel more changes in the coming months you will be showing now in a few days or weeks and you might feel some kicking as well so don't get scared ok and if you feel any discomfort at all let abhay and me know asap ok

Abhay and pia go out for lunch and spend the day together they go home at 8 night

 When they get home

The house is dark the lights are off

Abhay ons the lights and go  up stairs the room that connects to them to their room is opens and  dark

Pia and abhay walk in  the room is filled with  toys and decorated with winnie  the pooh  decorations it was freshly painted in a light pastel yellow   and really white  cute cribfilled with toys 

Surprise  misha, sid , shaurya, panchi, mona , anu come out

  Pia: wow its beautiful thank you guys

Abhay: yeah this a really nice surprise

Pia: the color of the room and decorations  are perfect since we don't the gender of the baby yet and I love Winnie the pooh

Sid: your welcome angel  now quickly just deliver that sweet bundle of joy inside of you … you know what pia  I wanted to paint everything pink and have all girly things like princesses  things because I want a beautiful niece like her mother and aunt  *winks at panchi

Suddenly nidha walk in yelling

Everyone loos from the stair case

Nidha: no don't you talk to me its been 3 months what is this prithvi

Prithvi: nidha sweetie why are you yelling let me explain

Nidha: no you either decide what you want don't string me along like this for nothing understood

They all walk down  stairs

Pia: kya hua nidha why are you so upset


Nidha: this stupid body guard of mine he and me have been going out  for 3 months and he introduces   me to his friends and family as his employers daughter I mean hello after all prithvi what is this yeh rishta kya khelata hai huh ? kya?

Prithvi: what wrong why are you over reacting

Nidha: because I love you …. You idiot cant you tell

Prithvi: you are so impatent I was going to do this on your birthday  but youcouldnt wait here he pops out a ring will you marry me nidha?

Nidha: ahhh yes yes yes jumping up and down

Prithvi: hey guys all you  will be invited   in few days for our engagement party

Mona:  when kyun ki 2day mein karwa cuth  hai

Sid looks at abhay he calls the guys in the room slowly

Sid: guys that means full moon we have to be careful around the girls espeacaly pia and this time we cant tell them to not come near us after all its karva chuth

Armaan: but there is no need for them to fast for us we wont die

Anu: infact im fasting for mona  I want make sure she will be safe

Abhay: I know but the girls wont listen and after all its there haak 

Shaurya; bro  this is bhabis first karvachuth I bet she will insist to fast

Abhay: no she cant not in this condition I wont allow it

Two days later karvachuth

Mona, ridz, nidha,misha panchi, fiza  are fasting

Pia: no abhay I will not take the meds I told you even though you refused to let me im still fasting

Abhay: y do u such stupid things I know you love me you don't have to do this  just think about  the baby

Mona: abhay veerji breakfast is ready

Abhay: no im getting late I'll eat in the office I have to go

Later that night

The guys come home early except for arnav

Nidha: don't worry fiz arnav will come before the chaand comes out

Fiza: he better I don't know why he is acting very strange lately

Sid looks at his dad coming downstairs

Sid: hey girls look there chaad nikla (pointing to his dad) laughing

Panchi: you idiot we are so hungry and your joking

Sid: thank you

Panchi: for what

Sid: fasting for me  I know you have don't try to lie   

Panchi: blushing but you don't even care about me


Chaand comes out everyone opens there fast except for fiza

Abhay: pia here quickly  eat you must be straving he gives here ladoo and water

Pia:  abhay don't act smart I call your office today they said you didn't eat lunch and didn't even eat breakfast you fasted for me   thank you …. you love me so much .. you eat you must be so hungry

Everyone is eating dinner except for fiza  she is waiting for arnav   it s  12:30 am 

Nidha: poor fiza where is arnav call him prithvi


Fiza faints and falls down Arnav comes in and cathes her

Pia: bring water now quick

Arnav breaks the fast

Fiza is upset at arnav

Fiza pushes  arnav away from her  that's it

  What is going on arnav for past 3 months your ignoring me , staying away from me you nevr have time for me  anymore work work and work … your lying to me thee is not that much work im in the same office I know what is it you act so weird … your either very rue aand fight all the time or  suddenly very loving  this only happens when there is someone else  there another woman ist there  who is she  dame it tell me kaun hai woh kaun    even today you didn't take out time for me it proves it who is she crys fiza

Guys understand why arnav is acting like this they look at eat other nervously  

Arnav: yes there is some one else better then you in each and every way  in looks intellgences, and everything I cant stand you any more your too clingy  god your so annoying finally I can breath we are threw fiza

Fiza; who is she tell me  

Sid :  fiza  there is no one else I promise  sid takes arnav upstairs the guys follow except prithvi

In the room

Abhay: arnav are you out of your mind why did you lie to her

Arnav: what can I do I cant tell her Im a vampire can I … I cant even control my new life  and I know for a fact I cant let her be near me or I don't know what I will do im unstable abhay this all so new for me

Sid : calm down and be careful today is a full moon  don't go near fiza or pia

Arnav: im going crazy I need to bite some one now

Armaan: control your self ypu cant go down stairs  they are hold him back

Down stairs

Nidha: fiza u are my best friend don't worry  I'll go talk to him

Pia: yeah some has to I will come to

They go upstairs  you go talk I'll just use the restroom and come joi you says pia

Nidha walk in  

Arnav  back is facing her

Nidha: what is this arnav how can you do this to her she loves you

Arnav icant take it any more  he pushes sid away and turns around runs up to nidha shows his teeth and bites her

Nidha falls in his arms

Arnav: im a vampire  I cant be with her and im sorry nidha

Pia : sees  evry thing and faints

Abhay carrys her to the room erases her memory

Nidha opens her eyes

Nidha in the room with the guys

Nidha: you all are vam vam  vampires

Sid:  nidha you now one too you've been bit on a full moon

Nidha : what

Pia in her room

Wakes up screaming everyone comes in

Abhay: pia are you ok

Pia yes I don't remember but I had dream about  a vampire  it was scary

Everyone looks at each other

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UmIbrahim IF-Rockerz

Joined: 17 February 2011
Posts: 8331

Posted: 11 July 2011 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Rocking update Fiza darling!!!!!!!!!!1
Love you for this oneHug...
I enjoyed every bit of it...
Arnav is such a sweetheart and my creator...
Whoa! now I am a vampire...he he...
But I guess that will most probably call of my engagement...
Loved this very much
I loved when Sid said dekho Chand aya on seeing Chaand coming downLOL

Edited by Nidhsara - 11 July 2011 at 1:17am
-Sonia- IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3021

Posted: 11 July 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
amazing update...
OMG! going to be a vampire..congratulations  gal! Wink
& sid was so hilarious .. when he said dekho chaand aya..pointing towards his dad...ROFL...
thanks for the pm..
eagerly waiting for the next update..
continue soon...
MRS.SSO IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2657

Posted: 11 July 2011 at 2:28am | IP Logged
awesum part!!!!!
finallly abhiya r togather
RB81 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9074

Posted: 11 July 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
oh poor nidha..
she is a vampire now..
she came to talk for her friend fiza but..
how will nidha react after this??
is prithvi not a vampy??
hope pia will be safe..
ok do continue soon..

Edited by RB81 - 11 July 2011 at 3:55am
sur001 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3796

Posted: 11 July 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged

Great update...

loved every bit...
Loved Sid's comment...
So,Nidha is a vampireEvil Smile...ab lagta hai Nidh se bach ke rehna hogaLOL
Its really an interesting FF...
Thanks for Pm
Update soon... 
matwamango IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 29081

Posted: 11 July 2011 at 4:51am | IP Logged
I love sids dialogue he is so hilarious

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