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FF:Adha Ishq ch 22 updated on pg 39 (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zoozoo123

Go ahead...

New n refreshing story ....Great.... good character sketch


Really wanted 2 know wht danish did 2 her and how abhay our hero entered her life.


Please do update soon..
thanks. so much glad u liked it our hero entery will be really ntresting

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged

Ch1: Sach ka samaana

 A Devastated, numb, very weak Piya who was in such a state of sock that the tears from her eyes dried out walking  slowly down the stairs  and looking at everyone.  Panchi and misha seeing coming down the stairs run toward her

Panchi Misha holding her

Panchi: OMG Piya Kya hua? What happened tum ko? Piya bole kuch tho bole

Misha:  Piya what happened and your clothes are fully tore and  your lip is bleeding how did you get hurt?

Kabir:  Piya Babes kaun yeh sab tumhare saath  kara tell me I wont spare him

Piya see's Daanish coming down the stairs and walking towards them


Panchi, Misha ,kabir:haan piya  tell us kaun hai woh

Piya hand is shanking but points to Daanish : who hai

 

Misha: Piya what are you saying you mean Daanish  did this to you

Kabir: kya bro ne yeh sab no it can't be

Panchi notices that Piya has scratches and bruises all over her hands

Panchi: I've seen these before at my NGO Oh God No Piya he Raaa before she could finish


Piya : yeees

Misha: #$%@

Kabir : What Rubbish dehko I understand but tum bro ko kya or kyun

Daanish: Kyun ki hum dono Pyaar kar tha hain  

Misha: pushes him what the F*&$%^&$# hell you raa

 

Danish: no humara pyaar  ko intine disgusting and degrading  naam maat do  

Piya: Yelling  at the top of her lungs  and crying her heart  out  (Panchi and Misha holding piya trying to calm her down )Yeh Jhoot hai he is lying iss ke maasum chere pe maat jao iss  ki peeche ek jaanwar hai ek criminal hai ek raa be fore she could finish it

Kabir: Slaped Piya:  enough Piya we are over  he takes out his engagement ring and gives it  to her  

and socked Daanish  in the stomach bro how could  chee

Piya holding her check where she was slapped:Kabir Kabir She runs  after him  too stop him but  faints in Abhay's arms

That's it for now  don't forget to comment and press the like button

Precap: No panchi Di  kuch theek nahain hoga  kaun mujhse  shaadi  karega  Abhay: Mein tum se shaadi karogi

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
hey dear

awesome concept dear
just loved it
plz continue soon
can't wait for the next part
plz add me to ur pm list

love
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
hai,
add me to ur pm list.different start.
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Ooh   I don't know wht to say. Do continue and keep pm me.

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
It was a very well written chp.OMG!!How could Danish do that to Pia.He's such a Censored Poor Pia!OuchThe pre-cap is very interesting.Looking forward to the next chpSmile
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged
kabir slapped pia
hawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


hey jab nxt update do to plz pm me
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
thnx for the updt
it was nice to c wat really happenend
n thnx for pm me

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