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FF:Adha Ishq ch 22 updated on pg 39 (Page 19)

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged
hei nidha,
that was wonderful..
marriage went on well..simple but elegant..
when will pia see the love for her in abhay's eyes..
pia's bidaai..everyone in tears..so after the function we need too leave na..feeling little low abt it..make us visit them occasionally..SmileSmileSmile
so next collection before letting the bride n groom to enter their room..haan?abhay ko zyada fees dhena padega iss ke liye..WinkWinkWink
do continue soon..

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
awesome update nidha...i really enjoyed

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  Ch 10

Abhay and piya and baraat is about leave when

 

Abhay: guys  mere jhoote kahaan hai

 

Nidha: jiju humare pass

 

 

Fiza : haan jiju pass doo  jhoote lo kyun gairls

 

Ramani: that's trur pay up then

 

Shaan: what is this you guys just got  50,000 and more I don't think so

 

 

Prthivi comes to grab the shoes from nidha

 Nidha passes them to aisha

takes them and runs prem grabs them and throws them to arnav to give to  abhay.

 Walk by arnav acting like is alomist trips

Arnav: you ok sweet  kya hua

 Fiza grabs the shoes

And gives them  to misha

Misha  running when shaurys blocks her

 

Hey my gundi hand me the shoe  ok she stats hitting hi with it

Panchi got the shoes and run s

Sid comes to her 

 

Sid: hey beautiful  keep them waise bhi were taking the unmole thing from you guys pia alest I can do this much Abhay give them the money.

 

Abhay gives the girls 75,000

  Pia and them leave

The girls come with them

 

At the raichands

 

 Hasseena is  welcoming them in

 

Haseena: piya beti kick the kalash with ur right foot and  step in themthe wet kum kum and walk  in

Mona: now for the games Oye  jhaale  dehko iss ghare ki bahu jeetagi  ajise mein jeeti aur ridz bhi

 

 Anukalp: nahin abhay bhai will will right boys

 Ridz puts the ring in the milk with flower petals in it

Pia and abhya looking for it abhay finds it and gives to pia

 

Pia wins

 

Abhay gets ready to leave

 

 Chaand:Oye  dulhe raja not so fast humare ghar ka ek tradtion hai  pati ji unke patni ke liye sab ke samaan kuch bole the aur phir ek shaadi ka gift apni biwi ko dehte

 

Haseena: haan abhay your dad sung a song for me   it was very touching and gave me a dimond set

 

Mona: haan abhay veerji yaad hai jab aapke yeh cousin anu  kya kare muje ek poem sunaye so sweet my jhaala

 

Abhay: starts Saathon kasam ki  ek kasam I Love U. Bohat...bohat pyar hai tumse. Jab bhi aankhen band hotien hai sirf tumhara chehara nazar aata hai. Dil har pal sirf tumhe sochata hai. Tumhe hi dekhata hai. Tumhe janata hai. Ek tumhare liy...puri duniya chhod sakata hai ye dil. Iss dil se puccho to..tumhare pas hi hoon main. Apani har ummid pe mera naam likh lo. Apani zindagi me meri subah-sham likh lo. Kyun ki main yahi hoon. yaha...tumhare pas. Bohat pyar hai tumse(credit to my Shashank frompkb)...Pyar tuh sab kar tha hain piya par mere jaysa  pyar koi nahin kar saktha hai kyun ki sab kay pass tum jo nahin hain (credit to my Dr. Armaan from DMG) (he pops out 2boxs  and opens it in the 1st box is  beauiful ruby set with matching kangan the 2nd box is  small  gold baby bangles  )

 

Pia: wow she picks up the baby bangels

Thank u abhay

 

Misha: pia he really loves you

 

Panchi: abhay  the baby bamgels are really cute but what if it's a  boy

 

Abhay: no it will be girl just like her mom

 

Sid: little brother ek aur tration hai dulha apni dulhen ko apni arms mein lak ke room mein le jaata

Abhay picks piya up in his arms and takes her up satiars girls run up the other stairs and block the door way to abhay room boys run after them

Vrithika: na na jiju intne jaldi kya hai

Nidha: haan wiase bhi  raat tho jawan hai na laughs nidha

Misha: your right nidha  kyun jiju  whats the hurry

Shaurya: come on move it girls

Sonia: theek hai phele toll fee do

Aditya : aye chokri  tum larkiyaan kitne passes lagen  shraum tho karo

Prem: we have given you girls enough money no more jao

Ramani: yeh humare haak hai

Mona: yeh kya hai humare abhay veer ji ko tang wang nahin karo (giving abhay milk)  

Abhay tells sid take for him but mona takes it make n

Mona : plhele hum larkiyaan ko naak tho  who bhi  25,000

 Ridz: yes exactly   

They get the money

Panchi: pia don't worry everything will be fine

Abhay pia in the room

Abhay shuts the door and locks it

Pia sitting on the bed

 Abahy comes next to her

 

Abhay: piya you mean a lot to me and I care for you when every   you need me I will be ther for you and our baby I promise and to prove to I mean it here this for you

 

He gives her the  contract

Abhay: pia this the contract

Pia opens and reads it  it says that other then her baby they will not have more kids unless she willing breaks the contract and that abhay will be a father and fully the needs to her baby

Pia: thank you abhay

Abhay: pia   this also for  

Pia: what is this?

Abhay: my share of the raichand  empire  this all on your and the babys name

Later down stairs in the library

Hassena: chaand kal se we have to act normal

Mona  and ridzcomes in:chachiji  kya piya ko abhi nahin patta ki is ghar mein vampires hain

Chaand: haan beti after she has the baby we will tell her

Mona: by god muhje abhi yaad hai jab muhje  patachala ki anu vampire have mein tho  intna dar gi thi

Ridz: haan it wont be easy when I found out about armaan I was ready to divorce him it good that you will tell after the baby

Armaan: haan chache kyun she is very delicate right now thewre shouldn't be any shock for her

In the room

 Pia  sleepy

Abhay you sleep on the  bed I'll sleep on the sofa

Pia; abhay it's ok you can sleep on the bed waise bhi moring mein agar someone comes in then what she falls asleep

Abhay covers her and touches her stomach and thinks

I will promise to love you both just don't be like your father be like your mom

 He falls asleep

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
interesting
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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
hey very naughty update the girls were really bankrupting our dear abhayEmbarrassed
what a song by abhay i m really touched he really loves piya
and also has affection for the baby which is so sweet 
i just hope that soon piya will see the true love in the eyes of abhay and will love him 
thanks for the pm and update soon
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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
nice part...poor abhay, bankrupted on his marriage
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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
I absolutely loved these two updates! They were awesome! The first update beautifully described the wedding! And the second update was just awesome! Abhay is so sweet to think so much about Piya and the baby! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Can't wait for some Abhiya moments now after marriage! Smile Continue soon Smile
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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Funny,naughty,lovely installment...
Hum ladkiyaan  Raichands ko bhi loot lenge...Good things they are so rich
So Anu and Armaan are also vampires... interesting.
Lets see what happens...
Loved it FizaSmile

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