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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged

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Sorry For the delay friends … was busy … since the past few days … I wanted to give you all a massive update & ASAP but could not as I got busy with my family matters  … now looks like I have to break this part …. At that stage which you don't want but I have to …. Please read it & give me your views …. Hope I could reach upto your expectations … hope u all like this update … once again sorry for the delay …

 

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Part 3:-

 

Girls I forgot to mention this in the first part …. As I wanted this whole story as an OS … but looks like this OS has become an SS … or might turn into a FF also …. Depending … on the story line ….

 

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Geet is neither pregnant nor committed to any one like maan … but she has a good friend by the name of Yash & her entire family lives in hoshiarpur & are very supportive to her …. When geet wanted to work in delhi they allowed her to come to delhi & work & stand up on her feet … as they know that  geet's friends yash & pinky live in delhi & can be of some help to her … they both live close by to geet's home ….

 

Yash is pinky's brother …. Yash too likes geet a lot …. yash feelings are more than that of a friend towards geet … & is waiting for the right moment to express his feelings to geet  … Geet likes yash but only as a friend … nothing more than that … as geet has feelings towards maan … but is unsure about her feelings towards maan … as he is committed … so she is kind of suppressing her feelings towards him …

 

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Maan now reaches geet's home … checks that geet's scooty is outside her home …. Confirms that geet is at home …. Therefore … Rings the door bell no one answers the door bell …. Maan calls geet's land line … geet is looking at the landline ring while crying … but does not answer it … maan is still calling her … hoping geet will answer it …. But no she does not answer it ….

 

Maan calls geet on her cell next … geet notices maan's name flashing on the screen …. She disconnects the call immediately as soon as she sees his name on it …

 

Maan is worried ,restless & feeling bad simultaneously …. He again calls her cell … she again disconnects it …

 

Maan again rings the door bell …. Still she does not answer it … maan is worried … thinks that if she does not open it the next time … he will break open the door & get in ….

 

Maan is ringing the door bell & knocks the door with full force simultaneously … hoping geet might come and open the door … no one answers the door even now … but as the door was not locked …(that's because geet after seeing the front page news  was so shocked that she does not lock it after closing the door & directly runs to her bed room )… the door opens slightly when maan knocks the door …

 

Maan – why didn't I try this way before … if I had knocked before …. the door would have opened long back …. Never mind … let me check where geet's room is …

 

Maan is checking the kitchen …. Does not find her … then he thinks that geet might be in her bedroom … so he walks towards another room … which he thinks is most probably geet's bedroom … geet is lying down in her bed & is crying inconsolably …. With her face buried in the pillow … and the newspaper clutched in her hand …

 

Maan knocks the door before he enters the room … geet gets up from her bed with eyes filled with tears after she hears the knock & turns & sees that maan is standing near the door … maan notices that there are tears in her eyes & thinks that she must be crying …

 

Maan – what's happening to me …. Why all this is happening to me … why is it that I can't see geet in this state … why am I worried for her … why is it … that I can't see her in pain or can't see tears in her eyes … is this love or … the reason for my restlessness is because of the pain what ever she is going through right now is because of me … or because of sameera … as she is my fiance … directly or indirectly I am responsible for geet's pain … is this the reason why I am feeling bad for her … only this … or some thing else ….

 

In the meanwhile Geet turns back again … wipes her tears & leaves the newspaper on the bed … again faces maan …. Geet is Controlling her tears …

 

[ mahi  BG starts … ]

 

Maan & geet's eyes meet  …. They both are now looking into each other's eyes … have an eye lock session … maan lost in her eyes … after couple of minutes … slowly maan's eyes looks down & he quickly turns his head away & is looking else where & geet too notices that her duppatta is missing … & turns side ways … geet is now searching for her duppatta with her eyes … while standing still ….

 

Maan …. While looking for the duppatta is stealing glances at her ….. Both of their eyes meet on & off … geet feeling shy & bending her eyes …. Maan also could not control himself as to why he is stealing glances at her … he himself does not know what is the reason for the strange behaviour of his … & also thinking that geet is still looking beautiful inspite of crying a lot ….

 

Geet notices that the duppatta is close to where maan is standing … he spots the duppatta & goes near it & grabs it & throws it over geet …. While … it covers her face like a ghunghat …

 

maan lost in geet again … imagining geet in dulhan wali libaz … after it falls over her head … Well he can't help it … as he is totally in love with her … all he needs is now a small signal ….  For him to blurt out the truth to her ….

 

Maan comes out of his reverie … geet takes the duppatta off her head & wraps it around her neck … Now both looking at each other … geet still has tears in her eyes … maan walking slowly towards geet …

 

[ mahi  BG stops ]

 

 

Geet – maan sir … aap yahan …

 

Maan – geet … haan …  main … wo …

 

Geet – why are you over here sir ? that too at your secretary's house at this hour …

 

Maan is near geet …. He is just a foot away from her ….

 

Maan – geet I wanted to check on how you are …

 

Geet – oh so you wanted to check on me … to check on me whether I am alive or dea ….(here geet wanted to say dead but could not complete it … )

 

maan acts quickly as soon as she was about to say the word dead to him … he keeps his fingers on her lips … does not allow her to finish that word …

 

Maan – chup bilkul chup geet … not a single word after that …

 

[ mahi  BG starts …]

 

maan & geet have eye lock … with geet's lips trembling at the touch of maan … after couple of minutes …. Geet takes off his finger from her lips …

 

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(scene here maan is pleading & geet is angry & in pain … while bechari geet is right in her anger & bechara maan is also right … )

 

Geet still has tears in her eyes …

 

Maan – geet … I have come to talk to you  ….

 

Geet – to talk to me … what do you want to talk to me …

 

Maan – geet … it's … about … it's about the article … geet …

 

Geet – article …

 

Maan – haan …. Geet … article …

 

Geet - but I don't want to talk to you in regards to anything thing …

 

geet turning back so that her back faces maan …. Maan makes her face him ….

                                  

Maan – please geet listen to me … I need to talk to you …  geet …

 

Geet – listen to you … sir …. what do you want me to listen … when there is nothing worthy to talk about …. Isn't it … maan sir ….

 

Tear drops falling off geet's eyes …. Maan wiping the tears off her face …. Both lost again ….

 

Maan – geet please don't cry geet … & it's not like what you are thinking geet …

 

Geet – oh … not like what I am thinking … then how is it …

 

Maan – please listen to me geet …

 

Geet – no … sir … I don't want to ….

 

Maan – geet you have to listen to me …

 

As geet was leaving from there … maan now grabbed geet by her shoulders  …. & is looking into her eyes ….

 

Geet – what should I listen & why should I listen …. & for whom should I listen ….

 

maan – you have to listen geet … you have to …

 

Geet is trying to free herself …. Maan raising his voice …

 

maan – for us …. Geet …. For us ….

 

Geet's struggle stopped for a second ….

 

Geet – for us …

 

Maan – yes geet … for us …

 

Geet – when did we both have became us …. maan sir … I think  you are forgetting that I am just your employee … only a secretary … who gets paid for executing her job perfectly … nothing more than that … isn't it ….

 

Tear drops again running down her cheeks again …. Maan wiping the tears off her face …. And again holding her intact ….

 

Maan – no geet no … please stop crying … I am begging you …

 

Geet again trying to free herself …

 

Geet -  please you stop it maan sir … & stop getting close to me …

 

Maan – geet … don't say that …

 

Geet – why shouldn't I ….

 

Tear drops again rolling off geet's cheeks …. Maan looking at her helplessly … as she asked him to not come close …maan thinking …. Whether to go close to her or not … wipe her tears or not …. But still holding her ….

 

Geet -  "I love my fiance deeply … geet is only a secretary … nothing more than that … " these were your words … isn't it … so please enlighten me … on …  when did you & me become us … & what do you mean by the word us & why am I being dragged into your matter … with no fault of mine …

 

Maan – geet … why aren't you not understanding this geet …. Please let me first finish what I wanted to talk to you … then we can talk everything one by one …

 

Geet  – what do you want to talk to me …. Mr. Maan Singh Khurana …

 

Maan – why are you making the matters complicated …. Geet …

 

Geet – Oh …. So … now I am the one who is making the matters complicated … & by the way … who started all this … me right …

 

Maan – geet please let me explain …

 

Geet – ok … go ahead …

 

Maan – geet what ever news came in the news paper …. It's neither me nor my words … I really don't have any clue about it … if I had known … nothing of that sort would have happened …. what ever happened …. Has happened without my knowledge ….

 

Geet – oh is it … the great maan singh khurana has no clue as to what's happening around him …. & how every thing came in news …. Now this is breaking news to me ….

 

Maan – geet believe me … that is the truth …

 

Geet's struggle started again …. Maan again trying to get a grip over her ….

 

Geet – leave me sir …

 

Maan – no geet …

 

Geet – so …. that is it … right …

 

Maan – means …

 

Geet – means … now that you are finished … you can leave now … maan sir …

 

Maan – geet it is not like that ….

 

Geet – not like that …

 

Maan – I am not yet finished geet …

 

While geet was trying to free her self from maan's grip … Maan was pressing geet towards himself … they both are very close to each other ... Tears running down her face …

 

Geet – please leave me sir …. You are hurting me …

 

Maan – no not until … I am done ….

 

Geet – what else is there maan sir … & why are you wasting your precious time over a mere secretary like me … your fiance will be worried that u came running over here … I think you need to be over there with her …

 

Geet finally is freed … as soon as maan listens fiance he frees  geet  …. Now geet is walking backwards … while maan is walking towards her ….

 

Maan – she's not here … she left to London …

 

Geet – oh …. That's why you are over here …. If she had not gone to London …. I think right now … you would be near her … explaining to her that there is nothing between you and me … isn't it … & I am just your secretary …. Nothing more than that ….

 

Geet is walking backwards & could not walk any more as she hits the wall … & finally maan pins her to the wall … & blocks her way with both of his hands ….

 

Maan – you think so …. Geet …. that if she was over here … I would be near her & not you ….you really think so …

 

Geet – what else should I think …

 

Maan – what else you should think …. Hmmm …. What else …. Don't you know …

 

Geet – don't I know … what am I supposed to know ….

 

Maan frustrated & shouting – can't you see it damn it …

 

Geet too shouts …– what am I supposed to see maan sir …. All I can see & understand is you are committed to her & as per your article …. "You both are very much in love with each other …. & I am being dragged into your life without my knowledge …. & by the way … what are you doing over here …. With your secretary …"

 

Maan – that is what you think ….

 

Geet – that is …. what it is …

 

Maan – can't you see anything else geet …

 

Geet – can't I see …. what ….

 

Maan – don't you see love in my eyes for you geet … don't you ….  

 

Geet – what ….

 

Maan – yes geet … you heard me right … I said love …

 

Maan – I love you geet …

 

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Wanted to continue … will continue …later …. Sorry for the delay in update was really caught up in some household works … & was busy cause of that …. Hopefully if time permits … will give you the next update shortly … possibly by tonight … hoping that I will keep up my promise … thank you every one for the encouraging comments you all have posted …. Will post a thank you note later on …

 

I am thanking you all for your wonderful comments … wanted to post a thank you note but thought … instead of that … thought of using that time in updating the SS ….

 

Hope u all liked this update …please let me know on how u all liked it …

 

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Edited by dewdropred - 25 January 2011 at 5:02am

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awsome update yaar...loved it //you stopped in such a place yaar... please do continue soon ...

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oh hima awesome dear....loved it to the core.....

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thanx yar...........great updateClap........... cant wait for next part.......

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awesome yaar!>............................
i just loved it!.........

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i want 2 kill u for stopping it at such a point
i was concentrating soooooo hard whn will he say n thn geets reaction
bt u ended it without her reaction
nw plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooonnnnnnnn

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mindblasting update....awwwww Maan confessed his feelings.........
update soon...wanna see how Geet is gonna react to his confession....

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too good

continue soonEmbarrassed

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