-Shanak SS- Banwra Mann Final Pg 16 - Page 13

Saaz awsome yaar....first i have to say petti was rocking....😆 and then loved nok-jhok-emotional-loving shanak......akki-boo were so sweet yaar.......loved it......all the lines were fantastic.........😊
miss these dialogues in RBO yaar-Dekhiye, mere khaandaan pe mat jaayiye and Dhaath!!!!!!! and girlphrand...loved the way u made use of it....
saaz ur amazing writer grt job dear.....👏👏👏
keep rocking..........😃

hi saaz

Awesome Saaz!  Edited by -SYS- - 13 years ago

loved it.......awesome dialoges....goradias ki bhi chutti ho jaye aise......plz zzz  saaz continue karo na......

Haye Saazy!

Again Saaz, you are just amazing!! As I said before you have a way with words and you express emotions sooo well. I loved angry Shaan and the way he started to pack up to go with Khanak. Just a beautiful, non confrontational way of facing the situation and not drawing it too long and making it worse. Wonderful!!:)) and Thanks!!

wow!!! dil garden garden ho gaya😊, very nice saaz...u deserve a BIG HUG🤗

Hv been seein a lot of jhalak lately, so as Remo sir wud say This is it!!

WOW!!!!

 

saaz super cute I was shocked when I was reading teen patiyan.

 

.but later in the next sentence u Mmntioned talwar a the first pati..😆😆😆

 

that was so cute yaar

 

 

very good.

 

.I am in love totally with this cute ShaNak  sigh kash aise shanak show mein bhi aathe tho kitna accha hoga😭

 

thanx a lot for ur pm  loved it..😃

Soooooooo cute.. !!