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Abhay-Piya FF: Unlocking the Past Ch. 8/Pg. 27 (Page 7)

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
@Priya
Thanks!
And, no worries. You'll be getting PM's from me! (:
 
@Sheena
Thaaank youuuu!
=D
And yes, watch out for the next part!

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by natashu

 
@Apoorva
 
LMAO.
You my buddy, are pure jokes! <3
Chp.1 was to get you thinking. Come on, I just can't give it away this early!
Now, you have to come back and read consequent chapters! *grins evilly*
 
LOL
 
And, yes, I'll make it longer next time! =P
 
Thaaaank you! <3
 
 
Hmph ! Like I said, you are an evil woman.
 
Update soon, Tashu ! The other one too !  

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged

~| | Unlocking the Past | |~

Chapter 2:

Siddhran's Place

Flopping down on the couch, Abhay finally let out a breath. Laying his head back, he then propped up his feet on the table in front, making himself more comfortable. He then waited. Finally frustrated, Abhay opened his eyes. The seat beside him was empty. Where'd Siddhran go?
 
"What in the world are you doing?" Abhay asked in amazement, as his eyes took in the sight of a very happy-looking Siddhran take control over the kitchen. Turning on the lights, he took an apron lying off to the side, tied it into place, and immediately got to work. "We could use some food," Siddhran replied, bustling about, as if events of the past few hours had simply escaped him.
 
"And, you said you were tired?"
 
"I still am tired. But, I believe I forgot to make an important addition. My stomach's making those noises. Sleep wouldn't dare come near me!"
 
Abhay laughed out loud. It was like Siddhran, to think of food after an ordeal like the one they'd just had. Although, it wasn't anything out of the ordinary. This was part of their job, dealing with low-lives; like the one who'd almost taken Garima's life. The mere thought sent shudders down his spine. Shoving aside his feelings, Abhay turned his focus towards his friend, who was still looking very busy in the kitchen, "Well, I'll be. I wouldn't dare miss this meal."
 
"Uh huh. It's ready. You can officially pig out." With that, Siddhran came out, carrying one plate in each hand. They'd barely gotten a bite when Abhay groaned.
 
"The Elders?" Siddhran asked casually.
 
"Yeah, this has got to wait," replied Abhay, indicating their late-night dinner, before disappearing into a swirl of orbs.
 
30 minutes later...
 
Siddhran, who'd finished eating, turned to the TV for some much-needed entertainment. Although his favourite show was on, his mind couldn't help but think of the late-night call by the Elders. The Elders being the powerful council of Whitelighters, advised magical beings alongside commanding the majority of Whitelighters themselves; only with one purpose in mind. To preserve the greater good. And, they did their job pretty well. Part of which, was to command Whitelighters, like Abhay and himself, to watch over and protect witches and future Whitelighters. So, the late-night call wasn't anything unusual. Their meetings with the Elders usually were to discuss something of great importance; messages for their charges, warning them from great threats. So, may be they'd wanted to discuss the whole 'Garima' thing.
 
Although, she was safe now, she'd come close to dying. All thanks to a particular Darklighter; the demonic counterparts to Whitelighters. They were increasing in number now, and so were their killings. This one had come after Garima; a future Whitelighter. But, Siddhran had been there, during the attack. Then, why hadn't they bothered to call him? Sighing, he stood up. After giving his body a good stretch, he got to work cleaning up the place. There wasn't much to clean, though. After ten minutes of that, he finally decided that he would go check for himself.
 
What's taking him so long?
 
As if to answer his question, he ran smack into Abhay himself.
 
"OW! Do you always have to orb in my face?!"
 
"Sorry! This house is small. And, you've got to give me space," Abhay replied with a weak smile.
 
"What's wrong?"
 
"Nothing. I have a new charge."
 
"What?!"
 
"You seem surprised."
 
"No, not really." After a pause, he added, "A witch?"
 
"Ditto."
 
"Oh, I see!" Siddhran was smiling that smile.
 
Not good.
 
"Sid, I don't know about you. But, I really am tired. So, if you don't mind-"
 
"No, I don't! You can go once you tell me who she is. Does she know?"
 
"That she's a witch?"
 
"Yeah, that."
 
"No, it's never that easy."
 
"Powers?"
 
"No clue."
 
Before Siddhran could ask him anymore questions, Abhay turned to leave. He really was exhausted. His meeting with the Elders had only added to it. It had been emotionally draining. Apprently, he wasn't going to train Garima anymore. She'd been re-assigned to someone else. He had a new charge now. A new responsibility.
 
Not bothering to change clothes, Abhay went straight to the very comfy-looking bed.
 
"Dude, what do I get, the friggin couch?" came Siddhran's voice from outside.
 
"Finders keepers, Sid!"
 
"Fine! No breakfast for you tomorrow! By the way, what's her name?"
 
"It's too late in the night. I can't even remember my own name!"
 
Abhay had lied. He knew her name alright.
 
With that in mind, he drifted off to sleep, her name on his lips.
 
Piya.
 
Piya Jaiswal.
 
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Hopefully, I answered some of your questions.
Do leave your comments!
And, thanks for all the encouragement! =D
 
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Edited by natashu - 23 January 2011 at 5:36pm

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
u get better and better!!! what is thiss??? LOL jk <3333 i love it...its freakin awesome!!

sid sounds sooo cuteee...and i already told u who he reminds me of lmao!
but goshh...a whitelighter!! thats freakin awesome!!!

i feel so special to be the first one to read these haha <333

love u much <3
hershi

ps: beautiful siggy of the ff!


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Ohh...so Abhay is a whitelighter...WOW!Smile
 
Thank god...I liked how you have changed the story unlike having the same old story where he is a vampireBig smile
 
I liked the interaction between Sid and Abhay...it was really funnyLOL
Now, Abhay has a new chargeTongue..hmm...piya jaiswalHeart...so now they will be soon meeting...excited about what their first meeting will be likeWink
 
Well, I am excited about reading the next part...hoping to see Piya soon!Smile
 
Great Job!Clap
 
 
 
 


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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
oohhh Tashuu! this is getting interesting! 
i love sid and abhay! lol
ahh Piya <3
i cant wait for what happens between them!!
ahh i cant wait for the next partt!

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Sweet! I begin to understand now...somewhat. Well written and intriguing. Keep it going Tashu. And I kinda like Siddhran...interesting guy. Am sure Piya will be dhansoo tooSmile!

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