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This content was originally posted by: kashndsel4evaAwesome update
Loved it loads
Can't wait 4 da next part
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
Thanks Sanya!
I am glad you liked my update!
This content was originally posted by: kashndsel4evaAwesome update
Loved it loads
Can't wait 4 da next part
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
This content was originally posted by: deepti_mohithmm 🤔 im confused too 😕 but im sure ull clear the confusion in the next part😉 😃..but it wasn't boring👎🏼 ..it was nothing different from ur usual way of writing ..i just hope ur alrite😊 it was really awesome⭐️
This content was originally posted by: deepti_mohit🤔 reading it again made me clear little bit 🤔 i think she is just going through a phase ...she is just shocked by the sudden marriage ..she does want to marry him but this was sudden ..so it is making her think again ..im sure shell get through it in some time ...she is rethinking as it just not her ...woh home maker type ki person nahi hai ...she has changed already but she is not just accepting the change so she is confused ...love changes people ...her falling in love with samrat has changed her a lot ...bas she is not realizing it ..aur bahut confuse hogayi hai aur uparse shaadi bahut jaldi ..they didn't even get to know each other much ...samrat ne bahut kuch bataya hai ..but gunjan ne abhi tak kuch bataya hi nahi ...they must try to get to know each other more ..make sure that happens 😉 warna shaadi ke baad problems hosakte hai 😊 ..jhagde n drama too😒 ...im sure ull clear the confusion of gunjan in the next update ..she will realize that her life is linked now with samrat ...but first update make me wala 😈 warna 🤔 ah i ll stop talking to u 😈 lol just kidding 😆..waise i hope i didn't bore u with my long bhashan ..im sure ull be happy that finally im commenting 😉 that too twice😛🤓..something's wrong with me...n thanx for th pm 🤗
Luv yaDEEPS🤗 <--- This is what I call youu!!!
This content was originally posted by: SM_317heyyy manji..🤗
awesomee update..d date scenes were lovelyy.😳yeahh this update was a bit confusing..😕bt im sure ul clear it in d upcoming updates..😳😃i hope gunjans confusion gets clear soon..n thisu pdate was nt boring..😡this ff has bcome really intsringg i knw thr l be some prbs..bt at d end sajan will be togethr .😉😳cont soon!😳luv yaSP..
This content was originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHTHi MANJARi ! Hey,What happened to U...?😲... Please,Get well soon and Please take a rest.😊
Finally,After a long time...I M commenting here.Ok...First I said all 'Routine' Comments😳...just like...What a Awesome Update...👏 👏 👏 Too Good Yaar...👏 Fabulous Part...👏 and all things...😆
But,True speaking...No Doubt,Update part is Good...but,I didn't enjoy it.I am not saying its boring and all...but,Its very confusing part...and I noticed 1 thing...Tumhaari sabhi FF/SS mein GUNJAN's character confused hai...She is not satisfied...and true speaking,Yeh character yahaan suit nahin kar raha...Its very confusing...and full story plot Confused sa lag raha hai...
Every character have own Character-Graph...usse maintain karna hota hai...its a Important part of Characterization...Sudden change..Character essence ko destroy karta hai. and,Honestly speaking, after reading this Update Mujhe yeh story beyond the Track lag rahi hai.
Sorry,If U feel hurt with my Reply...may B, I M wrong...B'coz, I don't know much more about your whole story Idea...My this opinion...only for this Particular Update.Sorry again..but,U know me naa...😉
Anyway,First please take a proper rest.Updates toh hote rahenge Yaar...😉😆
-S O H A M.
hey manji
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