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8th poem: TEARS (Page 2)

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sach me bahut accha tha luved it......Big smile

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such a nycc onee...lovee itttt...!!Smile
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I loved the Poem...describes our Akshi perfectly...ClapClap

and as everyone had said...i liked the line "App kyun nahi samajte...replies her Heart" the most...Thumbs Up
 
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Originally posted by gutky


Akshara's tears speak the unspoken,

As they bring out her purest emotions...

 

When intense pain tears her apart,

"Aap kyun nahi samajte" replies her heart?

It's an indication for inhibiting Natik's anger,

 And in turn makes him feel hyper and eager...

 

Tears also trickle down as overflowing joy,

When every time she's amazed with his pristine love...

It spills itself from the heart,

Which beams much more than the laughter coming from her heart...

 

However hard she may try to shake it off,

Emotional pain tugs hard at her...

Situations in her life always keep prying,

And tears pounces back onto her...

 

Strong emotions within her,

Find their way as tears...

Tears then in turn help letting go,

All her apprehensions and fears...

Hey Vini........Awesome poem buddyClapClapClapClapClapClap
each n every word is describing Akshi's emotions to the fullestSmileSmileSmile
2nd Stanza is d bestClapClapClap
hats off to u
 
Do write more


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loved itt yarrr.. awsome
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lovely as usual di..
bst part was aap w nai samajhte!!

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