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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
fab update
Geet was too good given a fit reply 2 everyfin sasha & tasha sed
Awww Maan was secretly watching Geet & laughing at ha comments
.Congrat on completing 100 pages di..

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged
wow that was awsome one yaar

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Dhamakedar update,n congrates on being ur senior member. Miss u till next update.

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwww..........geet is madly in love with maan.can't wait to see maan madly in love with geet...............please update soon

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:27am | IP Logged
shall i update today????? anybody interested???

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hey guysWink, this time i wrote this update just for all of u.....i dint want to make u all wait till thursday or friday....just hoping u all will like it. i dunno how it has come out, i have tried my best, trying to write in between studies.Smile well go ahead and read it.....ENJOY!!!



chapter 20

geet parks her car and enters the house only to see the whole family sitting in the hall in the tense mood. she knew they were worried abt her interview. she couldn't control and started laughing at them. everyone were startled by
her laugh and look towards the door to find geet laughing at them with joy. she walks upto them still smiling.

geet:
aap sab itne chup kyun ho??? kya hua???
brij:
geet, zyada hoshiyar banne ki zaroorath nahin hai. jaldi batha kya hua???
geet:
bhai aapko kya lagtha hai??? main itni kush hun, aapko phir bhi samj main nahin aaya???
veer:
yaani tujhe naukri milgayi???
geet:
haan papaji....
daarji:
yeh bahut achchi baath hai....
daadi:
main jaanthi thi ki hamari beti zaroor kaamyaab hogi....
rano:
haan maa, bilkul, geet kisise kam thodina hai.
simi(hugging geet):
cangrats geet, i am so happy for you.
tito:
di, treat kab dila rahi ho???
brij:
nalayak chup bait, hamesha sirf khaane ki baare main hi sochtha rhtha hai...
geet:
bhai rehene dijiyena.....i am so happy.

geet hugs brij and takes the blessings from her parents and grandparents. they all ask her abt how the interview 
went and abt the staff there etc etc, while rano brought sweets to all. they all had a good time with each other.
brij and veer excuse themselves to goto office, since they hadn't been to office waiting for geet. everyone else 
move towards there work and geet goes to her room, keeps down her bag and file on the table and sits on her 
bed. she takes her phone and calls to pari and heer and told them that she got the job and asked them to come 
home in the evening. geet decides to take rest for a while and goes to sleep.

meanwhile at KC, sasha is trying hard to come up with a plan so that maan trashes geet out before she joins to 
work. she decides to go talk to him. she knocks on his door,


maan:
come in.

sasha comes in and stands infront of maan. maan looks at her and asks

maan:
kuch kaam tha sasha???
sasha:
haan Mk woh....woh...
maan:
come to the point sasha, mere paas tumhari woh-woh keliye time nahin hai.
sasha:
mk main aapse yeh poochna chahthi thi ki aapne uss ladki ko kyun appoint kiya???

maan angry by her qn, shoots a serious look at her, gets up from his chair and come and stands infront of her.

maan:
sasha, iss company ki CEO kaun hai??
sasha(feeling unconfortable by his actions):
aap hai MK.
maan:
tumhe yahan naukri kisne di???
sasha:
aapne Mk
maan:
yeh office kaun chalatha hai???
sasha:
aap MK
maan:
saare staff ko kisne appoint ki hai???
sasha:
aapne Mk
maan:
sabko salary kaun detha hai???
sasha:
aap MK
maan:
kya iska matlab yeh hai ki tum meri boss aur main tumhari company main kaam kartha hun??/
sasha:
nahin MK, maine aisa nahi kahan...(maan stops her with his hand and continues)
maan:
tho sasha, tum yeh achchi tareeke se samajhlo ki main iss company ka malik hun aur tum ek employee. apna 
had main rehna seekho. tumhaari himmath kaise hui ki tum mujhse sawaal karo??? aaj thak kisine MAAN SINGH 
KHURANA se sawaal nahin kiya hai, samjhi tum??? aur meri jho marzi main aaye woh main karunga. maine uss
ladki ko hire kiya hai tho woh bhi apni marzi se, tumhe iss baare main itna kyun interest hai??? tumhaara jitna kaam hai, usse matlab rakho, main apne kaam main dhakal andaazi har kis bardaasht nahin kar saktha. aur GEET, 
tumhaari under nahi, meri saath kaam karegi. samjhi tum??? now start walking and get back to ur work, NOW!!!

sasha:
yes MK!!!
maan:
aur haan agli baar mujhse kuch bhi kehne se pehle sau baar soch lena. now leave!!!

sasha was shocked and all the blood from her face was drowned out. she knew maan was arrogant and very strict 
but she had never hoped to see him like this. she had maintained a good image infront of him, now it had all come
to vain. she just walked to the restroom to freshen up. adi and the others just laughed at her state while other 
staff was terrified of maan's anger. nobody dares qn MSK!!! everyone continues with there work, they dint want 
maan to shout on them as well.

at HM:

it's 4.30pm and geet was still asleep. pari and heer tip toe inside her room likes cats, they go and sit beside geet's 
sleeping figure. pari winks at heer and heer nods. pari goes near geet's ear ans at one go shouts "GEET". geet who was in her dreamland, on hearing pari's shout, get's up in shock., with big eyes lokking here and there only to find pari and heer laughing at her. geet gets angry at them,

geet:
aaj tho main tum logon ko chodungi nahin.

they both run around the room with geet behind them. finally geet corners both of them and takes the water jug 
from the table and gives a wicked smile to hem.

pari:
geet, aisa math karo. humaare kapde geele ho jaayenge.
heer:
haan geet, we are sry abt what we did, bas paani math phekna.
geet:
noways, keep ur sry to yourselves. 1 2 3.......


by the time geet could finish her count, pari and heer push her and water falls completely on geet and she falls 
down. pari and heer have hefthy laugh at her state and shows a thumbs down to her. geet gets even more angry 
and races behind them. they run thru the house, occasionally budging others and finally reach the garden. they play around for a while until geet gets holds onto the water pipe. pari and heer couldnt help now but to plead to 
geet. they pleaded to her down unto their knees. geet watched them with fantasy and finally, starts the water 
onto them. they both get completely wet in a matter of mins while screaming to geet to stop it. finally they both 
scream "geet" , geet runs leaving the pipe behing. heer takes the pipe and pari runs behind her geet. pari catches 
geet and heer throws water on her until she was completely wet like them. finally they all sit down wet, tired and 
annoyed. they look at each other with a serious looks and finally break out laughing loudly making fun of each 
other's condition. they were enjoying themselves and continued to play around....


precap: SURPRISE SURPRISE!!!!!Wink


link to chapter 21

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1595304&TPN=110


so how was it guys??? hmm well i personally dont know how it has come out, so u know what to do right??? comment and hit the like button as i already said, a lot of hardwork goes into writing an update. its no easy job and i know u ppl understand....so its time for payback thru ur comments and likes. dont be cunjous k???LOL


if u want me to pm u, plz add me as ur buddy, thanksSmile



Edited by samaira39 - 12 March 2011 at 11:21pm

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Luvd it wen Maan shouted at sasha
N she kept replying *aap MK*
Awww loved the water fite between Geet,heer & pari
Can't w8 4 Geets first day at KC
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM


Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 07 March 2011 at 9:01am

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Great part!!
Thanks for the pm,
continue soon

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