Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

||OS|| Anticipation

ash08 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged

Maan knew she was alone in the house.  He and Geet had been friends for ages. They had grown up together. But the myriad of feelings that started a few days ago had put their friendship to test. He had to talk to her.


Hearing a sound in the upstairs room, he moved towards her. Geet was standing on the third step of the ladder, cleaning the books that she had collected over the years. Hearing a sound, she turned back, looked over her shoulder and found Maan in the doorway.

He waited, but rather than blistering him with her tongue as was usually the case, she just looked through him, then turned back to work.


That, he thought, was a very dire sign indeed.


"I want to talk to you," he began.


"I have no time for chatting", she replied.


"I need to talk to you."


"I've nothing to say to you, Maan, and as I value the friendship we've had all our lives, I'll ask you to leave me be for now."


Dire indeed, he thought as a tongue of panic licked the inside of his throat. "I want to apologise to you." She shifted on the ladder again, gave him her back and went back to work.


The woman brought out the worst in him, was all Maan could think as he gripped her by the hips and lifted her down from the ladder. She came around swinging, and though he'd expected no less, he didn't dodge the blow. Not after he'd caught the sheen of tears in her eyes.


"I'm sorry." Panic was more than a sly lick now. It simply coated this throat. "Don't cry. I can't stand it."


"I'm not crying." She'd let the tears burn her eyes out of her head before she let a single one fall in his presence. "I've asked you to leave me be. Since you won't, I'll leave you."


She strode to the door, wrenched at the knob, then simply gaped in shock. "You locked the door!" She whirled back. "Have you lost your mind?"


"I know you – so I knew you wouldn't listen. Now you have to."


"You say our friendship matters to you. It matters to me as well. It matters a great deal to me. You matter to me, Geet."


"Is that why you treated me like some tramp last night?"


Her voice broke, alarming him, so he bore down. "I suppose it was, yes. It's not a regular thing, after all, for me to see you looking that way."


Frustration had her throwing up her hands. "What way?"


"Lovely." He saw her eyes go round in shock, and took advantage of the moment to step a little closer. "You looked so polished up and female."

"I am female, for God's sake."


"I know it, but you don't usually trouble to make it an issue."


"Why should it be?" she demanded. "Just because I know how to hammer a nail or fix a pipe, I am not allowed to be a woman as well? Wearing a dress and some lipstick makes me a tramp?"


"No, it makes me a fool for letting you think I meant that. Clumsy, foolish and spiteful. And I'm sorry for that."


When she said nothing, he stuck his hands in his pockets, pulled them out again. Best, he told himself, to get it all out and over. "The truth of it is, I was thinking of you, thinking about things when you walked in, looking the way you did and about to go off with another man. I was jealous. I didn't realize it at the time, didn't want to admit it later after my mind had cleared a bit. I've never been jealous before. I can't say I cared for it."


She'd calmed down enough to consider. "I didn't like it much myself."


Maan stopped, angled his head. For every step he took she took one in evasion. "Why is it Geet, that when I come toward you now, you back away? Aren't you the one who started it all?"


"Yes, I did, but I've had time to reconsider. Just keep your distance will you, while I'm mulling it over," she demanded when she caught the dark male amusement in his eyes. Not an expression to settle a woman's nerves. "We have been friends a long time, and I don't want to lose that part of my life. If we'd acted when I first mentioned sex, if you'd just grinned and said, 'Well, Geet, what a fine idea, let's go up to bed,'  it would've been fine all around. We'd have enjoyed ourselves, kept it simple, and parted friends as always. But now it's stopped being an impulsive sort of thing and it's complicated."


He solved the problem of keeping her still by reaching out, planting his palm on the wall just above her head. Before she could shift, he planted the other and caged her in. "You've a habit of acting on impulse, and I'm one for pondering over things. You move fast and I move slow."


Her blood was beginning to hum. But pride kept her in place now, as sure as his arms. "God, Maan, a glacier moves with more speed than you."


"But I get where I'm going just the same, don't I? I'm thinking, Geet, that weighing impulse and consideration, speed and caution, we can still meet somewhere in the middle of things."


"It's too….. sticky now."


"Your heart's pounding," he murmured as he eased closer. "I can almost hear it." Watching her, he laid his hand between her breasts. Awareness snapped into her eyes, breath trembled between her lips, then drew in, soft and sharp when he let his fingers spread. "Now I can feel it. I've wanted to touch you."


Her knees wanted to buckle. "You'd never have thought of it if I hadn't mentioned it."


"Sure and I can't say I mind it being your idea, as I'm thinking of it now." He lowered his head to nip lightly at her bottom lip.  "And I am finding it hard to think of much else. When I came up here today…." He shifted his head so his lips skimmed up along her jaw. "I thought I'd apologise, make things as right as I could between us. But now I want to touch you." "I want to taste you."


And finally, finally covered her mouth with his.


Oh, God, the man had the most magical of mouths.


When he stopped her breath was coming hard and fast and making her dizzy.


His chuckle was muffled against her skin, skin that was soft as sun-warmed silk. "Somewhere in the middle, Geet, I want you." He felt her shiver as his mouth found hers again. "But I've a mind to drive us both a bit crazy before I have you under me."




"Because it is more enjoyable that way. Do you like when I do this?" She drew in her breath in three short gasps when he feathered his fingers just under her shirt so the backs of them rubbed the curve of her breast. "I see you do. Your eyes are blurry."


"I'm half blind. To hell with a room, we'll just finish this right here."


But when she locked her arms around his neck, he laughed and swung her in a circle.  "Oh no, we won't. I won't short myself or you of the pleasure."


"It doesn't seem like middle ground from where I'm standing. Its leaning heavily towards you way of things."


"Maybe, but you will thank me for it when we're done." And he set her on her feet.


"Frustrating, but fair." She replied at last.


He took her hand, held it. Then, just to see her reaction, brought it to his lips to nuzzle.


Her mouth fell open, delighting him into a rolling laugh.


"Geet Handa, I believe you're in for a few surprises along the way." Plucking the key from his pocket, he turned towards the door and chuckled. "And I'm sure you will enjoy it."

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Loved it!Embarrassed I am not so into FF but never misses a chance to read ur OSEmbarrassed Its gripping, passionate and smooth flowingSmile Keep it up Ash!Clap

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Ash it's very well written Clap and might I add, quite hot  EmbarrassedLOL

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Ash - the idea is good..... execution even better...... Big smile

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Loved it!Embarrassed

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 12:00am | IP Logged
hot hot hot
and very well written

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged
ash, it's awesome Embarrassed i love your OS's ! Keep writing!

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged

Loved it!!!!

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