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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
omg that was sososo darn sweet! and she died...but their gradual love story was so darn cute.

You write wonderfully, so I'm totally looking forward to reading more by you.

Cheers!
~Naina


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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
OmgStern Smile Do you have any idea how long it's been since I've read anything on Prem-Heer? As soon as I saw your PM I rushed over hereBig smile
 
I loved it! All the flashbacks and how it led to the end. It was just...wow.
 
And I agree with Rinku. Write more! 

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
omg after long time !Hug
we get a One-shot frm u garima
how ya beenHug
omg tht was beautifully written
love the flashbackBlushing
aah u killed heer...
hope to see more of one-shot frm u now...

loved it...

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
awesome update
i loved it
update the next part soon

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
It was a Fab...beautifully written.
The story line was great...sad that Heer died.
All in all...it was a great OS....u should really write more on Premeer...ur  very talented wrter.

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
THis is beautiful one shot
I alwyas like the childhood luvstories
That is one of them
but at the end feel little sad
hope u rite more now and not take along leave again
I want to read ur shots and FF
Bcoz u r really good writer
Whenever u update next time PM me
 
 

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ~Rinki~

GARIII! :D RINKU! :D :D Hug

Dude, you have to make this into a FF, if not, at least a SS, you do know that right? Aww! So sweet! lol I wish I could but I have no idea how to continue it Confused  but no worries, I'll definitely write more OS/SS! =]
I have an intense dislike for Heer, if you didn't know. Now you do. But I liked their chemistry, innocence and cuteness in this, it was superb. Awww! Thanks again! Embarrassed LOL! Wait, you really don't like Heer or are you being sarcastic? :P LOL
You HAVE to write more, <3 WILL DO! Big smile
ASAP okay? Got it! Wink
Love yaa, Love you Rinki! Thanks for the comment! It really means a lot! Embarrassed Thank you so much! :)
 - Rinki

Originally posted by Tas17

awesome update Garima
Awww....friendship to love....the lines were just so sweet. Aww! thanks Tasneem! :) 
I'd been going thru so much of stress the whole day....u brought a big smile on my face dear....thanx. I'm glad I brought a smile to your face! means alot! Thanks again! =] Hug
Update the next part soon.

- Tasneem


Originally posted by Naina2127

omg that was sososo darn sweet! and she died...but their gradual love story was so darn cute. Hey Naina! aww glad you liked the story! :) haha it was just a random idea, don't worry next time it'll be a happy one! Wink LOL

You write wonderfully, so I'm totally looking forward to reading more by you. Aww! Thank you so much! that's really sweet of you! I'll definitely write soon! =] Embarrassed

Cheers!
~Naina

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Ravjot-

OmgStern Smile Do you have any idea how long it's been since I've read anything on Prem-Heer? As soon as I saw your PM I rushed over hereBig smile OMG RAVS! haha, dude I know right? It's been a longg time since I've written something on Premeer, feels great! Big smile LOL Aww, and I'm glad to be seeing your comment after soo many days! <3 Reminds me of the old days when we all used to comment on eachother's FF's/SS/OS! Embarrassed
 
I loved it! All the flashbacks and how it led to the end. It was just...wow. Thank youu! hehe so sweet! :) 
 
And I agree with Rinku. Write more! I will for sure! Embarrassed Love you! Hug


Originally posted by -Pooji-

omg after long time !Hug
we get a One-shot frm u garima
how ya beenHug
omg tht was beautifully written
love the flashbackBlushing
aah u killed heer...
hope to see more of one-shot frm u now...

loved it...


Hey Pooji! I knoww! Long time no talk! haha I'm doing great, how about you? :) Hehe, yeahh I killed Heer :P but next time it'll be a happy one! Thanks again! Embarrassed


Originally posted by anuu2010

awesome update
i loved it
update the next part soon

Thank you so much! :) I'm actually not continuing this since it was just a one shot, but I'll definitely write more! Embarrassed

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