Originally posted by HIPHOP50
Here guys tell me what you think of this as after marriage scene...sorry for interrupting convo.
Geet slowly wakes up and rolls toward maan but the bed is empty and cold. Geet quickly sits up and looks around the room for any sign of maan. Her glance falls upon the pillow where there is a folded sheet of paper with a red rose on top of it. Geet slowly leans forward, picks up the rose and smells it with a small smile playing around her lips. She picks the folded sheet of paper and smiles shyly as she opens it.
"Gone to work. Have dinner ready, Maan"
Geet blinks and reads it again. The words are still the same. Geet can feel her anger building. All signs of shyness have now vanished. Geet starts muttering to herself "Who does he think he is........Have dinner ready.....ill give him dinner. Geet could feel her anger building. She flung the note and bedcovers to one side and climbed out of bed.
She held onto the rose.
Its not the roses fault if Maan is an idiot she thought. He could have woken me but NO! this MSK why is he going to do that. No he does as he pleases and on top of that gives orders.. have my dinner ready!
Geet quickly showered and started to get dressed. She was still angry as she glanced at the bed and caught a glimpse of the piece of paper. " Have dinner ready" she mummbled. " Don't you worry MSK, I'll have dinner ready.....Cockroach soup! thats what ill cook, huh" Geet continued to mutter all sorts of names and dishes she would serve MSK.
As Geet finished applying her lipstick, she felt a shiver down her back. She knew without turning around who was behind her, remembering the note, she carried on applying her lipstick completely ignoring Maan.
She felt maan walk up slowly behind her but before he could reach her she swung to one side out of his grasp and walked towards the wardrobe.
She glanced over her shoulder at Maan and said tartly " What are you doing here aren't you supposed to be at work, its not dinner time yet and i haven't had time to follow your orders or maybe you've forgotten an order and come back to give me that". She turned back to the wardrobe and missed the naughty smile on maans face.
" No Geet i have came to pick up a file, thats all". Maan said oh so softly and seriously , as he again approached Geet slowly, his intense gaze capturing Geet. Geet could'nt move away she tried to make her feet obey but maans gaze rooted her to the spot.
Maan slowly reached out to put his hands on Geets waist "whats up mishti" asked maan softly.
Geet blinked and remembered the note. Geet slapped his hand away.
"whats wrong, ill tell you whats wrong" Geet tried to move to one side but Maan blocked her. Geet moved to the other side quickly, caught her foot on the rug causing her to lose her balance and fall towards maan. Maan caught Geet but the force of the momentum caused maan to also lose his balance. Both fell to the floor with Maan taking the weight of the fall and Geet collapsing on top of him. Maan closed his eyes as he caught his breath. "Maan, Maan, are you ok?" asked Geet as she caressed Maans cheek, head and neck.
Maan kept his eyes closed enjoying the caresses and feel of Geet as she lay on top of him, her earlier anger forgotten in her concern.
"Maan...... Maan, open your eyes are you ok?, please Maan". Pleaded Geet.
Maan opened his eyes slowly and could no longer hide his smile. " Geet you don't need to find excuses to touch me. I'm yours to touch whenever you want" whispered Maan, as he slowly ran his finger down Geets cheek.
Upon seeing the smile and teasing light in Maans eyes, Geet realised he was pretending to be hurt.
Her earlier anger returned, She thumped his chest and said so you were pretending...you are always making a fool of me" Geet pushed against Maans chest to get up but maan quickly put his arrms around her waist to hold her in place.
"Let me go Maan, I'm really cross with you" said Geet. as she pushed again on his chest. "first you don't wake me when you leave for work, then leaveorders! to cook you dinner and now you're making a fool of me" she pushed harder to get up but Maan just continued to gaze at Geet intently.
Geet pushed again on maans chest, "let me go Maan". Quick as a flash, using a tai manoeuvre Maan had Geet on her back with her hands pinned above her head. Geet stared up at him dazedly.Her body was slowly coming alive. Geet could barely breath as Maans fingers slowly stroked from her forehead over her eyes pausing at her lips. Maan whispered "why am i going to let you go when i got you where i want"
Wow,nice. I could actually picture the note and geet's reaction to it perfectly.