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a poem on ArSh-until i met you....

DaShInG_DeViL IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 February 2010
Posts: 3582

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged

hi r u all?...i wrote a poem on arsh. This is the first time i have written a poem...i myself is not a fan of poetry these are just random whole physics lecture was free so decided to use my some of my brain....and here is the result enjoy.

Shilpa's POV

                                   UNTIL I MET YOU


                              I was all alone

                                    until I met you...

                              was strong and could stand alone

                                    until I met you...

                              I felt the need of no one by my side

                                    until you came and stood by my side

                              I felt i was strong enough

                                    until you came and became my weakness

                              I felt that I can walk alone on any path alone

                                    until my path betrayed me and lead me to you


                              But after the day when you came along

                              I was walking on the beach alone

                              I felt that the need not to be alone

                              I felt the need to have someone by my side

                              I felt that I was not strong enough

                              To fight with the game of love

                              And then as I raised my eye

                              I saw you with your bright smile

                              As it stretched upon my face too

                              I realized all my needs vanish

                              When you took my hand into your's

                              And walked with me across the shore 

                              I thought that love didn't exist

                                     until you became my reason to live

                              I was all alone

                                     until I met you....


P.S:so guys how was it??? good bad?...plz do comment...and hit the will really inspire me and help me improve..

thanks Big smile      

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-wild- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 13 September 2010
Posts: 3016

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
hey awsome yaar
 i really like this kind of peoms u have written
well do write more
love u

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MeetPremeer IF-Rockerz

Joined: 16 November 2009
Posts: 5283

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
awesome dear
i myself am not a big fan of poetry
but just loved urs

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KaSh_luv IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 23 July 2008
Posts: 17688

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
wow loved da's amazing!
n it's totally ArShfied!

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felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 05 November 2007
Posts: 44357

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
amazing poem
loved it
thanks 4 da pm
krazy4kash Goldie

Joined: 18 November 2008
Posts: 1632

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:25pm | IP Logged

tht was really sweeetttt.........................i wish i feel the same thing for some1.............g8 work

anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 12 February 2010
Posts: 10172

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged

sooo amazing,...

beautifully written...

gr88 job dear......

thnx for the pm.........

KaSh-Maneet-Fan IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 December 2009
Posts: 22539

Posted: 18 January 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
beautiful poem
loved it
thanks 4 sharing
thanks 4 da pm

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